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annanya

@zenia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#471

very nice update...

keep gng frnd...

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Sugh...

@Innocent_eyes

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#472

hey...nice update 👏 👏 ...although not expecting it so soon 😛 😛 😛
good to see naina is fine now...oh raj was so worried abt hr
ab ye nair n lala phr sai strt hogai...bechari naina...kisi ko bta bhi nahi rhi..
luv the convo between aalekh n nania 👏 ...aalekh is really sensible.. 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 ...
whn keerti force her to have her juice...was a cute one..😊
update soon...
take care...

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#473

Awww.. this update was brilliant!! Loved Naina and Alekh's conversation.😭. I hope Raj and Abhi find out about Maj Mucchad Nair and Lala's plans and expose them😳.. And there is no more confusion between Raj and Naina.. 😍

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#474

wonderful update...👏 👏 👏

lagta hai doc sudhar rahi hai...itni fast fast jo update karr rahi hai... lagta hai ye Diwali kafi khaash tha...tere dimag ki sari batti jo jall gayi...😆 😆 😆

vaise bhi tujhe pata hai ke...tere iss fic se mujhe kai sari ummedain lagi hui hai...kisi se shart lagi hui hai yaar...yaad hai na...😉 😉 😉

Raj kafi worried tha...kyoun ke wahan Naina Hospital me akeli thi...!!! obviously yaar...aisi situation me raj toh darega hi na...abhi abhi tune Naina ko goli jo maari thi...

khair raj nahi aaya...par Abhi n Nandini aa gaye...!!! aur Nandini ne bhi kafi pyar se baat ki Naina se...matlab ki jalan-walan nahi hai yaha par...!!! tune Bornol ka ishtemal pahle se hi karr diya...!!!! achha hai...waise bhi RN ke bich...tishra sahi nahi lagta kabhi bhi...😛

ab dono muchhad...matlab ki Lala aur Nair...naina ko dara rahe hain...!!! saalon ki batti agar gull na karrwayi raj ne na toh Lolita ma'am ka naam badal dena...😆!!! bass raj ko pata chalni chahiye...!!! par lagta hai ki protege apne mentor se highly inspired hain...tabhi her baat ko ander chupa rahi hai...😛!!! raj ko pata chalega na...toh iss ki achhe se class lega... aur agar aisa kuch hua...toh sachhi me kafi maza aayega...😛!!! par pata nahi tere dimag me kya shot chal raha hai...

arey apun toh batana hi bhul gaya...!!! naina ka wo ronewala scene...aur uss par raj ka action & reaction...dono...zabardast the...👏 👏 👏

Naina aur Alekh ka scene bhi baht badhiya tha...!!! naina sirf Raj ke liye imp nahi hai...Alekh ke liye bhi hai...aur Alekh...hamesha naina ki baht care karrta hai...!!! par sahi hai ki Alekh ne kuch BHEJA toh diya naina ke dimagless dimag me...😛

sahi hai ki naina...suruwat me kafi selfish behave karr rahi thi...aur sirf isi wajah se dono ne baht kuch suffer kiya...!!! par abhi tak Naina iss guilt se bahar nahi aa payi...!!! sayad iss me raj uss ki thodi help karr de...😃

Naina ko jaldi thik hona padega...warna raj ka khayal koun rakhega...!!! see...raj bhi yehi keh raha tha...!!! juice ka scene bhi mast tha...!!! naina aur Raj dono hi ek point par agree karrte the...par keerti ne dono ko sahi doze de diya...😛

next part...jaldi chahiye...aur main koi req nahi karr rahi...😃

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tune pucha tha na ke hospital ke 3rd floor ka raaz kya hai...toh...raaz yeh hai ki...wahan Mrs Sheetal Biswas...baithi hui thi...😆

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#475

wow superfast speed of the updates😆👏👏

nice update mana😊😊

all were so shocked after realizing that naina was alone in the hospital😲😲 more than others raj was fearing that something bad can happen again after that attack but as raj was not allowed to go atleast nandini and abhimanyu went to the hospital which was a relief for all of them

and major nair ye sab kiya dhara unhi ka hai un dono ki jeeps puncture kar di aur hospital mein naina ko daraye bhi😡😡 ab naina kya karegi😕😕😕

kitn khayal rakh raj ne hospital mein naina ka😳😳😳 naian aur baaki sab bhi is problem mein jaldi bahar aa jayen 😊😊

sorry jaldi mein hun isliye chhota sa comment kiya till then

bye and

takecare 😊and ya contiunue soon😆 😉

shreya😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#476

Hey Mana dear sorry for being late once again.
Great update, 👏 👏 👏 the previous one
Raj ne sahi socha tha ki shayad ab time aa hi gaya hai ki us ko Naina ko apna vasta de kar vapas bulana hi padega.
Raj ka gussa obvious tha ki jab Raj un sab pareshaaniyon me tha tab Naina hi thi jis ki will power ne vo bhi possible kar dikhaya jo itna mushkil tha to ab Naina Raj ko chod k jaane ki soch bhi kaise sakti hai.😔 😔 😔
Naina ko to respond karna hi tha na jab us k Captain sir us ko bula rahe the aur jab Raj ne ye keh diya ki agar Naina ko kuch hua to he will kill himself tab to shayad Naina ko bhi ab vapas aana tha apne pyaar ka saboot dene.😍 😍 😍
Raj itna gussa tha Naina se ki us ko hosh aane k baad us ne sab se baad me baat ki us se, all people were too emotional there. 😭 😭 😭
Akash ka rona Naina k liye aur baaki sab ka Naina ko daatna really shows that how much they care and love their Naina.😕 😕 😕
Again the best part no doubt were our RN jinhone na kehte hue bhi unki aakhein to ab sab keh hi deti hai.😍 😍 😍
Keerti bhi na batao chup chup k apne RN ki baatein sun rahi thi but koi fayda nahi hua koi kyounki Raj itne asaani se to love confession karega nahi vo bhi Naina ki aise halat me.😆 😆 😆
Ye rahi mudde waali baat aise to Raj kisi ki baat maanta nahi rest karne ki par jab Naina ne kaha aur promise liya to kya kare ab janab k pass koi option nahi tha Naina ki baat na maanane ka.😉 😉 😉
Bus yaar kisi tarah se bhi is Nandini ko hatao beech me se i can't tolerate her around Raj or Naina.
😡 😡 😡

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#477

Once again i am here with reply on next part of the fic.😉 😉 😉
Good update 👏 👏 👏
Sab kuch accha tha is update me sivaay Naina ko threat karne k portion k aur Naina ka bekar ka logic dena ki vo Raj ki zindagi me kyoun nahi reh sakti hai.
Finally Raj ne Keerti ko rok hi liya, jo Keerti kisi k kehne pe nahi ruk rahi thi vo Raj ko kaise mana bhi kar paati kyounki sach to ye hi hai ki us k Veer ko us k support ki jaroorat hai.
Raj ab relaxed hai kuch had tak aur ye lo shaitaan ka naam liya Shaitaan hazir, Abhi bhi saath aa gaya 😆 😆 😆 but seriously yaar is Nandini ka kuch karo, i don't want her 😡 😡 😡
Abhi to yahan tha par Naina k pass kaun tha to us ka mauke ka fayda utha kar Naina ko threat bhi kiya gaya ki agar us ne apna muh bund nahi rakha to Raj ki life will be in danger.😔 😔 😔
Naina is really scared, even Raj couldn't sense it. 😳 😳 😳
Naina doesn't want to loose the one and only one person she has in her life now to whom she loves a lot.🤔 🤔 🤔
Par mujhe ek baat bahut buri lagi ki Naina ko aisa kyoun laga ki ab hisab barabar ho gaya? 😒 😒 😒
Vo log bahut dangerous hain aur kabhi bhi kuch bhi kar sakte hain. 😔 😔 😔
I hated Alekh and Naina's emotional convo, ek to vo bahut senti tha ki mai bhi senti ho gayi 😭 😭 😭 aur doosra mujhe Naina ka Raj se door rehne ka koi bhi point logical nahi laga jo ki kabhi lag bhi nahi sakta.🥱 🥱 🥱
Ye to sahi hai ki Naina ka luck us k saath kaafi unfair raha hai but i am sure aisa is baar nahi hoga kyounki ab Raj us k saath hai.😃 😃 😃
Mai nahi jaanti mujhe RN jaldi se saath chahiye bus. 😉 😉 😉
Try to update asap.

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#478

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory
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Nisha...ek train pehle hi choot chuki hai...dusri chutne waali hai...berth toh reserve kar liya hai...aake kab baithogi??😛

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever
oh ho..oh ho..oh ho ho oh...yaar ye to gazab ho gaya...itni jaldi ek aur update?????😲 ek baar to maine socha ki pm bina padhe hi delete kar deti hun...shayad ye last diwali waali update ka pm hai jo ud priya ne kiya tha...fir maine socha chodo ek baar check kar leti hun...aur dekho mera to jackpot lag gaya😃...yaar tabiyat to theek hai na?????😉 ha ha ha 😆 luvd...luvvd n luvvvd ur reaction dear ...😛😛 woh kya hai na...achchi bachchi pratiyogita mein hissa liya hai...😛toh jaldi update karne ki koshish karke competition mein rehna chahti hu 😉...par yeh sab main tujhe kyun bata rahi hu??? tu toh in chizo se kosooo door hai ! pata nahi kab update karegi??? Ab koi miracle hi Rajeev ki film hit aur AFYS ka update kara sakta hai...😛😆

mast mast mast update tha yaar👏...loved raj-naina scenes..sach mein ye fic padh ke main khush ho jaati hun...raj aur naina ke jaise scenes main hamesha se dekhna chahti thi vo saare yahana mil jaate hain😳...awww...thank uuu sooo much !!! sachchi muchchi mein thanks !!! 😃

" Kya baat hai Sir, aap kuch pareshaan lag rahe ho?"
" Huh? Nahi...mujhe toh khush hona chahiye na? Tumhe goli lagi, tum yaha hospital mein ho aur main pareshaan hoon? Kuch atapata sa lag raha hai, nahi?", he asked sarcastically.
hhahaahahahaa...i loved this...i was actually imagining raj saying all this...yaar kaash ye sach mein dekhne ko bhi milta😳... chod yaar...main bhi yahi sochti hu...phir sochti hu, dekh nahi sakte toh kya? padh toh sakte hai...😊

itni acchi update mein itna daraa kyun diya???😡😡 vo naina ko kaun dhamkaane aaya tha??? aur naina ne raj ko kyun nhn bataya??? hey bhagwan ab iss wajah se koi aur problem na ho jaaye😭...Museebat nahi aayegi toh apne hero ko hero kaun bolega? 😛

loved the last bit...juice scene to be precise...haaye kitna cute scene tha...end mein jab keerti ne kaha ki naina ke juice na peene se raj theek nhn hoga aur naina ne vo juice pi liya ...vo to sixer tha...loved it completely👏...Thanks again dear...😊

hmm ab jab mera comment ho gaya hai to meri ek baat suno...yaar kyun mujhe complex de rahe to tum sab mil ke???😆kal priya ne ud kiya aaj tune aur vertika ne update ki baarish ki...sach mein to sharam se bheeg rahi hun...kahin mujhe pneumonia na ho jaaye😭...Hailaaa !!! sachchi mein sharam aarahi hai??? hey bhagguuu !! mere toh vaare nyaare hogaye yeh sunke...chalo...ek umeed ki kiran nazar aarahi hai...😛

but its ok..meri fikar bilkul mat karna..aur ud karte raho saare mil ke😆😆...iss beech agar mere khaali dimaag mein kuch idea aaya to main bhi ek update kar dungi😉...yeh lo... umeed ki kiran dikhi bhi aur bujh bhi gayi...😆

abhi ke liye byeee...take care😊 bubbyeee dear...u too tc ! and thanks for a loveeely comment !

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

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Posted: 13 years ago

#480

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit
Hi Mana Hi suhana di !

Wonderful update..👏 Thank u so much !

Its gud to see that u r updating it regularly coz its one of my favourite fictions..😃😃😊 really ?? !!! Thanksss !!! 😃

Raj was so worried when he came to know that Naina is all alone in the hospital.

Maj Nair made sure that no1 can reach Naina soon so that he is able to carry off his plan well.😡😡 He is the shrewd one na...

His men tried to scare Naina in the hospital..but why didn't she told this thing to any1? yeh apne dil mein baat rakne ki bimari kahin naina ne Captain se to nahin seekhi..😆😉 riggghhhttt !!! 😆

Raj was so shocked to see her crying like this..He cudn't see her in so much pain.

Naina and Alekh's scene was gud..Apart from Raj he is the only 1 who understands her so well.😃 yup...Naina needed to open up her guilt to someone...and who else than Aalekh?

She is hurt for all the sufferings Raj had to go through coz of her..she was a bit selfish in the beginning.her only motive was to proove her brother's innocence.she even shot Raj and that is making her feel more guilty.😭😭😭

Raj is really trying hard to take care of her and Keerti is there to make sure that Naina doesn't escape her medicines coz she knows that her brother is too generous when it comes to Naina😉😆 ya...she knows it very well...at the sametime she knows how to handle both of them together...😛😆