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Posted: 14 years ago

writting for the first time on this page

as this thread is ending
I thought I should read the ff
you have done a wonderful job, it's not new for you to create wonders with words
I liked Geet's POV towards her marriage
and at the same time I liked Maan's POV
and the most that I liked was the attraction the Kashish between the two
you potrayed all very well
though I am not yet connected with it but still would like to jot a few lines in your honour describing Maaneet realationship
Maaneet dillema

Jaahan dekhun wahan tum,
Har baat har soch mein tum hi tum,
Tum mein kya woh mithi baat hai jo is kashmakash mein khiche ja raaha hai hum'
Tumhare har woh baat, woh andaaz ke saaye mein khiche jaa rahe hai hum'

Kaise yeh din guzra hai' Kaise yeh raat guzregi'
Kaise yeh waqt thamsa lagta hai'
Kaise yeh pal intezaar jaise lagta hai'
Yeh saza nahi imtihaan hai' Apni is dillagi ki' Ise jeetenge hum'
Yeh kiseke pyaar ki daastaan nahi humare mohabbat ki sachai hai' Ise nibhaange hum'

Geet's dillema
Aapke paas aane ka jee karta hai'
Aapke saath waqt bitana ko jee karta hai'
Pata hai aap hamare paas nahi hai'
Aap door kahin apni duniya mein khoye hain'
Par phir bhi is waqt sirf -
Aapke kareeb aakar aapko humare dil ke haal kehne ka jee karta hai'
Maan's Dillema
Humse ab raha nahin jaata'
Aapse ankahee baatein kehne ki' Kaise bitaye yeh beete din aapke bina'
Humse ab saha nahin jaata'
Aapse dil ke haal kehne ki' Kaise samjhaya dil ko jo apna na tha aapke bina'
Aur kya kya kahein aapse' Bas itna samaj lijiye'
Jab jab aapse yeh baatein kehne ki koshish ki'
Tab tab yeh dil sirf khamoshi se rone laga tha aapke bina'
Aap humari neend churakar khud khwabon mein kho gaye'
Aapko pata na tha hum kitne bechain the'
Khud apni palken gehrai se jhapakne ke intezaar mein'
Is intezaar ki wajah aap hi the'
Pata chala aap apne us khwab mein humari hi palkon mein khokar apne aap ko dekh rahe the'
this is for you FF
Teri Aankhon me ek kashish hai .... teri baaton me ek kashish hai . ....

Sunkar ye teri baatein . .... meri raaton me ek kashish hai....

Tere chehre pe ek kashish hai.... in adaaon me ek kashish hai....

Ye teri hai khushbu jise apnakar..... in hawaaon me ek kashish hai....

Tere chalne me ek kashish hai... tere rukne me ek kashish hai.....

Dekh kar teri or in phoolon ke..... jhukne me ek kashish hai......

Tere agaaz me ek kashish hai..... Tere anjaam me ek kashish hai......

Kashish kyu na ho tujhme itni..... jab tere naam me KASHISH hai................
Edited by smj1977 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Phewwwww finallly u updated dis plzzz diiii lyk TM n deewangi plzzz u update dis one too regularly naaa plzzzz anyways wowwww Maaan is being restless to meet geet wowww inna effect kardiya hai geet Ne wowww n loveee der longggg phone call lol geet is such a straight forward person here lovinggg it do continue sooon now
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow Geet's got d power to make Maan loose control
awesum update
luved every bit of it
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhh so short but i still like it 😆
maan is getting so restless 😳
i cant wait for the dinner n date.. but make sure its a really LONG update 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor maan
falling head over heals for his own wife..........😉
loving the desperation with which he wants to be with her😳😳
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part
yay they will finally act as a couple infront of the family!
con't soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Muskan ur updates are amazing u leave us speechless and always wanting more loved the update and keep ROCKING!!!

xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey i jst read d updation..... U know wat dis ff is ff something..... I m in love wid dis ff specially jst love dis geet..... U named him SEXY DEVIL..... U should've named her SEXY DEVIL.....!!!LOL....
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Posted: 14 years ago
maan is getting so restless...😆
he even wants to go the family dinner..😲..just to be close to her...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
It was a lovely update,

here are few lines from geet ke dilse nikaltha hei apni maan ke liye hope u like it.

Mujhe Dekhkar Kuch Machalte To Honge,
Kaiyee Hasratein Dil Mein Palte To Honge,

Unhein Kya Khabar Hai Meri Shakhsiyat Ki,
Pata Chalte Aahein Nikalte To Honge,

Nazar Se Nazar Ko Milane Ke Khatir,
Kaiye Armaan Dil Me Sajane Ki Khatir,

Ke Bistar Ke Silwat Par Karwat Badal Kar,
Mujhe Apne Khwabon Me Laatein To Honge,

Wo Jazbaat Ki Aandhiyan Unke Dil Mein,
Wo Mujhko Basana Kabhi Apne Dil Mein,

Mujhe Apna Saathi Banate To Honge,
Magar Hausla Kar Wo Paatein Na Honge.

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