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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Sabbi , its sooooooooooooooo damn interesting............ great characterisation ......................... this ff seems quite peppy ............ do continue soon ....... im so happy to read this
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Posted: 14 years ago
After reading honey comment i also want to add that I love Abhi Armaan competition for Nikki, where Armaan is over protective for his frnd and Abhi is over possessive for his Love. 😆 Poor Nikki always caught btw these two pig headed ppl 😆
@Khush I also like to pin point that even i didn't get ur comment on my last update. (SMLF) Mujhe bhi Jawab Do!!
Note : Sabii is ready to help you out in your story or anything in writing it. And i m ready to give you ideas regarding this challenge. (Ab kya bache ki jaan loge)
Edited by wow123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi everyone ,
Just managed to write an Introduction for my FF , so here I go ......... with

THE POWER OF LOVE

Dr. Abhimanyu Modi got out of his car in hurry and rushed in to Sanjeevani, looking at his watch.

"I don't believe it, Abhimanyu Modi! Of all the days, you found today to be late! How could you afford to be late today? You have been waiting for this for so long. And now you have managed to jeopardize all your hard work you have put in for this project until today, great, congratulations!' he cursed himself angrily.

Just as he was about to reach the reception he looked up, and stopped dead in his stride. He could not stop himself from staring at this raven beauty, with long black straight hair, rosy pink skin and the most beautiful smile on her face which made her huge innocent eyes twinkle. She was dressed in a smart business suit and had a laptop bag in her hand, and as she thanked Sister Lovely and walked away, her stilettos clicked in the silent corridor ......

'Shit, Shit, Shit ....... Dr. Abhimanyu Modi!' he cursed once again, 'what are you doing, standing and ogling at a girl, early in the morning, when you are already late for an important presentation? You better get a grip on yourself. You have no time for all these stupid thoughts, concentrate on your work, and scramble to your office, else you are doomed!' thinking this he shook his head and walked away in the opposite direction to which the girls had gone, hurrying towards his office to pick up the papers he needed for the presentation and headed towards the conference room. He was hoping Dr. Shashank was already there and handling the investors and the board members, and covering up for him.

It was 8:15 am now. And when Dr. Modi walked into the conference room, everyone was already sited including Dr. Shashank.

'Ahhhh, Dr. Abhimanyu Modi is here!' exclaimed Dr. Shashank relief written all over his face.

Suddenly there was silence all around and everyone turned towards him.

'Good morning, Gentlemen!' Abhimanyu greeted everyone. But once again he was in for a shock. Only after the words were out, he noticed the raven beauty siting next to Dr. Shashank. He was so taken aback to find her here, that he was unable to say anything furthur.

'Well, Dr. Modi ...... firstly thank you for finally making your appearance and obliging us with your presence for this meeting ......" she looked pointedly at her wrist watch, "and secondly ......" she continued sarcastically, "before addressing your audience the least you could do is make sure you know who all are present and address all of them" she added with a smirk, and her eyes obviously making fun of him.

Abhimanyu Modi had never been more embarrassed in his life ..... firstly he was late for a meeting .... secondly he had not noticed that there was a lady who was in the group he was addressing .... and thirdly he was not able to save the situation even if his life depended on it, for his brain had stopped working as soon as he noticed her and words refused to come out of his mouth.

"Dr. Modi .....' Dr. Shashank trying to save the situation, got up from his seat and started making the introductions, 'Please meet Ms. Malhotra with her team ...... Mr. Sharma, CFO of Lifeline Hospitals, and Mr. Ahuja one of the Directors of the Lifeline Hospitals. As we were already informed, Mr. Malhotra will not be joining us, and so his daughter, Ms. Nikita Malhotra, decided to join this meeting. She along with the others will be giving their opinion on our proposal, based on which Mr. Malhotra will be deciding if they will be interested in investing in the New Sanjeevani Hospital."

Abhimanyu stepped forward for a handshake with the gentlemen and then turned fully towards Ms. Nikita giving her his full attention. He now realized who this beauty was and why she was full of so much attitude. He will have to put her in her place soon ...... else .....

"Well, Ms. Malhotra, I am really sorry to have you kept waiting and also missing you out in my earlier greeting" and then slowly he bent forward and whispered very softly into her ears, "but you see, some people are very easy to miss" he added sarcastically. Nikita lifted her shocked eyes up to stare straight into the brown eyes which held a challenge for her to raise to his bait.

As both of them stared into each other's eyes, challenging each other, anyone who was looking at the two of them would realize that The World War III had been declared !!!!

Edited by ANfan_1810 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Annie finally u come into this writign challenge.
Now the competition start in real way. With Honey, Annie and Sabii registered their name in the competition. Annie u make Nikki alike Abhi now where our Abhi going to stand now. U n Honey make Nikki sadu in ur ff than what name i give to Abhi now.
So u bring Nikki upper level than Abhi to give him more Takkar Hmmm u all guys come up with different story but my mind revolving what Abhi's past surface in that? How you going to give us that??
But ur update is very short as compare to normal length😆 I also want to watch ur speed of update in this WC as well.
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOOHOO.

Annie is here!!

& what an introduction.
It looks like a bit of a role reversal here ~ Abhi has to impress Nikki, whereas generally we all see Nikki trying to impress Abhi.
I definitely like it. :D

Looking forward to reading this story Annie!!

<3 Sabs.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Anni,

Finally got an opportunity to comment on ur FF... So first let me tell u tht i luvd ur last FF "You are still the One".. I've joined IF recently so missed out the opportuninty to comment on such a fantabulous FF...It was really nice, awesome and fantastic.. luved it to the core..


[DIV]Nw i luvd this introduction part.. Though itz short, it seems very unusual story.. Nikki is no more rebellion intern of "Am the Senior Dr. Abhimanyu Modi".. I liked it.. Nikki in business suite and Abhi ogling on her .. tht sound unusual and interesting.. Am loving it:)
Everyday i make a resolution not to visit here till ythe last day of my exams but cant help it.. Though am eagrly waiting fr the next update, i won't be able to comment on it till 25 th of this month:(
Cheers,
Namy
Edited by namy_an - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OOh annie ... itni saari khushiyaan ek saath ... i cant handle them ............ itne saare ff ... ill die of happiness
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Posted: 14 years ago


Namyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.
(I like screaming your name. LOL)

Thanks honey, it means a lot coming from such a talented writer.

I love AN arguments as well, and Armaan-Nikki bonding. *sigh* Such a NikMaan fan. Hehehehe.

I will definitely add you to my PM list *pretends there is a PM list*. Lol, I didn't know who to send it to.. but I have you on board, so I'll definitely send you PMs.

<3 you gorgeous. :D

PS. Make sure you enter the challenge, I do not care if it's only an OS. I want you to participate. Varna... ;)

@Bold: Hey sabz, i like it too when u sream my name like that LOL.. And don't use such a phrase("telented writter") in front of veterans.. Itz embarssing for me.. I mean it..

Yup am NikiMaan Fan.. Just luved Armi- Nikki and Ridz -Nikki bonding..:)

@Blue: Hey, if ur giving threat thn give it thoroughly... varna kya, huh??... LOL..

Joke apart.. yup would like to participate and would do it after my examz get over :)

Ur doing awesome job.. Poem, FF... now whatz next gonna come out from ur bouqet?? :)

Cheers,
Namy
Edited by namy_an - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -saBii-


Khush. Booooooooooooooooooooooooooooo.
(LOL. I like writing that. Boo-Boo. :P)

Why thank you madam. I'm glad you think so. :)

Hahahaha. That is Dr. Abhimanyu Modi for ya. ;) Making everyone's hearts (except mine) flip. :P

LOL. Isn't that all Nikki does anyway? She forever argues with him. So of course that had to be included.

Hehehehe. We all know Nikki is a secret pehelwan. Therefore she'd be the perfect person to wipe that smirk off his face. :P

You know when Armaan & Nikki get together, nothing goes right. I don't even know what they're planning - evil people that they are. :P

Okay Khush, I know it was short. But I typed that at TWO am. I hope you realise now. I'm not promising longer chapters.. only because I want to keep this story succinct.. you know how I am, little details matter. I'm trying to change that with this story. There's a LOT to explain in the story, so I'm trying to go off course - which is generally what happens with me. :)

ILYtoo!! <3

@red...Well I guess I've something to be glad about when it comes to this! *sigh*
Yeah LOL even Abhi isn't far behind when it comes to arguing! 😆
@blue...tehehe. I know that! 😆
Just one thing, being the lazy bum you are 😛 just remember to finish the FF on time! 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: hapinezz13

Now to the FF.....unlike others I have always liked the Abhi Armaan unsaid competition for Nikki's attention, even though we read Armaan's attention is read as his protectiveness!!

Heyyyyy I love that too!!!! 😲
AbhiMaan silent I-can-stare-harder-than-thou matches are SOOOOOOOOOOO good to watch!!! 😃 And anyway two hot hot alpha males competing for one lil darling's attention...irresistible!!!

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