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Next Part:-

Geet shocked and look at maan with confused expression?

Maan pull her close and said means we r going to farm house at night . before we have to attend a party and then farm house and then and kissed her lips.

Geet shied but enjoy the love giving by her maan.

Later maan take her for shower .

After 6.15 maaneet r ready and come to downstairs . all r ready and vicky said great aap sab aa gaye , toh chale aab.

Maan:- tu kaha ja raha hain

Vicky:- aapke sath party mein

Maan:- dear little bro u will not going any where ,

Pari who is reading magazine just smiles when vicky said but y?

Geet who held maan's hand said oh nothing vicky, ur bro is just pulling ur leg nothing more

Vicky frowned and said ek toh inke help karu and he is pulling my leg.

Geet:- mein dekh ke aati hoon meera ready hui hain iya nehi

Dev:- yes bhabi she is asking for u

Yash:- but thore der pehele toh oh tujhe dhoond rehi thi for and winks at him with wicked smile .

Dev runs behind him where geet smiles and go to meet meera. But see her in the corridor and smiles at her and said mein tumhi dhoond rehi thi, let's go

Meera smiles and said ok, u look beautiful and glowing more , what is reason , bhaiya ke pyaar and sath.

Geet smiles shily and said chale.

At the enter the hall maan quickly come close to geet and said tum sab aarehe ho na I told bahadur to take u all in that car and me and geet is coming with another one and quickly left from there before any one could say anything .

Yash:- he is too hurry this days.

Dev smiles and said after long time both met, let them spend the time together.

Vicky:- ha ha pata hain pata hain kyuon

Dev glared him and said let's go now

Here Maan pull geet close in the car and said now give me kiss before we start from here.

Geet:- maan u r taking this from me from yesterday night.

Maan:- so, now give me.

Geet:- after the party. Maan let's go , we r getting late .

Maan:-ok then forget to go any where.

Geet:-ok fine and step out from the car and see yash's car is leaving and take lift from there.

Maan is sitting in the car with a shocked face then said ok mrs khurana look what I will do with u today and evily smiles .

They enter the party venue when geet is looking here and there for maan and couldn't find him and frowned and think kaha gaye .

She is talking with meera and when maan come and said hi meera.how r u ? where is dev?

Meera:- oh yash ke sath uha hain

Maan smiles and said ok I will meet him there.

He ignored geet and went to meet dev and busy is there.

Geet look at him and think oh toh aap drama kar rehe ho chalo koi baat nehi .

Geet is looking at meera and said toh shaadi ke baarein mein kya soch rehi ho

Meera :- baas oh kuch

Geet:-kya baat hain meera

Meera:- don't know but feel dev is not ready like something he needs some time more.

Geet looked littled worried then said but y?

Meera:- don't know .

Geet want to say something but meera said choro na geet, aapna mood aise kharap mat karo iye bolo, all is fine na now .

Geet smiles and said yes.

Maan looking at geet who is looking worried then smling at meera but something in her face.

Maan is going to meet her when geet see him and turned her face and said meera, I'm going feeling little tired.

Maan smiles and went behind her and and grabbed her waist and pull close to him when geet said Mr khurana behaved ur self.

Maan :-sshhh and pulled her in the corner said what happen to u

Geet :- leave me Mr khurana and nothing happen.

Maan:- geet what happen to meera and y r so sad and tired.

Geet :- maan pls sab log hain choriye.

Maan:- first tell me what happen

Geet:-ufff aap bhi na, kuch khash nehi baas oh meera kuch upsate thi.

Maan:-hmmm but kyuon,

Geet hugged him by his waist and said oh dev is not ready marry her now, may be he need some times.so.

Maan :-hmmm but y r looking so tired.

Geet yawn and said kuch nehi baas feel little tired.

Maan look at her then said let's go back to home.

Geet:-but m fine just but maan said shhh no more word, take rest, it's my fault also, I should understand now come with me.

Geet:- but what will they think as we come here and then.

Maan:- geet, u r not well.

Geet:- maan,I'm perfectly fine .

Maan look at geet then geet said oh actually no tired but thinking about y dev . I mean meera loves dev and dev also but they.

Maan pull her and said jaan, they r adult give them some time , they will sort out, something we should left to time and destiny and now give me smiles and cheer up.

Geet smiles and hugged him tightly .

Geet:- maan, aapse ek baat keheni hain.

Maan:- kahiye .

Geet look at maan then said abhi nehi baad mein.

Maan kissed her cute , little nose and said ok jaan. Now chalo thori der reheke hum iha nikalenge ok. Pls baby listen my word.


Geet:-I'm and will always listen..

Maan:- my sweet heart.

There some relatives insist maaneet , dev-meera told them to dance maan reluctantly agreed but dev ignored it and said he is not feeling good.

Maan held geet's hand and another hadn securely went to her slim waist.and looked at her with desire full eyes.

Nasha Ye Pyaar Ka Nasha Hai

Ye Meri Baat Yarron Maano

Nashe Mein Yaar Doob Jaao

Raho Na Hosh Mein Deewanon

Geet is totally lost in his eyes and went more close to him.

Maan twirled her and geet back collided with his chest when maan dipped his head and placed sensuas kiss on her cheek.

Nasha Ye Pyaar Ka Nasha Hai

Ye Meri Baat Yarron Maano

Nashe Mein Yaar Doob Jaao

Raho Na Hosh Mein Deewanon

Ki Jabse Maine Tumko Ye Dil De Diya

Meetha Meetha Sa Dard Le Liye

Suno O Priya

Maine Tumko Dil Diya

Geet look at him from the corner of her eyes when maan's eyes met and then maan aain twirled her and now both come face to face and maan just push her then pull her so close like there is no gap.Maan placed soft kiss on her forehead .

Nasha Ye Pyaar Ka Nasha Hai

Ye Meri Baat Yarron Maano

Nashe Mein Yaar Doob Jaao

Raho Na Hosh Mein Deewanon

Geet is looking at his eyes and lost herself there and like she is falling in love again. She smiles and maan feel like hold so close like there is no one could come,

Nazar Se Yoon Nazar Mili Nazar

Deewana Main Ho Gaya

Asar Ye Kya Hua Asar

Kahan Ye Mann Kho Gaya

Behke Behke Kadam Behka Behka Hai Mann

Chha Gaya Chha Gaya Mujhpe Deewanapan

Sun O Priya

Maine Tumko Dil Diya

Both look at each other and remember how they meet , then become friends, then there little misunderstanding then again all sort out then they married, their marriage ceremony, then how they become one for forever.Geet blushed like newly wed bride. Where maan looks so happy to see his geet like this again.

Nasha Ye Pyaar Ka Nasha Hai

Ye Meri Baat Yarron Maano

Nashe Mein Yaar Doob Jaao

Raho Na Hosh Mein Deewanon

Both r lost in each other eyes, love, warmth. There no one except them,

Jhguki Jhuki Nigaah Mein Bala Ki Shokhiyaan Chhupi

Khuli Khuli Laton Mein Bhi Haay Ghata Ki Mastiyaan Ruki

Ye Haya Ye Ada Ye Haseen Ye Nayan

De Gaya De Gaya Meethi Meethi Chubhan

Suno O Priya

Maine Tumko Dil Diya

Maan bend little bit and whishper y r u blushing jaan, I'm not doing anything except dancing with u.

Geet look at him with shy eyes and smiles little and said aapka sath hi bahut hain.

Nasha Ye Pyaar Ka Nasha Hai

Ye Meri Baat Yarron Maano

Nashe Mein Yaar Doob Jaao

Raho Na Hosh Mein Deewanon

Ki Jabse Maine Tumko Ye Dil De Diya

Meetha Meetha Sa Dard Le Liye

Suno O Priya

Maine Tumko Dil Diya

Maan smiles and hugged her and said love u jaan.

Geet just placed her head in his chest and whishper there love u too and look at his eyes like told him something.Maan understand the meaning of her eyes and what they want to say,

Nasha Ye Pyaar Ka Nasha Hai

Ye Meri Baat Yarron Maano

Nashe Mein Yaar Doob Jaao

Raho Na Hosh Mein Deewanon

Both finish the dance gracefully, all clapped and praised them.

After some times, maan make an excuse and left from there with geet.

On the way geet falls sleep ,maan know y she is feeling so tired,

Maan reached At Farm House , then take geet in his strong arms and said guard and servant to take the car inside .

Later maan enter their bedroom and placed her on the bed and look at tired face.He helped her to changed the dress and cover with blanket . Then he changed his dress and slide besides her .

Next day morning, geet wake up and stretched her hand and smiles but soon she understand she is in empty in the bed and she quickly open her eyes and found herself alone and then smiles and said maan kitchen mein hain. She gets up and goes to meet him there.

In the kitchen maan made breakfast for both of them and come back their room when geet see his phone ring . Before he could pick it up , she ans the call and where maan come sit besides her and geet hugged maan also.

Papa:- good morning, geet beta,how r u today,I heard u were not feeling well.

Geet look at maan then said no papa, nothing, just little bit tired , how r u, how is dadi how was the function , did u met rohan, how is he, bara ho gaya na, after some little chat geet who is sitting on maan's lap give the phone to him and hugged him .Maan take the phone and ans his papa and said ok, no no , kal hain na , ok will reached from there will go Chandigar, no problem papa.yes I will talk to brij , he might be also join us there but papa, I need help from yash, yea , if u send him also, no no vicky, totally irresponsible hain .,nehi iye baat oh samal nehi paayega, ok , take care bye papa, and one more thing just that matter pls discuss with vicky .

Papa:-ok beta, take care.byw

Geet:- maan, itna jaldi uthne ki kya jarurat tha.

Maan:- after break fast take rest jaan, kal raat u eat little.

Geet rubbed her noses in his chest and said I used to eat little at night from HP.

Maan feel sensation and hold her more close and said I know baby now eat something ,for me ,

Geet:-ok , feed me.

Maan feed her and then again geet said I want a help from u .

Maan:-hmmm.

Geet:- oh oh'.

Maan:- oh oh y r u hesitating?

Geet:- nehi I mean.

Maan:- U want to go to chandigarh and stay in that Farmhouse, where we spend our first honeymoon .

Geet looked maan with wide eyes and said how do u know ?

Maan:- well that time was best part of our life and from there we become one and start our new life, like u loved this place and told me earlier that u want to come here , like that also.

Geet smiles then said itne accha cooking kaha learn kya

Maan hugged her tight and said well in Paris no one is there to cook for me so, I had to learn cooking and before that here also I make an excuse to cook for my self so .and before also u eat food made by mine.

Geet smiles and kissed his lips and said but it's ur fault u r alone at paris , I was always ready to go with u but u went alone.hmmm .

Maan look at geet and said sorry jaan , I made that decision in a hurry and messed up all.

Geet:- uff aap bhi na sorry kyuon bol rehe ho, I was pulling ur leg. Now aap bolo, aapne kya decision lya .

Maan:- kiss baarein mein jaan.

Geet:- humare wapas pune launte ke baarein mein, after Rajjy's marriage we have to back there na but see here all r happy see us. We both r here after 2 long years. So,

Maan:- we will be back after 4 month as there is some project going on so We have to supervise this .

Geet:- what about my study.

Maan:- nothing problem u will enrolled in Delhi and exam will be after 6 months so till then u will be here and before that u have to submit some papers regarding ur subjects so we will be here that time,

Geet:- and who will teach me , help me this time.

Maan:- well, Mr Maan Singh Khurana .

Geet smiles and kissed maan's cheek and nose and said thnku then said well maan, it's over 9.30 I should take bath now,

Maan smiles naughtily and asked don't u feel tired .

Geet:- no.not like that.oh baas kal kuch jda tension le lya tha dev-meera ke baarein mein later think about ur word so. Now m feeling more relaxed.

Maan:- grt but I think u should take some treatment.

Geet:- treatment but before she can complete anything, maan take her in his arms and they went to another side of the farm house.

A big Jacuzzi is placed there and maan said well before that I should give u some Spl Maan Singh Khurana Massage,

Geet blushed and said maan, I'm fine.

Maan:- no, u r not, now more argument and let me do the thing and placed her in the big slab type things and said close ur eyes jaan.

Geet:- maan pls.

Maan:- pls jaan. Trust me I will not do anything that will hurt u.

Geet closed her eyes later she feels maan undress her and then cover her by a towel and said make her lay in the place and massaged her legs, hands, toe, fingers of legs and hands , little bit of inner thigh, calfs, ankles, stomach, back, hip, waist, neck, shoulder then said ho gaya, here Geet is totally aroused and pull maan on her and said no it's not over , maan smiles and said r u sure honey.

Geet:- hmmm,

Maan slowly removed the Towel and her inners and come besides her and then give her massage on her cups and pinch her buds then his hands went to her forbidden territory and give her pleasure there, his finger doing magic and then entered it,Geet gasped when maan keep increasing the pressure and then she hit the climax and almost screamed and then shudder and falls on maan's arms.Maan hold her close then and then after some moments again he start to love her , he kissed her whole face, bend down and captured her cups by her hands and squeezed , rubbed them and here geet's moaned increasing in pleasure. Maan pinch her bud then bite it slightly again sucked it try to sooth it.geet hold his arms tightly and her nails dig there.

Maan bend and kissed her naval then again went to her legs and kissed her legs and sucked ther finger of her legs. Bit them slightly.it's more tickling sensation for geet.He again come to her shoulder, collar bone , throat , jaw all r recvied numourous love bites, .he bends and sucks her naval then again went to her lips and give her full mouth kisses.then went to her secret places and give her pleasure and this time geet maoned loudly in pleasure then maan finally entered her and held her tight then thrust hard to harder to more harder and geet just screamed in pleasure .she kept moaning maan's name where maan moved in the rhythm and kept moving until they hit the climax and then geet just shudder and her breath got more fast and hold maan tightly where maan also pulled her tightly . then after some moments they back to the world maan falls on geet.

Later maan buried his face on her neck to her curve and kissed her near the heart and said love u geet and then again he loved her.

At the evening, both maaneet r relxed in their room.

When geet said maan kal ke party ke liye koi dress nehi hain mere.

Maan who is reading a book said hain geet, open the cupboard and see a off white color packet is there and there u can see a peach color saree with light chocolate color border..

Geet smiles and said thnks darling.She take packet and see the gift and look happy.

Geet thinks I should give some gift to maan for this, but what, hmmm ok'..

Later Geet suggest maan for long drive as they don't go for long drive too long.Maan agreed and both went fot that.then they take dinner and then maan said I'm going to study room .

Geet:-ok .

After some time maan received a sms

Baby, come to terrace .

Waiting for u

Ur sweetheart.

Maan smiles and went to meet his jaan and see her waiting there and wearing a White satin ankle lenth nightee but her sleeves r short and she open her air and those curl r blowing there.her eyes r full on love, her lips playin a smile and he just want to hold her and say how much he loves her.

He goes close to her and said u r looking stunning, beautiful my sweet heart and give a gentle peck on her lips.

Geet smiles and said that cause of u maan and both hugged each other lightly.

Geet:- maan chalo na ek small drive ho jaye.

Maan:-phir se.

Geet nodded in excitement yes when maan said ok chalo.

After some time of driving maaneet come back to farm house again but both sit in side the car and open the door of the car and There slight air bowing in the place maan take geet in his arms and said u know papa called me and said we got the Chandigarh deal we just have to go their and sign the papers then there is another project we just study that and then have to say is that good or not.

Geet smiles and kissed his heart and nodded positively.

Maan:- jaan, u know in HP there is a place where rivers has and beside that a beautiful small trees both sides and there u can go and enjoy the weekend.

Geet smiles and said then let's go there .

Maan:-ok let's complete rajjy engagement ceremony or if we have time to chandigarh then will go there.what say.

Geet nodded in yes.

Suddenly there is rains pouring in them heavily and maan said let's go inside. When geet said no let's enjoy it some times.

I want to enjoy every bit of our life in ur arms.

Later maan take her in his arms and said let's go jaan,.

Geet nodded in no then pull out from his arms and take her with him and both drenched there.Geet look at maan with full of love and said Happy Marriage anniversary Maan.

Maan smiles then said it's 12 at mid night.

Geet smiles and give a peck on his cheek and said thanks maan for coming in my life.

U gave me everything maan, u fulfill my every dreams, wishes, u take all pain to make me success ,thanks ,it's small word , I just want to say I love u love u love lots, I can't express my self maan, I can't . u r my everything,

MAan smiles and hugged him tightly and said love u too sweet heart. U r my life, without u I'm no one , u give me everything, when I run away from marriage and u come in my life like a new fresh air and to see u first time I feel like u r mine, ur eyes keep telling me to come and take u , hold u, to give u all happiness, and u give me ur love, care, warmth,everything, thanks jaan, from now we will go together in every time, every way,we r one.

i met u two years back...
Didn't knw lyf wl change track!
Was so unsure,bt u steadied me,
was at a loss for faith,bt u taught me...
I fell for u,evn b4 i knew...
Weaving dreams of a life anew...
But,the demons of my past raised their head,
i bared my heart to u instead!
Aftr initial flutter,u were there...
The demons of my past,u fought with flair.
Life with u was a bful dream,
in happiness n joy i wantd to scream...
When i was alone,u stood by,
against ur luvd ones,u were by my side!
Life was bliss bt lonliness was near,
you lft me stranded n in tears...
I knw it was hard fr u,as it was fr me,
for my own gud,here u left me!
Two yrs of separatn,2 yrs of pain
bt i knew u luv me,so they weren't in vain!
U had seen dreams fr me,askd me to make them true...
For u my luv,all that i went thru...
Now u r here,there is no fear,
free of pain,full of love,our life is clear!
Was unsure in the beginning,bt nw i cn say with pride...
YES,IT WAS LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT!

Poem by Swati( princess163 )

both look at each other then geet smiles and both kissed other , after some time when they broke geet shied and said let's go inside.

Maan laughs and said as u wish sweet heart and take her inside where maan said let's change the dress dear , ur full wet when geet said maan and she agreed .she changed the dress and come out with wearing a beautiful,light pink color nighty and maan just come out after changing and turn towards her and see she look at him with desire full eyes and said give me ur all love maan, make me urs again, like we r one, like there is no one except me and ur no except we and our love, our passaion.

Maan smiles and pull her a hugged then give her full love, warmth.

aankho se tune yeh kya keh diya, dil yeh divana dhadakne laga

tanhayee me ham mile iss tarah, barish me shola bhadakane laga

tu tadap ne laga, main machalane lagee

bund tan pe giree, jan machalane lagee

chha raha hai ajab sa nasha...

thodee sardee bhee hai, thodee garmee bhee hai

thodee hai bebasee, thodee marjee bhee hai

aise me ham bhala, kya karen tu bata

jo bhee hota hai woh, hone de dil ruba

aankho se tune...

pas aau jo main, dil yeh darta hai kyun

dur jayega tu, aisa lagta hai kyun

maine wada kiya, maine lee hai kasam

umrr bhar naa kabhee, pyar hoga yeh kam

aankho se tune...

Precap 😳☺️
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 years ago
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wait maan will fullfull his all promises and maan know he done a mistake to left geet like that but his intentions r not bad
his only dream to see his wife's all dream achieved
from now he will help his wife to fulfill his wife's all dream and geet will help his husband maan to complete all duty
we will see new dimension of their relationship from now



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Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 13 years ago
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i the first one to comment for my favorite FF awesome made my day


so they are getting closer in right way but yes it will take time for geet to come to terms but i m sure now maan will be there for her
Edited by heermeher - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
marvelous update
love it core
cont soonnn
thank yu so much
Pledge of Love

I've made a vow, to no one but you
I pledge my love to forever be true
I'll take care of you and treat you right
I'll lay beside you all through the night
I'll feed you and clothe you and keep you warm
I'll hug you and kiss you and give shelter in the storm
I'll help you and guide you and clear a path
I'll protect you and shield you from an angry man's wrath
I'll listen to your problems help you solve them too
I'll make you a rainbow and let the sun shine through
I'll take your side even if you're wrong
Just to prove our love is strong
I'll plant you flowers and make them grow
They'll be a symbol of love that only we'll know
I'll whisper your name when no one is near
So low that only you can hear
You'll feel my love even if we're apart
You'll know that we are one in heart

maaneet love



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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update

i just loved it

continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Beautiful part Dii.

But what's wrong with Dev???

Maaneet moments were lovely as usual ... Massage part was so passionate.

Finally Geet is opening up from her insecurities.

wonderful update.

loved it ...cont. soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...maan is trying but it will take some time for geet to forgive him...what's with dev?

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