FF-PARADOX- THREAD 4~MANN & GEET-updated on thre 5 - Page 85

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Posted: 14 years ago

wow...!!*~👍🏼
GEET ka ghussa...!!*~😛
how cum MAAN didn't call her for 2 days???? 😲

when r u updating?? 😲
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Posted: 14 years ago
hehehehehhe this was fab really loved her
she is just fuming in anger oooo bt the anger is also really sweet surely he will make it up2 her he definitely must b knowing wat his gul wants
oooooo plz du update teh nxt part soon eagerly waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

you wrote

one more update coming up'.
when is it coming??????????


me toooo thnking the same
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Posted: 14 years ago
THANK you all… :D updating… :D
xxxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
waiting...
Keyama plz update Remorse as well..plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz.....plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz.....plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz....
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Posted: 14 years ago
looking forward to the update :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey wen will u update remorse yaar....Is d remorse update comin after dis update..??????
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Originally posted by: namita25

waiting...
Keyama plz update Remorse as well..plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz.....plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz.....plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz....

Hey.....kudos.....i am also on d same level..............Plz update Remorse....😆😆😆😆😆😆😆I
hope u hav requested her from ma side as well. 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
Edited by 9staroneserials - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hehe will try my best… :D
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Posted: 14 years ago


***PARADOX***
part 40
pls do comment & press the like button' ty for all the love and suport
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Geet sat in the car. Strop. Hating maans guts. She went back to wearing her jense & top!
Maan- tumne Ae ka pahna?
Geet just hated his word! That's what he could think! What have he worn! He suppose to make up to me!
Geet tries to get out but maan locks the door!
Maan closes his eyes- ok! Umm! Sorry!
Geet- go & control what that sam of yours were! Now open the door! She snaps.
Maan- why will I control her? He asked teasingly... Geet gives him a glare... Maan still smirked...
Maan- au thori Meri hey.... He brings her to his lap... You are my...
Geet- your rubbish talk won't work!
Maan- you know how busy I was!
Geet- what? Busy on a date? She asks angrily!
Maan- it's not like that! It's party! Nothing els!
Geet snaps & tries to free her self... But maan holds her tight round the waist. & cresses her cheek...
Maan- jaan.... You know I only love you. I always have... He kisses her cheek. It's just I am too busy!
Geet- I don't care! I don't want you partying with sam! I don't like it!
Maan- but! I have no one els!
Geet- why? Can't you go by your self? Or you need someone with you all the time? She taunt!
Maan- jaan! Try to understand!
Geet- what understand! I don't care!
Maan- ok! I promise you won't see any type of picture like that!
Geet smile... & gives him a peck... Maan took a sigh relive..
It was getting hard to please her day by day...
Maan- acca suno... Geet started to play with his finger as she completely relaxed on his arm...
Geet- bolo...
Maan- there are some... Surprise for you!
Geet- hmm! I wonder what?
Maan looks at her- why? Do you know?
Geet- how I suppose to know if you don't tell me stupid!
Maan- you calling maan sing khurana stupid? He gave her a fake angry glare...
Geet- what could I do? If you are! She smirks... Sliding her hand round his neck...
Maan- umm... That... Stupid enough to fall for you!... He smirks taking the lips in his mouth...
Geet- last... Time I am falling for this trick!
Maan didn't wait as she grabbed her lips in his mouth... Turning In to passionate kiss...

Next day...

It was a busy airport. Rano haven't spoken to geet since her decision! Darji & geets dad was ok! At-least she will do some study & top of it... Darji have planned to send Shoria to the same collage as Geet!

Geet waited at the air-port! Even after everyone left! How could he be late! This is the limit! I am leaving in less then 20 minute! & he! She started to crash her new phone!
Maan- beara phone PE ku gussa utarai ho!
Geet- if you were one minute late I would have crashed your office. She spits the word!
Maan holds her by waist...
Maan- jaan... You know I am getting hold up by work....
Geet- up to work is fine! Nothing more!

Maan gives her a kiss on her forehead & the last good-by....
Maan- I will see you in 2 weeks!
Geet- jaldi karna!
Maan smiles... & gives her a last kiss...

Maan started prepare his leave along with sam! She wasn't exited at all! Knowing Brij! She will defiantly see him!
Maan- are you sure you will be fine!
Sam- yes! Yes defiantly!
Maan- umm! I don't want to force you!
Sam- no! No! I am all good!
Maan smiles & leaves for the office letting sam pack....

Avantika was worried sick now! She wanted maan to be engaged with anyone so she can drift his mind way from sam! She speaks to savetri Devi! Some serious action should be taken!
Sam is only here because of Brij deeds! But that's not mean she takes advantage of her son! Just because he is nice! Helpful towards everyone! It's not mean!
Avantika hater the idea... She needs to think something quick!

Geet have settled well in to her new place!
Brij who Geet have guessed... Haven't changed! She sees him with a new girl every week! Specially after he took over London Handa! He also became one of the centre! Press will be outside of her house non stop! It started to p- Geet!
Geet- what the he'll bro? This is ridicules!
Brij- welcome to the business world! Oh by the way you have security now!
Geet- oh gr8! Just amazing!
Brij- yes! Me or anyone of our family not here! I will be busy! So you probably will be home alone!
Geet- yep! I like that she smiles!

As they spoke a girl walked in. A model of course! Slim figure. Very beautiful...

Girl- who is she? She asked angrily!
Brij- umm... What?
Geet- bro! This is the limit! Make this rule to clear to all of your GF not to be home! Book a hotel or something! Seriously.. You change girls like I change my shoe!
Brij laughed... But the girl wasn't amused.
Butler walks in...

Handa haveli was huge. It was designees like a queens pales... Each door huge... With very deep designees... Geet flows the butler to her room! Two servants opens the door...
Geet- what's your name?
Servent 1- Steve mam!
Geet- and you?
Servent 2- Jake!
Geet- Steve... Can I have something to eat?
Steve- yes mam!
Both servant left soon after geet started to unpack.
Geet- oh this is my life! No mom & dad to nag! No Darji to make new rule! Aww this is my life! She laid on her double king size bed... Started to make fairy... Giggling!
Servants knocked with her dinner....

Brij came back after week! With another model!
geet walks down the stair... Wearing a short blue dress!
Geet- owo! Bro! Another one!
Brij- meet our new model! She is with us with a year contract!
Geet- owo she is so beautiful! Hello! I am geet Handa!... She introduced...
Maria- hello... She smiles. Sweet.
Geet- bro! I was thinking... Along with collage... Can I join the business as well! I will have good experience! Geet smiles!
Brij- you really don't need to go to collage to join our own business!
Geet- well! I need to learn the basic na!
Brij- I never even finished my school properly!
Geet- yea! I guess!
Brij- just join office with me from next week! Observe & learn!
Geet sounded exited! Sounds good to me!

Maan was few dad way until he moves to London for 2-4 months!

Geet only 17! Soon to be 18... She walks in Handa office!
Geet- Owow! She looks up and down! Never knowing they are this rich!
Geet- bro! This is amazing!
Brij- your assistant! Or shall I say your partner! He is same age as you. 17! Soon to be 18! It's so weird! I mean he only 17! But expert in business!
Geet- hmm! So I will be working under him?
Brij- that's what Darji suggested! If you want to start to business early!
Geet- alright! Let's try it out!

Maan have arrived to London along with sam! Moving to his khurana haveli. He went to bed instantly! Not Even bothering to call Geet! Neither she knew he is here!

Geets first day went well. He loved it! Shoria seems nice friendly guy! There likes dislikes... Tastes... Everything matched perfectly. He was supper clever! Geet didn't like that! She felt like a looser along side him! In one way it's good. It will help her to push her dream... & that sam soon to be out from maans sight. She smiled. One good thing she thought....

Shoria- so! Have you made any new friends?
Geet- umm! No! Not really! Everyone is focused on there work & stuff! My best friend shila moving here soon! So... I probably will be with her!
Shoria- shila!
Geet- yes...

As the time went by... Geet started to learn the basic at the same time going to collage! Seeing maan as promised... Every week! He tries his best to stay in England much as possible with Geet... While Geet trying her level best to become a business women! Shoria have been gr8 help! Amazing help.
Shila have moved to the khurana haveli. Weird enough... Some odd reason shila & Shoria started to come close...
While Geet teased her! It's her time after all...

Brij.. Staid the same... Parties every night... With different girl!... But this time careful... & mostly models! Who are very carefully about not to ruin there figure for There carrier...

Maan start get highly involved with work... A man building up with attitude. High attitude specially with all the attention. He is very close to sam! A good loyal friend.... He talks to Geet once or twice a week! Barely have enough time to share a single thing about his life... While sam there... With him... Most of the time....

A year have passed by... Life seems to get busy & busier each day... Geet start to concentrate. 100% in business. She gets fed up of watching sam & maan! She just hated it! She is 19 now....
Now... She have taken over allot from her bro! Specially thanks to Shoria. He made her more competitive. He was shocked! Surprised with her progress! Beyond! Geet left collage in 2nd year! She knew mostly everything about business! She made her self a new Geet!

Geet Sees maan once... Or twice on every 3-4 months! Both are so busy! Concentrating on there work! Now Geet started to realize what type of pressure probably on maan. .....Allot.... She her self started to party... Lucky her picture wasn't that bad as maan... Nor anyone touching her... Then imagine maan!!!!!






part 39

Next- another small leap'.
Will Pm u all tonight.. after part 41.. :D
xxx

hay you all' thanks for all the love & support' :D
well the story is just about to start' heehhe
so hold on for the paradox'
:D
& one more update tonight' :D
xxxxxx
love firesafirefire'

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago

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