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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
hey thankss fr de pm.. nd de part was AWESOME 👏...plss try and update de next part sooooooonnnnnnn.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
Hiiiii
Awesome start
Loved it
Malliks r a cute family
Secret FBI
Can't wait 4 da boys 2 join da hospital
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm

Ps
Get well soon
Take care
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
awesome update
very interesting
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
wow wow
hayyyyyyeeeeeeeee😍
i ws dreaming wen u described them.......😍
superb yara.......bt tumhe nahi lagta kashish n sujal r too young fr bein mom dad fr ammy n atul?!?!🤔😲😕
bt jo bhi ho i sooooooooooooooo luved it d kiss wala part ws sooooo amazing.........................😍☺️😉
i liked d whole update..........❤️😃
continue soon plz n thnx fr d pm!!😊
love
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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
woww reallyyY nICeE goOODDD
comcepttttt lovedd it
please countine--soonn please...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66
Hey Anu,
you rock dude man the part is amazing love it so much cant tell u it is awesome one,
The concept of the story looks really interesting both brothers are gonna safe both sisters cool
thanx for writing on ArSh i am hooked to ur ArSh ff's
lets see how will ArSh meet
Yes KSG is hotttt like hot chocolate actually more hot thn dat hehe
do continue soon thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#67

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@ ksgforever10 : thnx u soooo much sweetheart..........even i love Sujal Kashsih alot...so i put them as Armi's parents............aww...soo sweet of u...im fine now...thnx.........

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thnx alot everyone who pressed the like button.............thnx u guys..............

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loads of love...

anu............

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi guys..........sorry im late...but kya karu....university started........n im also having a presentation in which im representing my uni.......wich is gonna happen on 8th march...so plzzz do pray for me...that i'll be able to do my best............ok enough of my bukbak....here goes the next part.......

PART 2..........

its basically about Mallik family..........Gupta family....in the next part....as i want to sum up this first.......

Armaan n Atul : Gud morning Sir......




Sujal : Gud morning...sit down......waise tu aj aapka off tha....but a new problem is there...a new case has come...n u both r gonna work on it.........




u guys might have heared the name of the famous surgeon n dean of Sanjeevani.... "Dr. Shashank Gupta" well his daughters life is in danger....n u both r gonna protect them..........as u r the FBI secret agent...n many dont know abt u guys....so u'll have to look forward that no one harm them....they r after Dr. Shashank money....n they want it through his daughters........so now its ur tym to show some action........u both r going to India tomorrow...n wll join Sanjeevani as interns....n dont trust on anyone....so i hope u guys dont have any problem wid it............im i clear.......




Armaan/Atul: yes sir...........

Sujal : ok so i'll tell u more about the case as its progresses......waise mere sheron.......nalaik bachoon....kya haal hai.........

Atu/Armaan: Dad......... "said together pouting........n sujal laughed loud"

Sujal: kya yaar tum log bhi na.........

just then there was a knock on the door...n after getting permission a person entered around sujal's age...he was quite goodlooking....a bit long hairs....perfectly build body...eyes glittering wid determination....wearing black shirt...wid first few buttons open....n blue jeans...entered wid a file in hand........

Man: gud morning sir.......

Sujal: gud morning Rishi........so mein ne jo details mangi thi...sab mil gaye...

Rishi: yes sir.......hey bacha party......

Armaan: buddy...hum bacha party nahin hain ok....... "he said showing his fake anger"

Atul: yeah we r big boys........

Rishi: yeah yeah...i know...big boys..."he said rolling his eyes"

Sujal: guys...u r in my office...infront of my ur senior u r doing all this.......

Armaan: bt dad he started this...y he always call us bacha party.......

Sujal: ok ok...enough of u guys.........so let me remind u..tum log wahan as interns ja rahe ho...so plzz agar gun carry karo tu bhi bohat sambhal kar rehna...kisi ko tum logon pe shak na ho..kyunki zara si baat leak hui...tu may be jo bhi in sab ke peeche hai sawdhan ho jae...got it...

Rishi: waise guys...mujhe ek baat samajh nahin ayi...tum logon ne medicine study kiya.....tu y u guys entered FBI..tum log bohat ache doctors ban sakte thae....fir iss field mein kahan se agaye....

Atul: woh kya hai na buddy...mom was a doctor tu we both got influenced by her...unke saath jab hospital jana...n see that hw she treats her patients n all...tu humara bhi mann hua medicine study karne ka...

Armaan: aur fir humein dad ka kaam samajh aya....ke woh kya karte hain...bachpan mein bhi we use to see him doing some research making plans...we liked it...but we know they'll never agree for us to do this....but then after medicine we helped dad in one of his case...so we opt for being a cop........such an amazing job.........anyone can get crazy...n i sooo love it........haan woh baat alag hai ke mom ko her dum tension rehta hai............but its quite interesting n u can enhoy doing this.....

Rishi: tum do shaitatoon ka tu kaam hi yehi hai.......har dum kuch na kuch ulta karna....ok so tum logon ko koi problem nahin hogi na wahan ja ke...as u r already aware of everything.........

Armaan: rite buddy..........it will be fun doing it...........

Sujal: babu i know u love doing this work...n handling difficult cases but i dont want u to repeat wat u did at the tym of Max case........

Rishi: wat he did.........

Sujal: this little idiot of mine...got hit by bullet in his chest in order to save me...as that guy Max he was a goon n has stalked some women n we handled that case...i didnt knew that he is gona fir on me...as my back was towards him...n he saw that...n came in front of me...n the bullet hit him....n he was hospitalized for 2 weeks...as the bullet was gone deep inside his chest....bt thnx god nothing serious happened...n Kashish was sooo worried for him....but he doesnt stop doing all those stupid stunts of his..........

"he said but wid a fear n he was feeling lump in his throat...eyes filled wid emotions...as he was about to loose his little boy.......he still remembered the tym...when their parents died in a car crash.......Armaan was just 2.5 years old.... n atul 5.....Sujal was about to get married to Kasish...in a month or two......but this news broke him........but he has to be strong for his lil bros..who dont even knw wat happened.......

their dad Jai Mallik was a FBI cop n he got to know abt some important drug deals gonna happen...n he planned everything to caught them red handed....n in order to not to let him caught them someone failed their car breaks.....n Jai n Ananya...died in that car accidents leaving 3 of them alone to face this harsh world.....

sujal was not Jai Mallik's son...he was Jai's elder brother son...but after he died Jai adopted him...n educated him as he was not having any children of his own...Ananya also love him alot...n when he was around 15 years old...Atul born......n Sujal was sooo happy...that he got a bro to play wid...he love him alot.........n then after 2-3 years later...the lil master of the family born...Armaan..apple of everyone's eye..........

all love him alot...n pamper him as well....during this tym...Sujal met Kashish n it was like love at first sight...they were in the same college....same class....they become friends...then best friends...n then it turned into love...Jai n Ananya also love Kashish alot...n after the courtship of around 5 years...they thought to get married...

Kashish parents were more than happy...to have Sujal as their son in law....but they want to become something first...n then get married to their daughter...so they did their engagment...Kashish loved both Atul n Armaan alot...but Armaan more...as he was the small one.........n babu for everyone.......they love him alot............

but destiny played its game........here Sujal joined FBI....n on the other side..Jai n Ananya died.......before breathing the last breath..Ananya took promise from Sujal...to take care of Atul n Armaan...as they r so small n would never be able to understood....wat happened wid them....n Sujal promised to take care of them as their own children........

Sujal was completely broken.......he lost his parents...once again...n he was left wid a huge responsibilty........Kashish became his strength......n promised never to leave his side...n will be there for him always...........

they got married as Kashish was amandant to take care of the lil boys......though her parents were lil sad abt her decision as they want her to give some more tym to sujal to settle down...but no she just want to get married to Sujal...

after wedding.......Kashish took care of the boys n joined Sanjeevani...n Sujal started his work in FBI....Armaan n Atul use to call them bhai n bhabhi...where as for Armaan...she was his bha....as he couldnt say bhabhi.........but then he started calling her mom.....she was soo happy...n told Atul also to call him mom n sujal dad.............they decided not to have any baby...as Armaan n Atul might feel left out.......n from that day onwards.........Sujal n Kashish r their parents.........n loved them more than anything.........nothing in this world is more sweet n beautiful...then the relationship they all shared...........

Armaan n Atul knew abt their parents........n also knew SK r their bhai - bhabhi.........but that was the beauty of their relation.........SK always were more than parents for them.......there to help them in studies...sports......n even if Armaan fight wid one or te other guy...who tease his elder bro...there to support them..when they feel down............Sujal was their best buddy...n Kashish more than a mom......"

some one click infront of Sujal..n he came out of his thoughts.......

Armaan: dad....kya sochne lage.........

Atul: kya hua dad...r u alrite........

Sujal: kuch nahin babu......atul....im fine....ghar chalna hai......yah yahi rehna hai.......

Rishi: r u alrite........

Sujal: im fine yaar..........dont worry..............n Armaan he is rite...dont do something stupid ok...

'n Armaan nodded...n wid that they moved out of the office...to go home.........again all three of them...doing race.........ending up Armaan as first again...coz of his shortcuts.........

he went inside n hug his mom from back who was busy cooking food for them.......

Kashsih: agaye babu...woh donno kahan hain.......

Armaan: atey hoon gae mom....aj fir har gaye......... 'he said n kissed her cheek...where as she gently patted his face...widout turning n doing her work....' love u mom...

Kash: luv u too babu..........

Sujal: hey that not fair....meri biwi hai,....chal hat... "he said..entering wid Atul"

Armaan: kyun dad jealous haan......... "he said smirking"

Atul: armaan sudhar ja tu samjha........

Armaan: tu mein bigda kahan hoon......waise pata hai mom...bhai mujhe bol rahe thae...that he is gonna get his dream gal...........n he also dreams abt her.........

wat he said...yeah.......sweet...confident...helpful.........bubbly........... "he was also moving aside...coz he know wats coming next......."

Atul he was embarassed...n shocked hearing him......" ache bache tu rukh tujhe mein batata hoon..........n the cat - mouse game begin....wid Atul chasing Armaan.....hitting him wid cushions......

Kash: ok guys enough.........chalo go fresh up...n come for lunch..........

after sometym all three come back down...n settled on the dinning table....wich was laid wid all thei favorite food items.......

Sujal: Armaan Atul..u'll get ur tickets from the airport only....so after lunch...pack ur bags...u have flight at 9 in the evening........

Kash: where they r going........ " n sujal explained her everything.........." Babu.....u know.... "she couldnt find words to say....."

Armaan: i know mom dont worry........aisa waisa kuch nahin karunga........

Atul: dont worry mom mein hoon na...isko line pe rakhoon ga.......

n then they had their lunch...wid teasing...pulling each other leg.........doing masti...n all.........

Atul n Armaan...packed their packs........n after bidding bye to their parents.......board the flight to Mumbai.............

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hope...its long enough.................sorry..for any grammatical mistakes..........

plzz do press the like button............silent readers plz.........n guys...do comments...as they encourage me alot...to write................

take care...

loads of love...

anu.............

Edited by anumeha_rajat - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#69
Hey Anu,
Aww i knw KSG is soooooo handsome man why havent u joined KaSh Heaven yet ?
Coming to part,
Aww so Sujal n Kashish are their big brother n bhabi aww so sweet relation they all share,
waow two weeks in hospital,
the part was very sweet n amazing the way you showed their relation with each other n past it was sad n touching,
Lets see the romance of ArSh n AA
acha tell is RM is ur FF too?
do continue the next part soon and yh do update we are meant to be ArSh ff plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

All the best for ur presentation good luck
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Posted: 14 years ago
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niceee!!
can't wait for arsh moments!!

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