Love's Acid Test - A 2-Part Short Story (updated)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio
beautiful!!!

Thanks sweet scorpio.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: doosheeka
so sad, geet lost her baby only because of a misunderstanding

Yes, Geet lost her baby due to a misunderstanding but then the important thing is
Maaneet did not let this destroy their relationship.

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shivangi783

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

Part 2 was really sad!

The part where Geet was speaking while sobbing and between hiccups, where Maan was making her understand that both of them are fault was wriiten so well that it emotions came alive. You're really a fab writer!👏

Its good that they matured in their relationship with this incident but I am really sad that they lost their baby😭

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Rakhi Sunil Kumar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

I chanced to see this one and loved it. and I went through all your old posts also. very well written..

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: shivangi783
Part 2 was really sad!
The part where Geet was speaking while sobbing and between hiccups, where Maan was making her understand that both of them are fault was wriiten so well that it emotions came alive. You're really a fab writer!👏
Its good that they matured in their relationship with this incident but I am really sad that they lost their baby😭

Thanks Shivangi. It is sad that they lost the baby although they became a stronger couple after this. I surely do not want to see this played in the show for I am a supporter of the baby track. This piece was written to test my ability to convey deep sorrow through my writing and am happy that you felt the pain I wanted to convey.