Love's Acid Test - A 2-Part Short Story (updated)

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#71

beautiful parts. loved them.
heart wrenching part.
oh God. the baby lost, it's so painful.
If maan told her everything before.
If geet not jump in conclusion then might be result something different.
anyway, at least maan helped geet to recover this.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 14 years ago

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Ranjna Narang Monga

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Posted: 14 years ago

#72

A very beautiful Story Opti infact loved the way they became one after the tragedy.

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Viji79
Opti, I finished reading the second part too. Awesome. Loved this Maaneet for having supported each other through tough times. I was thinking about our previous discussion on the current track of the story. Can I suggest you make a post on this since I find the forum overflowing with posts going gaga about the current track on maaneet romance by members who seem to be satisfied with endless staring and almost kiss episodes and more interested in GC-DD chemistry.

Thanks Viji. Have a bad migraine attack. I'll try to verbalise my thoughts when I'm feeling better.

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Uthra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: Opti

Thanks Viji. Have a bad migraine attack. I'll try to verbalise my thoughts when I'm feeling better.

Oh take care and get well soon. would look forward to your post

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: thekolgal
It was sad dat Geet lost her baby...........after all baby was one of the most essential part of geet.
but it was nice of geet to understand Mann and seeking his support.
Opti you write amazingly well......👏👏
do update soon................n plz do add me to ur PM list 😊

Thanks. Certain things happen in life which shouldn't. I guess one can look at this as such a thing. I wove this plot to show the resilience of Maaneet's love. This one is over. If you want I can PM you on other fics I may write.

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: zahra15
vry nice...bt sad that geet lost their baby.....

Thanks Zahra. Yes, Geet lost her baby but Maaneet became stronger.

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: ansah
loved it.....great they worked it out together

it was difficult letting the baby go but in that process

Maan and Geet came clser and make their realtionship

Yes, Maaneet worked things out. They say that the real test of a couple's love is through go through such trials and tragedies. They can either make or break the couples.

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Opti

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
beautiful parts. loved them.
heart wrenching part.
oh God. the baby lost, it's so painful.
If maan told her everything before.
If geet not jump in conclusion then might be result something different.
anyway, at least maan helped geet to recover this.

If Maan had told her everything and Geet had not been hasty in jumping into conclusions, things could have been different and the baby would still be around. But then I wouldn't have a story to tell! Jokes apart, this story was to emphasise the strength of Maaneet's love even when faced with the biggest tragedy of all and their whole learning the importance of communication and trust in the process.