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POOJA KAMAL SHETH

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Posted: 14 years ago

#471

please do co rordinate with past n present n yy maan is so over poseesivee i hope he realises his mistake soon n when he sees geet he should nt be poseesive n try to egret about his behaviour

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divareena

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Flashback

So sad that maan's extreme possessiveness and violence drove geet away from him. I can imagine the pain geet's father must have faced when he saw the bruises on geet's arm.

No father can see his daughter in pain.

Present

So maan thinks that geet is dead and is now drinking. Ranjits words made him that he drove geet away but I would not say that he is responsible for her death.

Please continue in the present now as I want to see if maan has changed.

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Nav2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#473

Precap is interesting please continue present I think past is done thx...

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 14 years ago

#474

Well the past & present co-ordination will work good for this ff coz I guess you would be telling the present scenarios with some references to the past especially Maan's reaction after this coz till now we mainly got Geet's POV. Whatever you do I want Maan to really suffer big time 😡 for what he did to Geet ...

Whichever way you write its fine as you ' ve etched out a gripping plot

so won't mind past - present co-ordination or timely episodes 👍🏼

All in all A BRILLIANT UPDATE 👏 ...

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sommie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#475

wonderful update👏

i think past n present both.....

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mchopra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#476

Wow simi that was great..and abt past and present..do it the way u did in this part..amkes sense,,and there is still more of past..i thought it will be over now..hehe..

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swetha10

@swetha10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#477

wow lovely update.. liked the past n present.. precap is gud.. continue soon

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maanmeet1

@maanmeet1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#478

awesome update.......m glad geet went.........ranjit n all did a good drama.........maan was convinced..........he realized wht he did till now n regretting........bt cant forgive wht he did to her for 2 yrs.........

good dat geet knws maan is vd suraj so she wont go in front of him...........superb update........continue as u use to do it.......past present both.............

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#479

hey dear....very nice update.....i think u should show both past and present together.....it makes the fic interesting and different...otherwise it'll turn very monotonous....

i love reading the past scenes...and moreover when maan is a changed man....it will only show when we get to know the past things....otherwise the change in him won't be really evident....

plzzzzzzzz cont soooon

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maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#480

i like the past and present because it keeps the suspense factor to know more..but seriously this maan needed a wake up call...i am very happy that geet left him...

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