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Posted: 14 years ago
poor geet
maan came back...
n they didn't meet! 😲
waiting for them to meet
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor Geet thank God Maan did see her fabulous update pls cont soonnnnnnnn thanks pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome update

Loved it

Cant wait da next part

Con soon

Thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
Maan saw Geet
In past
He was mad for sure
He jus thought of himself not others
Loved Suraj he is sweet n caring
Lets c wats aage
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hey guys!

As promised...I am updating this fan fic this weekend heheheh....I hope you guys enjoy this update and could see as to why I didn't make Geet and Maan come face to face..I wanted to show you guys how Maan is feeling and what he is going through after Geet....I think I might make this into a SS...and start with another SS or FF of this idea I have in mind but umm not sure as of now..hehehe
Until than enjoy this update!!!
Chapter 8
Maan Pov:
Maan came back to his hotel room after the engagement party which was cut short because Suraj finance left without informing anyone...he ordered whisky...he sat on the chair..and drank the whisky silently...he pulled out something from his pocket and held it in front of him..tears started to form in his eyes...he poured another drink...police inspector's words rang in his head "I'm sorry Mr. Khurana but your wife is no more...here is her mangalsutre and the clothes she was wearing at the time of the accident" tears escaped from his eyes..."I am sorry Geet..for all the pain I caused you..." he poured another drink and sat on the chair thinking....
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Flashback:
A week after their marriage...Maan was getting ready..when Geet brought him his coffee...she stands behind him watching him get ready...Maan turns around and faces her...
Maan (pulls her toward him and holds her by her waist and kisses her neck...) What happened? (while still kissing)

Geet: Can you drop me to college on the way?

Maan (stops kissing and looks at her): college?

Geet: haan ek hafta hogaya hai main college nahi gayi...exams bhi aah rahe hai

Maan (lets her go): Why do you need to go to college?

Geet: What do you mean?

Maan (holds her by the waist again): Geet you don't need college...I make more than enough money...

Geet: But Maan I want to continue my studies...I want to get my degree...

Maan: We will talk about this later...(Geet walks out of the room and goes down..after a while he comes down..he sees Rohit talking to Geet)

Rohit: Geet here are your notes that you missed so far...are you coming today?

Geet: woh main

Maan: She is not going to college anymore? (comes and stands next to Geet while Rohit looks shocked) She is married now and taking care of the house is her first priority..(he holds her tight by the waist)

Rohit (looks at Geet): Geet you are almost done...come on you can't leave Meera and me like this?

Maan: Like I said Rohit...she will continue her studies later but not for now (looks at the clock) don't you have to go to college Rohit? (Rohit left giving Maan an angry look..Geet looks down controlling her tears)

Geet: What will I do at home..with nothing to do?

Maan: I don't know (hugs her) am sure you will find something...now I have to go..bye...see you when I get back...(Geet shakes her head..he kisses her on her lips and leaves...Geet throws the notes on the floor and runs upstairs to her bedroom with teary face...)

Geet POV:
Maan is maybe right...I don't need to go to college..I am going to be a housewife..he is rich and can support me well enough...he made the right decision..I would be so busy with college that I wouldn't have time to take care of the house...No I can't do that...he works day and night and he has been alone all his life..so maybe that's why he doesn't want me to go to college...his happiness is more important to me than mine...maybe I will ask him if I can work with him instead (sits on the bed excited) that way we can spend some time together and get to know each other better...yeah I will ask him as soon as he comes home...(Geet smiled and hurriedly got the food ready and waited for maan to come...Geet was in the living room waiting for him pretty excited to ask him if she can work..she stands up from the sofa as soon as she hears Maan come)

Geet: aap aagaye...mujhe aapse ek baat karni thi

Maan (sits on the sofa and pulls her on his lap and nuzzles her neck): hmm bolo

Geet: Kya main aapke saath kam kar sakti hoon? (Asked with a smile)

Maan: why?

Geet: because I might get bored at home and this way I won't be bored if I am working

Maan: But I like seeing you home waiting for me..it makes it exciting for me to know that someone is home waiting (he kisses her neck)

Geet: But Maan I want to work..

Maan (angry) Enough! (She gets scared) I told you Geet the first day...I don't like repeating myself...(He holds her tight by the waist...it was giving her pain..she flinched...he pulls her closer to him and aggressively kisses her lips..she had tears in her eyes as Maan holds her tighter and tighter..after a while) Geet I don't want to talk about this ever again...You understand?

Geet: yes (nervously)

Maan: Good..now lets have dinner..I am very hungry (she slightly smiles and both have dinner...after dinner Maan picks Geet up and brings her upstairs to the room looking at her with love)

End Flashback!
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Suraj: Mahi...Mahi...open the door..what happened? (He kept on knocking on Geet's door...as soon as he found out that Geet is not in the function..he right away left and went after her...)

Geet heard knocks on the door...she wanted to open the door but didn't know how to face him and what to tell him... "No I have to tell Suraj everything" after a while she got enough courage and opened the door..there she found Suraj sitting on the floor worried...as soon as he heard the door being opened he quickly got up and walked up to Geet..

Suraj: Mahi why did you leave the engagement party??

Mahi: I have to tell you something..

Suraj (looks at her condition..he could tell that she has been crying): No Mahi...I think I know what happened

Mahi (looks at him shocked): You do??

Suraj: Yeah it is understandabel that you miss your family...(he holds her by the shoulder) Don't worry Mahi I am with you no matter what...

Mahi: no Suraj

Suraj: Sssh don't do that again Mahi..I was so scared...I have been looking for you everywhere thinking something might've happened to you...

Mahi ("How should I tell him the truth?") Suraj the thing is

Suraj: Listen let's go inside..you look tired..get some sleep...we can talk about this tomorrow...(He puts Geet on the bed and tucks her in...Geet felt exhausted..she closes her eyes...Suraj left as soon as Geet went to sleep...)

Precap: Present: Suraj: Mahi when are you coming to work?
Mahi: Suraj I am not feeling well..I won't be able to come...
Suraj: what! (Maan looks at Suraj talking on the phone)
P.S. Sorry if it is kind of on the short side hehee I will try to update next part by this week maybe by Friday the most!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Well atleast Maan feels bad in the present 😡
Edited by luvabbybaby - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
intrtn ff... jus strtd redn...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awe poor geet maan I think has realised what he has lost and ooh so they faked geets death hmm and the flashback maan was pretty harsh but I suppose living a life alone coils make people like that but ooh poor geet and awe suraj is sweet anyways great update and ooh geet avoiding maan can't wait 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
uhhh why wont he listen to her i want her to tell him the truth ...
hope maaneet meeting is soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg past maan is very very mean........no idea if he changed or not now😭😭

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