Mayur FF..[Kabhi Hum Bhi Khoobsurat The]last pt123 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
interesting concept Maria!
gr8 start
loved the first part
continue soon
nd plzzzzzz add me to ur pm list 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

interesting concept Maria!

gr8 start
loved the first part
continue soon
nd plzzzzzz add me to ur pm list 😊

Thank u so uchr uur lovely comment.....🤗
i ll continue very soon...n surely pm you..😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Just read d concept n cs

lovd it

cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Wooooo

part 1 was super duper awesum

loved it

cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: sariska_mnarti

Wooooo

part 1 was super duper awesum

loved it

cont soon

@sariska....Thank u so much for ur lovely comment....🤗
i ll continue very soon...😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
very nice character stekch, Mayank is arrogant, thats really interesting...
and As name shows there will be drastic turn in Nupur's life...
very different and nice concept..
really liked it..
thnx alot for the pm Maria..
And really All the best for ur SS...
and add me in ur pm list..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: -moona-

very nice character stekch, Mayank is arrogant, thats really interesting...

and As name shows there will be drastic turn in Nupur's life...
very different and nice concept..
really liked it..
thnx alot for the pm Maria..
And really All the best for ur SS...
and add me in ur pm list..

@moona...Thank u so much for ur lovely comment..🤗
means a lot to me...
InsAhllah..i ll continue soon...n surely pm u...😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
Good luck and congo for your new FF....
title seems good !
and the story too...I cannot promise to comment regularly coz I comment rarely now-a-days !
so don't think I'm not interested.... :)

Take Care,
Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: -shabnoor-

Good luck and congo for your new FF....
title seems good !
and the story too...I cannot promise to comment regularly coz I comment rarely now-a-days !
so don't think I'm not interested.... :)

Take Care,
Fatima

heyyy Fatima
Thank u so much for ur appreciation🤗
i ll try to write more better....
Thanks a lot for ur lovely comment...😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40

Thank u so much for ur precious comments.....🤗🤗🤗

plzzzzz bear my mistakes😳

i know you are waiting for Mayank entry but

Before Mayank entry...there is another important character....who plays important part in this story...Adhiraj.

u will have to wait for Mayur meeting

Part 2

Exams were finished and finally Nupur joined Computer college...she was very excited..

today was her first day...she got ready for computer college...she wear pink colour shalwar kameez..she never applied any makeup nor even kajal...she was Natural beauty...her lips were naturally pink and her eyes were big chocolate brown..she was innocent angel...

...she taught

kaun kehta hai ke sapne pore nahi hote....sapne pore hote hain..agar koi un ko pura kerne ki koshish kare....aj main zindagi main pehla qadam barha rahi hoon...aisa lagta hai ke mujhe Azadi mil gaye hai...Azad hawa main saans lena kitna accha lagt hai na..hum apni zindagi ke kuch pal apni merzi se bhi guzarte hain...apni merzi..hum ne toh aj tak kuch bhi apni merzi se nahi kiya...na apni merzi ke kapre kharede,na kabhi apni merzi ki chorian kharedin...kabhi kuch bhi apni pasand ka nahi liya...hamesha Dia,sneha ya gunjan bhabi ki pasand ki hue cheese pehen li...aj pehli bar koi kam hamari merzi se ho raha hai...kabhi kabhi humain lagta hai ke hum bhi aik pinjre main qaid prinda ki tarha hain...jo azadi ke sapne dekh raha hai per pata nahi azadi kab miley gi...

Flashback

Nupur was just 5 yrs...baba ap ne mere parinda ko kyun azad kiya...mujhe us se apne pas rakhna tha..dekhain na mera pinjra khali ho gaya hai..she was sad and angry with her father,,,

her father smiled at her innocence....Nupur meri taraf dekho...

Nupur...Nahi hum ap se naraz hain...ap ne hamara prinda kyun azad kiya...

her father took her in his Arms n kissed her forehead....Nupur

Parinde hawa main udhte hi acche lagte hain...unhain pinjre main band ker ke koi faida nahi...pinjra un ki sansain bhi un se cheen leta hai

Nupur asked her father innocently.....saans na lene se toh woh mer sakte hai na

her father replied...hmm is siliye toh hum ne us se azad ker diya..takay woh apni merzi se urdh sake

khuli hawa main saans le sake...

phir toh ap ne theek kiya...she smiled and hugged her father

FLASHBACK ENDS

Tears were filled in her eyes...baba ne theek kaha tha....parinde urdhte hi acche lagte hain...

Gunjan

voice intereptted her taughts...

Nupur

!!

she wipes her tears and replied...ji bhabhi

Gunjan

....Nupur jaldi neeche a..tere computer college jane ka time ho gaya hai...pehle hi din late jane ka irada hai kya

Nupur

...aye bhabi,,,bas tayar hoon

she took her notebook and pen and went down stairs....

Gunjan

was waiting for her ...

aj hamari Nupur pehle din computer college ja rahi hai...toh us ka munh toh meetha kerna chahiye na...main ne tere liye gajar ka halwa banaya hai kha le...tera favourite hai na

Nupur

took plate from her hand...Thank u bhabi...love y...By god kya halwa banaya hai...maza aa gaya..sh said after tasting it

Gunjan

..accha ab zayada makhan met laga

Dia

who was watching their conversation..couldnot tolerate and said...Nand aur bhabi main bohat pyar jataya ja raha hai..Gunjan is ko zayada ser per met charha...aisa na ho..aik din tere hi ser pe char ke nach ne lage...is ka koi bharosa nahi...mujhe toh kuch theek nahi lag raha..yeah koi na koi chand toh zaroor charhaye gi..

Gunjan

looked at Nupur...who was trying to controlling her tears...

Gunjan knew Dia,s words hurt her

Gunjan

..Dia..bas bhi karo...kya bole ja rahi ho ..woh bachi hai us ke samne kaisi battain ker rahi ho...kehne se pehle soch toh liya karo...ke tumhare lafzoon ka kisi pe kya asar ho ga..she said angirly

Dia

...theek hai jo jee main aye karo...phir bad main met pachtana...and she left

Gunjan

tried to change her mood...Dia na mujhe thori mental lagti hai..she said with smile n Nupur also started smiling...

Gunjan

,,,tu ab ja...tujhe der ho rahi ho gi na....she kissed her forehead n gave her blessings

Nupur

also kissed her on her cheeks...you are my best bhabi...love y and she left for college

Gunjan

smiled and said...bilkul pagal hai...

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she entered her college...it was big college...

she entered in her class..there were some boys already in class...they were chatting with eachother...she sat on first row.she feel uncomfortable becaz she noticed they were seeing her..she was the only girl in class...after sometime a girl came and sat beside her...

Nupur,,,,Thank God n smiled

she looked Nupur and smiled...hiii...i m Pooja

Nupur

replied with smile...hiii...i m Nupur...Nupur Bhushan...pooja smiled and shaked hands...Nupur noticed her dress....pooja tum ne itne chote kapre kyun pehne hain...kapra kam kharida tha kya?

pooja

replied with smile...Nupur you are very innocent...aise short kapre pehne ka fasion hai...

Nupur

taught...yeah kaisa fashion hai...she was surprised becaz in her house...she n her bhabis were only wear shalwar kameez..and never she saw them to bought short dresses.....

ohhkk...Nupur said...

pooja and Nupur was busy with chatting when another boy entered in class...Nupur looked at him...he was wearing white shirt n jeans and was looking handsom...

pooja saw him and called him...hiii Adi

Adhiraj

...hiii pooja

they hugged eachother

Nupur

was looking at them with surprised...larka aur larki Hug ker rahe hain...chee chee..kaise log hain yahan..lagta hai in ke parents ne inhain tehzeeb nahi sikhai...she taught

Adhiraj

Noticed beautiful girl was sitting besides pooja...she was wearing pink colour suit...her eyes were beautiful and her beautiful hair spread on her shoulder...he was mesmerised by her beauty..

Beautiful...he said looking at Nupur

Nupur

lowered her eyes....suddenly she feel uncomfortable

Adi

...pooja apni friend se introuduction toh karao...

Pooja

looked at Nupur and said.....yeah Nupur hain..is ne bhi aj hi college join kiya hai

He taught and smiled,,,,,,,,,Nupur se Dosti kerni pardhe gi...she is so beautiful and innocent...asani se phas jaye gi...

after sometime lecture started and everyone busy with lecture...but Nupur feel adi,s continously gazeing on her....her hands were trembling

Pooja

noticed sudden changed in Nupur,s behaviour....

Pooja

...are u alright...tumhari tabiat toh theek hai....

Nupur

...yeah...i m alright..she replied with little smile but her heart said..something worse would happend soon....

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After lecture pooja and Nupur was walking in corridor when Adi called them...heyy girls kahan ja rahi ho..Nupur and Pooja looked back..Adi was standing opposite them and was smiling..pooja replied with smile...ghar jane ki tayari ker rahe hain...class toh khatam ho gaye hai...

Adi

...per itni jaldi bhi kya hai...he was looking at Nupur and said..

Nupur

feel uncomfortable..

Adi..

Nupur tumhain pata hai ke tumhari ankhain kitni khoobsurat hain...he was looking at her face with lovingly...

pooja

...o mister tum meri friend ke saath flirt ker rahe ho

Adi

...meri itni majal...jo such hai woh keh raha hoon

Nupur

blushed

Nupur

...pooja hamain ab chalna chahiye...she said.. trying to avoid Adi glancing

Ad

i...Beautiful...Itni jaldi bhi kya hai...

Nupur

lowered her eyes and said...nahi woh hamain der ho rahi hai bhabi intezar ker rahi hoon gi.....she knew Adi was looking at her...but she did not want to look at in his eyes.....becaz there were something in his eyes...which disturbed her

she said bye and went to house

Adi said ..bye

he taught....kitni der mujh se door bhago gi....

Nupur sensed something wrong ....mujhe aisa kyun lagta hai ke kuch bura hone wala hai....

Main gira tha toh bohat log ruke the lekin
sochta yeah hoon ke aye the udhane kitne
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so here is Next part..i hope u all liked it...plzzzz press like button and do comment...if u liked it...ur comments means a lot to me

Precap:

Mayank,s Entry

Edited by maria-soniarti - 14 years ago

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