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Posted: 14 years ago

#491

Originally posted by: sakadafi
Great update...I really enjoyed it. Both Maan and Geet are merciless in their revenge 😆 Can't wait to see what they dish out next...

Do continue soon...

thank you...... as of now they are messing casually they'll get dirty soon... as in dirty dirty you know 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#492

Originally posted by: Azmii
awesome ff, just read it and i loved it
if u do pm plzz pm me

loved it, cant wait for the next part

thank u...😳 will pm u😃

Originally posted by: mchopra
Muskaan yeh bili toh kuch zayaada he nakchadi hai...zayaada Maan satayga na toh noch dalegi and pakka i will love it...hehe../hats off..u make me laugh like a maniac..thnks..

awww... u calling my geet nakchiri not fair... she is just a bit pampered😳 like me😆... but yeah noch ke khane wali baat is absolutely true😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#493

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25
awwwwwwwwwwwesum prt
Luv maneet n their fight
Update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Thanxxx for d pm

tahnk u😳

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Posted: 14 years ago

#494

Originally posted by: abina03
😆😆😆😆 salt coffee to Maan.

Maan don't know geet's bodyguards 😆😆😆😆😆

he's gonna get a lot of other stuff as well😆

Originally posted by: angullgrl91
hahahha...this is getting hilarious!
great job!

thank u😳

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komlika

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Posted: 14 years ago

#495

Originally posted by: 7thHeaven
poor maan😲.... i thought in this update geet was the one cornered😆

its poor maan for me 😭...... see he was force to drink salt coffee..... geet made him no no sorry think he is gay........ ab geet will take her sweet revenge from him........😭

List of things geet did to maan:
1. 3 slap for no reason
2. stomped his foot 2 times for no reason 😭
3. ask him to apologize Adi 😲
4. called him animal 😡
5. called him UGLY 😡
6. ask him to jump in gutter 😲
7. made him gay 😲
8. gave him salt coffee 😒

geet out number maan SO ITS POOR MAAN 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#496

Originally posted by: komlika

its poor maan for me 😭...... see he was force to drink salt coffee..... geet made him no no sorry think he is gay........ ab geet will take her sweet revenge from him........😭

List of things geet did to maan:
1. 3 slap for no reason he carssed her cheek
2. stomped his foot 2 times for no reason 😭 he made her legs burn in pain due to climbing stairs
3. ask him to apologize Adi 😲he made her follow him
4. called him animal 😡he called her a cat...
5. called him UGLY 😡 he thought of her as cute
6. ask him to jump in gutter 😲she fell in mud
7. made him gay 😲 he dismissed her smell as that of a pig
8. gave him salt coffee 😒he asked her to get coffee... she hasnt done anything on her own her entire lifetime

geet out number maan SO ITS POOR MAAN 😆

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Malar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#497

nice part😊
loving maneet's fight, this time geet is cornered😆
thanx for the pm

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MsMovielover

@MsMovielover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#498

omg they are both crazy 🤣
their games wont stop anytime soon cause they are both stubborn 😆
lets see what geet does next

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Water

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Posted: 14 years ago

#499

I came across your FF today only.

It is simply amazing.

I love Maan n Geet's chemistry.

They love to add Fuel to the fire....

Loved the update.

PM me when u update

Thanks

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basicquestion1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#500

read u'r ff in one go. really well written.

can u plz add me to u'r pm list.👍🏼

luvd the way u described geet's past, her family and her brother's caring nature.❤️

i hope geet reads her mom's letter. i have a feeling it'll soothe her pain and anguish.

geet hugged maan and maan felt her cheeks..shoo shweet ❤️

i enjoyed every bit of u'r ff apart from two things. first i actually didn't like geet man handling a stranger. i don't like whn ppl act as if sumthings r ok if done by girls and totally wrong if men do that. i'm sure it won't b same if maan slapped geet 3 times on her face with full force without knowing her and let's say if geet threw maan's shirt away..it won't be ok if maan had taken a shot at geet's feet brutally..i'm sure we wud find it all very unethical.

secondly..i didn't enjoy geet lying. when maan asked if she had added salt to his coffee, she said "I did not add anything to your coffee".....

plz don't take it negatively. i don't mean to disrespect u'r ff in any possible manner. i hope my comment won't make u sad.