..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![1] {A SaJan FF}

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Posted: 14 years ago

#351

hey joseph awsome part totally loved the update too goo and lonnnggg 😆 i love how samrat keeps thinking about gunjan and yes the engagement didnt happen good causs that would have been so bad.....anyways continue soon and thanx for the pm

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tanzeel

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ammykhan

@ammykhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#352

awesome part

loved it

keep up the good job

continue soon

thx 4 the pm

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Sonia

@SwaNia_1

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#353

OMG......OMG......OMG.......Joseph i m really getting short of words !!! infact i m loving ur FF to the core ..........completely speechless............ur whole update......... each n every moment is wonderful .........very curious for ur next update...plss updte soon........really today i m feeling strange also b'coz till today i was getting pm's for our updates to post soon n now i m telling u to update fast ...isn't it great!!!! u r a super writer i must say aborn writer ...keep up ur xtra ordinary good work Joseph ...n thnx for the Pm n once again pls pls plsssss cont ASAP......

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gunjan

@1gunjan7

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#354

OMG!!👏👏 Joseph What an Update and What a Rocking start of the update.....👏👏..the way u started the update with Samrat lost in his thoughts was just Excellent...I loved it fully👍🏼..After meeting n seeing Gunjan 4 the 1st time Samrat got so deeply lost in his thoughts of Gunjan that accept Sorry word he didnot hear anything she Said 2 Him😲😉😆😊.let alone hear he even didnt see Gunjan leave the garden area😲😉😆...WOW!!😉😃 👏.. But I must Say this U expressed gunjans Sweet beauty very beautifully through Samrats thoughts👍🏼 ..Awesome Scene 👏👏👏👏👏👏................even Richa - Samrat conversation was interesting....Like Samrat even I find Richa Irritating.....😉😆..........Well well Samrat went 2 meet Richa's friend because he thought Gunjan might be there also😉😃WOW!!....Samrat wants 2 meet Gunjan again😍... Dia Maa Knows His choice very well 😉..Like Dia Maa Samrat was also impressed with Gunjan at 1st meet😊............I feel N think Samrat Has Fallen in love with gunjan at 1st sight But he has not realized it yet N I think He will realize it but Not So Soon It will take a lot of time ..........😉 Right JOSEPH😉...................................................

Gunjan 1st meeting with meet Dia maa N Samrat this way I think means Yeh Kudrat ka Ishara hai Or here I will Say Joseph ka Ishara hai 😉Sajan 1st meet itni rocking thii Toh Sajan 2nd meet aur Bhi interesting hogi 😉n Sajan uniting as 1 n marriage itna easy Nahi hoga...Thoda bahut zyaada time lagega😉..RIGHT??....Rajan Meet scene after PC was very sweet.........OMG!! 😆What a party😉😆 1st Dia Maa Got Gunjan engaged 2 Samrat Now O.M. Got Rajan Married😲😆.........why doesn't anyone let gunjan speak??.😕😉......1st Gunjan was not able 2 tell Dia maa the truth 😉 now Rahul Wouldn't let gunjan tell O.M. the truth.........But I must say this Rahul-Om convo was Interesting and Rajan convo after OM left them was also Amazing...Gunjan Told Rahul about Dia Maa But she didn't tell about Samrat😲 😉😃..Wow!!......Aab Rajan ki Marriage hogi or Sajan Yeh toh Joseph hi janta hai 😉....But I hope ultimately Sajan he Unite hoan😉................Pleaseeeeeeeeeee Joseph😊........

Dia Maa-Samrat-Richa scene was also well written..the way Richa called Dia Maa Aayaa this scene showed Richa's true nature.Richa is so ILL-Mannered girl she doesnt know how 2 behave with elders.😡..I loved it when Samrat scolded Richa and When he Said 2 Dia Maa U r my Mother Wow!! Awesome n sweet scene👍🏼....Dia-Maa Samrat convo was also interesting and Dia Maa thoughts that may Gunjan come into Samrats life N teaches Him about love N gives him true love was Amazing N beautifull Thought👍🏼..........these Dialogues spoken by Dia maa ---.Rishte dil se nibhaye jaate hain SAMRAT...Dimaag se nahin...Dimaag se nibhaye gaye rishte sirf Rishton ka Dikhawa hota hai...unme koi Feelings nahin hoti..koi Emotions nahin hote..." I agree Rishta dil sey nibhaya jata hai....COMPLETELY Rocking dialogue.....👏......Dia Maa loves gunjan and feels she is right 4 Samrat not Richa ..Well I also feel the same😊........

SD n Rd convo n Rd n Varun Convo was interesting....Samrat wants 2 marry Richa for 55% partnership But Samrats Dad is so Selfish and self centered he wants Samrat 2 marry richa bec SD wants 2 take over a company..😲😲😲😲😲😡😡........What type of father is he? no wonder Samrat hates him.........OMG!! RD company mein CBI raid😲..Well I wonder who is behind this???😕😉Samrat??😕😉May be or May be not? 😕😕............But I Think I know who is behind this RAID in Richa's Dad's Company 😉😉....WHO ELSE But FF writer Joseph 😉😆😆😆...I know joseph Like Us all u also donot want Samrat engagement with RICHA..RIGHT DEAR😉😆.........Hey DONOT MIND PLSS I AM JUST Joking 😉............ WELL whoever is behind this Raid I am Happy that Sam-Richa ki engagement nahi hui YEHhhhhhhhhhhh👏👏👏👏🥳🥳.......Thanks joseph🤗................

Hey this Dialogue when I read it when Richa Said ----Samrat usse kitna bura lagega...aakhir hamari Engagement ke liye usne bhi toh kitne sapne dekhe hongeU Know JOSEPH when I read this Dialogue Spoken by Richa I could not stop laughing..Samrat ko Bura laga hoga 😲😉😆😆😆😆😆🤣🤣............Sam is marrying Richa 4 shares otherwise he wouldnt look at her ......and SD must be Sad But Samrat must be Very HAppy 😃😉😉.................Rajan Conversation in the car was interesting ..Gunjan is so innocent she didnt even realise Rahul was giving hints by talking about SON ....I think Gunjan will be shocked when she finds out Rahuls feelings 4 her...............Rahul is just amazing n shocking 1st thought about Marriage 😲 Now SON😲😲😲😲......Hey joseph Rahul ko samjha doh zyaada Hawa mein Fly maat karey and Day dream zyaada maat karey 😡😡..........Samjhaogey na JOSEPH😉😆😆..................Loved this amazing n fantastic dialogues n scenes 👏...............Last part of FF update was really very interesting..........👍🏼...Thoughts of All 4 characters were very well expressed n described..👏👏.....Especailly liked Sajans thoughts 👍🏼.....Samrat was thinking about Gunjan n her sweetness ...And Gunjan though she has met Samrat 4 1st time but she knew immediately that Samrats is hiding pain behind his anger...Wow!! DiaMaa is correct Gunjan is right 4 Samrat ..Only she can change Sam n give him true love n happiness😊😊.................And Yaa I agree Joseph Feelings can never be controlled ..........I feel joseph U r going 2 show this soonnnnn😉......But what will happen in future of Ur FF?😕 only God knows or U know Joseph So Update Soonnnnnnnnnnn....Really Excited 2 read the next part.....thanks 4 Pm 🤗..........

Hey SOHAM Rahul neh Gunjan Ko DUFFER KAHA😲.....DUFFER😲..........KUCH YAAD AAYA BUDDY 😉😆 Yeh Sarey Gunjan ko hii duffer N Tubelight kyoon boltey hain😡....😉😆😆...........Anyways Once again Joseph I am speechless 😆😆...Now U will think Itana Long FEEDBACK N REVIEW ke Baad She saying me Speechless.😡.😉😆 😆What Can I say I am very impressed with your ff every update 👍🏼....it makes me speechless and when I am speechless I write n type more😉😆................Seriously Totally MindBlowing, Stupendous, Rapchick, Dasoon n Magnificent update👍🏼......Every scene n dialogue from beginning till end was so amazing and interesting that I feel that I should go on praising U Joseph..........😊..............OUTSTANDING WORK 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏............

SORRY 4 SUCH A LONGEST COMMENT...........KYA KARROON the update is so excellent that I COULDNT CONTROL MYSELF FROM TYPING MORE......😉😃...............

Love Gunjan😊😊.............................

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Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: Anjali_12
Joseph u rocked👏 !!!!!!What an update!!!!!!!!!!!!😃Really enjoyed reading it😛..Gunjan,Samrat & Rahul's feelings were really portrayed well..Loved the way u showed the hinds of future storyline...Richa & Sammy's conversation was really showing that they r so different from each other..Loved Dadi & Samrat's scene a lot!!!!I liked the way Samrat stood up for her & fight for her against Richa!!!!The CBI twist was fabulous!!!!!SaJan both thinking about eachother was so cute!!!!!!!Can't believe this was just intro...😲 If this is intro...then what will be the real story.........😆Can't wait to read it...Plzzzzzz continue soon..

Thanks Anjali, for your sweet feedback n appreciation.😊 Its really a lot to me. I just completed the climax of this story (Roughly sketch)....so,now I am feeling too much relaxed because,this was very-very tough for me and I am totally satisfied with my story climax ,Its very emotional but,Happy ending. I am really thankful to all of you....for your regular feedback n suggestions.
Yaa....this was only intro. Now,story begins...no, actually a Love triangle begins.😉 Now,Next Part is ready ,I'll post it on 18th March.

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Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#356

Originally posted by: aashizin
hey joseph it was really very wonderful part 👏loved it to the core and enjoyed it as well , loved the way u described all 's feeling loved sajan's strange feelings for each other now can't wait for next part do continue soon

Thanks Aashizin for your precious feedback.Its really a lot to me.The realisation of Love is not easy for any one...aur agar woh Samrat ho toh....😉 Its very difficult.I'll post my next part,withi in some day.

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Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#357

Originally posted by: preety88
wonderful update....samrat keeps thinking about gunjan awww..cont soon

Thanks Preety for your precious comments here.😳 n thanks a ton for your regular feed-back.

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Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: karantakiar
hey dear,i ws jus w8ing for ur updt,nd u finaly updt.
luv d updt yar.
superb,fantastic,awsm,mindblwing.
luvly updt yar.
ab toh i cannot w8 for d othr updt .
plz plz plz plz plz cnt wid nxt part soon.
luv u
vritika

Thanks a ton Vritika for your lovely n precious comment.Its very encouraging for me.I love to read your all comments Because,Its feed back of a great writer.😳

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Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#359

Originally posted by: SHAMSHIR-MJHT
Hi JOSEPH ! Again Awesome Update bro.👏 FANTASTIC UPDATE 👏 I loved it. Superb presentation of emotions and feelings👏 I liked SAMRAT's thought part.... I actually, wanted this.

As usual RaJan convo is center of Attraction.😉 I loved your Sense of Humor.... you are showing it brilliantly through RAHUL's Dio.👏 👏 👏.Hats of You for this.👏 RAHUL's logic about Accident , P.C.. , During convo with Old Men ...😆 Reporter-Frog similarity 🤣 and that 'Gladrags Model's' thing...🤣 Its Mind Blowing. Its very original thought. And I appreciate Your this novelty. Its very unique talent.

I think,Its a really Current n New Update...in true sense.You perfectly used the incident of TSUNAMI n corruption in COMMON WEALTH GAME,2010👏 these things is important for Realistic Touch in story. Your Update is long but, not boring.😊 and if You can... please send to me that Edited part. Please, do update soon.

-S O H A M.

Thanks Bro. for your encouragement n cute feed-back.😳 Its very important for debutant writer just like me.😳 RAHUL's character is very funny so,I try to justice his character nothing else, Thanks for liking my "Sense of Humor"😆.Actually,I deleted that "Edited Part" from my WINDOW MAIL Draft sec. so,I can't send to It, Sorry Bro!😳 And,Please reply to my PMs.😊

Edited by Joseph_A - 14 years ago

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Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: hiiiiiiiiiii
hey joseph awsome part totally loved the update too goo and lonnnggg 😆 I love how samrat keeps thinking about gunjan and yes the engagement didnt happen good causs that would have been so bad.....anyways continue soon and thanx for the pm

love

tanzeel

Thanks Tanzeel for your precious comments.Yes, its long...and I am really feel sorry for this😳 now, I decided to edit some portions of my next update.😳 Samrat's engagement hogi Yaar but,that sequence is very Important part of my Story. Woh story ka Turning Point hoga......Its totally unexpected.after that Engagement all four's life would be change forever. Please wait for that Mega Twist. Thanks again for follow this FF continuously.

Edited by Joseph_A - 14 years ago

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