..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![1] {A SaJan FF}

First Previous

Page

103

Next Last

Frequent Posters

aashi

@aashizin

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#321

hey joseph again wonderful update 👏 whole update was amazing seriously loved and enjoyed whole update 👏sajan's first meet was very nice everything started with misunderstanding dadi's talk to sam's shouting on gun , but seriously loved the way u present it 👏 now can't wait for next part do continue soon and thanks for pm

Quote

Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#322

Originally posted by: 1gunjan7
OMG!! Joseph Wow!! What a Mind blowing Update👍🏼I am speechless Dear I have no words to express what I am feeling after reading such an awesome update ...and U KNOW Joseph WHEN I get speechless n have no words 2 express after reading excellent work Then at that time I write more n at that time my comments r really long 😉So Long Comment read karney ke liyee ready ho jaoo 😉😆...But Seriously speaking Joseph I mean it Dude story line is amazing.story is progressing very well.👍🏼......each n every scene and dialogue were just rocking.....and presentation was Fantastic ..whole update from start 2 finish was totally MIndblasting and Outstanding.....................👏Wow!! man Joseph u r a Genious and U r really a very very n extremely talented person....👍🏼👍🏼........And I mean it my friend..😊........................

I loved the whole update a lotttttttt.....Rahul n Gunjan scene and their conversation was very sweet ..loved it completely.........Rahul is so sweet n he is a very good n caring friend and loves Gunjan so much When he saw Gunjan was nervous he tried to cheer her up n calm her down and Even though knowing that party is important 4 him n his career n he could even loose job if he doesnt attend still he decided 2 leave the party for Gunjan Wow!!👍🏼..Amazing n nice scene and the way he calmed her down n made her nervousness disappear was amazing ..it was very well written....Rahul really loves Gunjan a lotttttttt.......................

And Conversation between Joy n Mr Sharma n Rahul was also very well written....Mr sharma has behaved right way with rahul any employer or head of an employee will be strict n behave same way If he feels that the employee is being careless n giving attitude n not being sincere in his work..........................................................So Mr sharma was right in his own way ....I feel Rahul Mr sharma ko keh deta Sir My friend has come with me 2 the party n she is new in mumbai So plss Just let me inform her 1st n then I will go 2 press meet .....................Wasey I must say Nice dialogues between the 3 👏...............................

And this scene of Gunjan feeling uncomfortable n nervous in a room full of strangers was very well written..Gunjan's thoughts clearly shows that she is nervous ......very well written n described scene n thoughts..................Gunjan was thinking Why is every one staring at her is something wrong with her dress OMG! she is so so sweet n so innocent n so lovely girl She doesnt even know that People are staring at her because She ie Gunjan was looking extremely Beautifull ....People are looking because Gunjan looks like an angel...................

OMG!! DiaMaa n Gunjan scene was just Fabulous...............Diamaa Wants a Bride for Samrat who is like Gunjan Thats why when she saw Gunjan she thought that Gunjan was richa....But this conversation between Dia maa and Gunjan was amazing😉..Loved it a lotttttt😊.....I was grinning the whole time😃.........DiaMaa thought Gunjan was Richa and Gunjan thought DiaMaa was talking about Rahul OMG!!😲.....And When Dia Maa asked Gunjan where is Bhai Sab Gunjan thought DiaMaa was asking 4 Rahuls dad.............OMG!! What a BIG Misunderstanding.😲.................But I liked the way Dia Maa described Gunjan in her mind and Called her An angel ............Dia MAA was right Samrat needs happiness n love in his life and he needs Gunjan more in his life who will give him love care n happiness.....I loved DIAMAA 's thoughts about Gunjan😊.......................She will be very disappointed when she sees n finds out that Gunjan was not richa n When she meets Richa .........As Richa can never make Samrat happy......................DiaMaa while searching 4 richa thought that Samrat loves richa and marrying her 4 love only MAN DiaMaa is so wrong Samrat is marrying Richa not 4 love at all ...Richa n samrat marriage from Samrat side is a pure business deal ...............Once again Diamaa and Gunjans conversation was very sweet n special ........Loved it completely....👍🏼

This scene of Samrat n Rahuls Thoughts while attending Press conference was just Hilarious.......😉😆 Rahul thinks of Samrat as Khadoos.......and When Rahul called Samrat Principal in his mind n thoughts I just started laughing😉😆................But I can understand he was behaving this way n was irritated because he was worried 4 Gunjan .................and Samrat when he thought Logg Shaadi ke baad divorce letey hai and lagta hai mujhko Engagemen ke baad divorce lena hoga OMG!!😉😆..................Man What an awesome Dialogue...........................................Samrat n rahul are so alike ..They both choose same dress n ring n now both were irritated by reporters Qs....rahul got msg waiting in garden and Sam got Same type msg...........rahul is in love with Gunjan And I feel One day Samrat will also fall in love with Gunjan.....RIGHT JOSEPH??😉..............

Man I think Destiny wants Sajan 2 meet thats why everything Samrat choose came 2 gunjan .........and now Samrat came 2 meet richa in garden n Gunjan was already there waiting 4 rahul ............................BUT I must say this joseph WOW!! What a perfect n mindblowing Sajan 1st meet..Superb👏.................loved it totally............😊............Gunjan was thinking about her prince charming that he will come thru that door and Samrat entered.....perfect entry scene👍🏼...........and then shouts at gunjans n then Gunjan turns n sam sees her not being richa he is stunned n speechless and Gunjan who is so sweet n innocent said politely sorry when it was not her fault and left n sam just kept on staring and wondering WHO is she ? 😉😊 n it was clear from samrats thoughts and actions as he kept on staring at gunjan n wanted 2 look and couldnt take his eyes of her that samrat may be is attracted 2 her n May be he will realise later on that He fell 4 Gunjan at 1st sight😉 RIGHT Joseph😉..............Wasey this sajan 1st meet scene was really stupendous .👏👏...... I am extremely impressed by the way u wrote this sajan 1st meet scene............LOVED IT COMPLETELY..It was MINDBlowing , Magnificent and just SUPERB.....................Well done dear joseph ...👏Thanks 4 sajan 1st meet scene 🤗..............................Fantabulous Work Dear...............👍🏼...................

Wasey Joseph buddy Plss yaar Kabhi toh bad update write kiya karoo so that I can Criticise ...😉😆..............Seriously speaking U write such a good ,amazing and Outstanding update and u write it so properly and perfectly n everything is so well written n every minute detail n point is so properly shown n update is so fabulous that their is nothing 2 criticize ..................Update is always Stupendous n always very very well written....👍🏼.............

So Once again Joseph Magnificent Update👏....................

Love Gunjan😊😊 ........................................

Thanks Gunjan for your detail feed-back.😳 Its big compliment for me.😳 but,still I don't think ,I deserve it😳 Thanks a lot for this. Yaa,RAHUL is very Loving n caring person...he is very over protective for GUNJAN.I think,This part indicates his loving n caring personality.

Employer/Boss rude hote hain Yaar! 😭RAHUL kehta bhi toh Mr. Sharma nahin maante,He knows him very well. Thanks for liking Gunjan Party Hall scenes and Dai Maa misunderstanding. Dai Maa-Richa meet scene is very important part of next Update. Rahul-Samrat "Conference Hall" scene is Short because I edited some portions of this scene.Thanks for liking this seq.

SaJan first meet scene is totally based on "Arrogant vs Innocent" nature.It was really very-very difficult for me and I was very nervous about this scene...😲 thanks a lot if,you liked it.😳 I lioved your long Reply. I'll try my best for Next Part. I hope,I'll not disappoint you😳

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#323

Originally posted by: hiiiiiiiiiii
wow joseph
awsome update

seriously loved it

finally it happened sajan met

not the most pleasent for gunjan

but seriously loved it

do cont soon

i cant wait for u to continue

so cont soon

luv

tanzeel

Thanks Tanzeel, for your sweet comment. Yaa,finally SaJan met.😳 What you expect from Samrat...? You know naa...what is his nature...?😉😆 I'll post next part very soon.

Quote

Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#324

Originally posted by: ekta_monaya
YAY! YAY! again me 1st 2 comment........i specially wanted 2 comment 1st on this update as its really very special 2 me.......its the 1st SaJan meet.......so i had 2 comment 1st......u wud b suprised 2 knw that the 1st person whu read ur update was me......i was just looking at ur commnts wen i suddenly saw this part & i was like it wasn't here before but then i saw that no 1 has clickd the "LIKE" tab yet & i was vry happy that i was the 1st 2 do so.......i quickly reserved my comment.......😆....i knw its quite laughable but its true.......😳

ok now cumin 2 ur update.......GOSH! it feels like a dream......the SaJan meet was just sooooooooooooooooooooo perfect.......i had never imagined the meeting of SaJan like this in ur FF........1st that msg, than samrat scolding gunjan & thinking its richa.....then gunjan's assumptions regarding samrat...... & samrat seeing her in that dress...... & then gunjan's explanation @ samrat & samrat standing speechless & just staring @ her...... & then samrat havin unsure feelings abt gunjan......GOD! it was all soooooooooooo dreamy.......so smooth & unimaginable meeting......luvd samrat's reaction on seeing gunjan.......thnk u sooooooooooooooooooooo much 4 this dreamy scene.......m just drooling over it...........👏👏......😍

& rahul was thinking 2 not bring gunjan 2 the party??? i wud've killed him if he had not brought her 4 the party........😡....i hope he doesn't cum back 2 gunjan & keeps attending the meeting......luvd dai maa's assumptions......she thought gunjan 2 b her daughter-in-law...... WOW! dai maa......awesum assumption......she has the ability 2 see the future i guess.......😆..... i wonder wen she'll cum 2 know abt the real richa whu is completely opposite......m sure her reaction wud b like.......🤢.....

& thnk u 4 congratulating me......its been just 1 month & i've bcum SENIOR MEMBER......dunno hw i bcame so soon......but feels really good 2 b called SENIOR on I-F.......m sooooooooooo happy.......😃 & plzzzzz yaar dnt say m better than u in writing......ur an expert.....m just a starter......i cnt even think of matching the standards of writing the way u do.......HATS OFF 2 u yaar........👏👏👏

& i read ur commnt on my OS & i read der that u hav written that ur not sure if MBYPH wud b havin a happy-ending......really????? dnt even think of giving this FF a sad-ending.......m saying this 4 ur good......if u give a sad-ending all SaJanians wud b running aftr u 2 beat u......including me......so if u dnt wnt urself 2 get harmed btter dnt give a sad-ending.......it shud b happy-ending......like SaJan forever..... & vo rahul ka kuch aur intezaam kr dena plzzzzz......😆.....hope u din feel bad with my commnt.......m just warning u 4 ur own good.......meri baat maano fayde me rahoge.......😆

& SaJan meet ki khushi me muje party chaiye......i read ur & gunjan's commnts abt havin dhokla, samosa, pizza, ice-cream etc etc.....YUMMY......mujhe bhi khaana h coz m a big foodie so dnt 4get 2 invite me warna saara khana chura k le jaungi.......😆.....it was just mind-blowing.......out of this world update.......its my fav update of this FF.......simply superb & vry vry vry well-written.......i luv it.......all the words that define BEST in dictionery r 4 this update.......it was magical......i hope u liked my long comment & i hope SaJan meeting wud b continued in the next update as well......i have very high hopes 4rm next update as well......wen r u updating next?....u 4got 2 give updating date this time......tell me plzzzz....i cnt wait......😳

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GET 2 PM ME........

w8ing eagerly & with baited breath 4 the next update.......do cont soon....
😊

Thanks Ektaa for your 1st n Long Comment.😊 and I know,You are the First person Because,that time I was On-Line also.😳 But, if You are the 1st person then please read again..because I added n changes some lines after 20 min. and no Its not laughable actually,this is big compliment for me😳 Actually, woh Update Night mein karna tha...But, after read your Comment on P-41...I decided to post it.

Thanks for liking that most awaited scene...😳 Wait after some times, you will get more dreamy scenes....😳 But, Don't forget this is Samrat-Richa Engagement Party😊 Then, Its Good ... RaJan wahaan na ho....😉 and about Sad ending....Its totally depends on peoples POV. For example, after watching..."Hum Dil De Chuke Sanam"....I was sad but, my friends was happy. Yeh sab mein abhi time hai...so, Relax n Enjoy these sweet movements.😉 And,I don't feel bad with my friends Comments😊...and you are really Fantastic writer..your OS was very very sweet n cute.

Hey ! SaJan First meet scene ke liye toh aap sab ko mujhe Party deni chahiye....😆 and Please ! Don't make any high hope...for next part.Because,No SaJan scene there. Actually, next 2-3 parts mein SaJan scenes nahin honge...and believe me,Its better for story development.

Quote

Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: aashizin
hey joseph again wonderful update 👏 whole update was amazing seriously loved and enjoyed whole update 👏sajan's first meet was very nice everything started with misunderstanding dadi's talk to sam's shouting on gun , but seriously loved the way u present it 👏 now can't wait for next part do continue soon and thanks for pm

Thanks Aashizin for your precious comment here. Its really a lot to me 😳. I am happy ,after knowing that you liked SaJan first meet part.😳 I'll post my new part very soon.

Quote

Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: SHAMSHIR-MJHT
👏 👏 👏 SUPERB UPDATE Bro.👏 👏 👏 I ts too goooood Part.I agree...this is the most awaited part of this FF,till date😉. And you justice it very well.👏

I liked all the scenes....RaJan Part is as usual...SUPERB👏 DM-GUNJAN confusion part is FABULOUS👏 Conference Hall part is...HILARIOUS👏(Again RAHUL was hero there😉 By The Way...I think 'KHADOOS' word [4 SAMRAT] is very popular here...after your FF😉) and...Most Awaited SaJan 1st meet scene..... FANTASTIC,AWESOME and so JANUABLE😉

Totally Rocking Update Dude...Please ! Update soon...and Thanx 4 PM.

-S O H A M.

Thanks a lot bro. for your sweet feed-back😳. I really work hard on RaJan scenes because, I dont want to present RAHUL as a side Character, He is equal to SAMRAT😉 I know, readers are waiting for more SaJan scenes...but,this is not possible yet. Story essence is more important then other things. So no useless kissing n intimate scenes is part of my story (except only 2 scenes but,both are very-very imp. for story turn n twist). I'll try to post my next update on 14th Mar. 2011.

Quote

Swaatii

@Swaatii

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#327

Sorry ! Sorry ! 😭 sorry ! For not commenting till now , 😭 , but i was preparing for exam .
Uffffff HATE THEM 😡 .
So coming to updates .
First thing my english exam is not yet over so sorry for further Rahul - Rohan mistake ( if i repeat it next time , so basically i am telling you i will definately repeat it 🤣 , but what to do , my poor brain 😒 . )

will dont say much about Rahul as he is lovable but now with more care . I love to see his possessive attitude towards Gunjan .

Gunjan also was way sweeter than previous part . The way she replied to Samrat is so sweet . If i would have been in place of her , i will definately have given him a piece of mind 😡 ( so that is why i dont have any Rahul - Rohan in my life . 😲 ).

Coming to Samrat , want to know why he was so shocked 😲
because of: Gunjans way of giving answer . 😳
the fact she is not Richa . 😡
how beautiful she is 😳
etc etc etc etc . . . . . . . ,

WANT:
to know where is that Richa ? 😕
some romance
and also first thought of Samrat after seeing Gunjan 😳 and HIS FALL FOR HER .

AS ALWAYS
luv u
😛

Edited by Swaatii - 14 years ago

Quote

Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#328

..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai !
[-A Passionate Love Story]

Part-10
[A]

The Garden Area -

SAMRAT was still stood-up there....He didn't know....WHY ? but,still Confused...Shocked....and Speechless....with his deep thought....((Yeh kaun thi...? aur isne woh Dress...maine toh isse RICHA samjha tha...Yeh wohi Dress thi jo maine RICHA ke liye Mall mein select ki thi...par..usse dekh kar aisa kyun laga jaise....jaise ki yeh Dress sirf ussi ke liye bani ho.....Kaun thi woh...? Main kyun uss se apni nazrein nahin hata pa raha tha...? Aisa kya tha usme...? Uski aankhen.....uska chehra...kitni masoomiyat thi unme....Aur...woh kuchh keh rahi thi....par kya...? Main kyun kuchh sun nahin paaya....Usne pehla word 'SORRY !' kaha tha....aur phir...phir kya kaha usne....aisa kaise ho sakta hai ki,agar woh mujhse kuchh keh rahi thi toh...maine kuchh suna kyun nahin...? Kahaan kho gaya tha main...? Aur uski Voice...? Main uski woh sweet voice ko feel kar raha tha....uske 'words' toh maine sune hi nahin....? Aisa Kyun...aisa pahle mere saath kabhi nahin hua... phir aaj...? Aur,kahaan gayi woh....?Abhi toh yahin thi....kya zaroorat thi usse jaane ki...? Maine toh usse jaane ke liye nahin kaha...phir...phir kyun chali gayi woh...? lekin, agar woh Party mein aayi thi toh...toh yahaan kya kar rahi thi...? Kya main uss se phir milna chahta hoon....? par kyun...? Main kyun usse soch raha hoon...?))

He was totally lost in a 'Stranger Girl' thought.... something happenned....this was new 'feeling' for him...but...? what was the name of this 'new' thing....?? suddenly, a voice broke his thought of chain...

"Oh toh tum yahaan ho...? aur main..? Main tumhara kab se uss jagah par.... (she came closer n pointed towerds to a different location..) wait kar rahi thi...Kitni der kar di... mera msg. nahin mila tha kya...? (asked with a naughty tone)

S : RICHA ! (He said angrily) What is this...?

R : Common SAMRAT ! Aaj hamari Engagement hai toh main thode se romantic movements tumhaare saath share karna chahti thi...But, tum ho ki...Please,Don't behave like 'typical' Indian Husbands...abhi usme time hai...(and she winked her eyes naughtily)

S : Yaa..abhi usme time hai..iss liye achha hoga ki, tum apna yeh childish behaviour band karo...Main nahin chahta ki, main tumhaara gussa kisi....(He remembered GUNJAN's face...n said little bit calmly) .... aur par....utaroon...

R : Gussa...? Shadi ke baad dekhna...tumhen mujh par Gussa nahin...pyar aayega...sirf pyar....(came close to him n said in naughty tone)

S : Oh Please Richa...try to understand...tumhen pata bhi hai main kitni important...

R : (cuts him) Oh Ho.... Samrat....work..work..n work...aaj hamari engagement hai...tumhaare saamne ek khobsoorat ladki khadi hai...jisse tumhari shaadi hone wali hai...aur tum ho ki abhi bhi..work..work....Samrat aaj toh Relax karo... yeh movement Enjoy karne ke liye hai...work karne ke liye nahin....kitne un-romantic ho tum...(She came close again n kiss his cheek softly)

S : (pushed slowly n said with irritating tone) Oh Please Richa...You know that...I don't like,this type of cheap activity...

R : Jaanti hoon Sweet Heart (she smiled) par tumhen...ok jaane do...yeh sab chhodo...main tumhen apne gang se milati hoon...sabhi tumse hi milna chahte hain...

S : Mujhe kahin nahin jaana...aur naa hi kisi se milna hai...mujhe aur bhi dusre important work hain... (said very rudely)

R : Arre..chalo toh...aakhir main bhi toh unhen dikhaana chahti hoon ki,mera 'would be' Hubby kitna Handsome aur smart hai...tum unse kabhi nahin mile...ek baar mil toh lo...I am sure...tumhen achha lagega...

S : ((Main unse kabhi nahin mila...? aur Woh ladki...? uss se bhi toh main kabhi nahin mila...? shayad woh ladki...woh bhi wahaan ho...Par....? Par main yeh kyun soch raha hoon....? mujhe uss se kya ? Main kyun milna chahoonga usse...? Mujhe koi farq nahin padta ki, woh wahaan hai ya nahin...mujhe kisi se nahin milna...))

R : Arre...Kya soch rahe ho...? Chalo yahaan se....Chalo mere saath...mujhe tumhen mere friends se milana hai...abhi aur issi waqt...chalo...(and she pulled him forcely n they left from that place...)

-----------------------------------------------------------------

[B]

GUNJAN was very worried...after her meeting with SAMRAT.......((Oh God ! Yeh RAHUL kahaan rah gaya...at least,usse batana toh chahiye tha ki woh Garden restricted area hai...main wahaan jaati hi nahin...kitni daant sunni padi...aur,ek toh yeh Dress.....saari problem issi ki wajah se ho rahi hai...2 misunderstandings?? woh bhi sirf issiki wajah se....ab aur koi misunderstanding ho..isse pahle hi mujhe yahaan se jaana hoga...RAHUL ko call karti hoon....Parking Area mein wait kar loongi...but, yahaan nahin...)) and she made a call to RAHUL....he picked-up the call

G : RAHUL...P.C. khatam hui...? Aur kitni der hogi...?...Tum kab tak aaoge..? Main yahin hoon Conference Hall ke bahar.....aur kitni der hogi tumhaare aane mein...? (she said all things...without break)

R : Well....turn toh karo...shayad main aa gaya... (he smiled softly)

She turned back and saw RAHUL....she feel relax after seeing him..in front of her...RAHUL was also feeling good after seeing her n her relaxed face

G : Oh...Kahaan reh gaye the tum....pata hai kitna wait kiya....?

R : Pata hai Baba !....par,main bhi toh wait hi kar raha tha...P.C. ke khatam aur tumse milne ka..

G : Phir chalo...abhi...hum yahaan aur nahin rookenge... (she held his wrist n pulled him)

R : Arre...Itni jaldi kyun...aur tum kuchh tensed lag rahi ho...? kuchh hua hai kya...?

G : ((...Kya RAHUL ko bata doon....? Nahin...GUNJAN...yeh sahi nahin hoga...agar maine Hall waali baat batai toh RAHUL se daant sunni padegi ki,maine unhen kuchh kyun nahin bataya...aur agar Garden waali baat batai toh...? woh....? par woh toh sirf ek misunderstanding thi...woh toh mujhe jaante bhi nahin the...woh toh mujhe koi aur samajh rahe the.. isme unki kya galti...?...No..main kuchh nahin bataoongi...))

R : Arre ! Kya soch rahi ho....? main tum se baat kar raha hoon...kuchh hua hai kya...? tum itni worried kyun ho...? Kisi ne kuchh kaha...? (asked with caring n little bit serious tone)

G : no...nahin toh...main kahaan worried hoon...? Main toh thik hoon...aur mujhe kisi ne kuchh kaha bhi nahin...main toh bas bore ho rahi thi....iss liye...chalo naa RAHUL yahaan se chalte hain.....

R : Ok...chalo chalte hain....main bhi yahaan ab rukna nahin chahta....pata nahin uss KHADOOS ka mood kab change ho jaaye..aur...main ab aur risk nahin le sakta....chalo...and they ware to go...suddenly, a voice came from behind of him...

"X-cuse me...are you son of...Prof.Nanda...?" Rahul turned-back and saw a old men (O.M.)...in front of him...he was confused because he couldn't recognise him... said softly "...Ji...par..aap...?

O.M. : Arre mujhe nahin pehchana...? Koi baat nahin...par maine toh tumhen pehchhan liya...abhi P.C. mein tumhen dekh raha tha...You are very Impressive.

R : Thanks Uncle...par main....

O.M. : Aur tum batao..Prof.sahab kaise hain....? lekin, unse Kehna main unse bahot naraaz hoon...Apne bete ki shaadi kar di aur mujhe bulaya bhi nahin....? Rahul was shocked....Gunjan too...

R : Ji...shaadi.....par... (smiled softly)

O.M. : Arre ! Isme Sharmaane ki kya baat hai...? (looked at Gunjan)...kitni pyaari jodi hai tum donon ki...Bhagwaan, Yeh jodi aise hi banaye rakhe....

R : (He blushed) Ji..par aapko...

O.M. : Kya..ki,mujhe kaisa pata chala....maine P.C. mein notice kiya ki, tum kitne jaldi mein the...P.C. se jaane ke liye aur bahar aate hi tum donon ko saath dekha toh...aur jis tarah se isne tumhari wrist pakdi...! mujhe toh tum donon ko dekhte hi yakeen ho gaya...A newly married Couple...Itni bekraari toh unnme hi dekhne ko milti hai (He smiled n looked at GUNJAN and said) Beta..pata hai naye zamane ki ho....iss liye shayad sindoor yaa mangalsutra nahin pehnti..par beta...yeh hamare culture ka part hai....toh..

G : Par Uncle...main....

R : (smiled n cuts her) Ji..woh Uncle hum jaldi mein the...toh...woh bhool gayi...next time woh nahin bhoolegi...(looked at GUNJAN n winked eyes) Main hoon naa..usse yaad dila doonga...

RAHUL smiled n blushed very badly...but,say nothing... GUNJAN still on shocked n surprised...but she was smiling...(( Oh...No Wonder...! again mis-understanding....Thanks to my Dress...! GUNJAN ab yahi ek kasar baaki thi....'Engaged' se direct 'Married'...status !! Aur ye RAHUL...yeh chup kyun hai...aur to aur excuse bhi de diya...? agar maine bataya hota ki, woh aunty ne mujhe apni hone waali bahu samajh liya tha...toh....? ab tak toh mujhe kitni daant pad chuki hoti...aur saath mein long lecture bhi....aur ab khud....khud kaise chup hai aur unki haan mein haan bhi mila raha hai.....? Ab toh kuchh bhi ho jaaye....yeh Dress main dobaara nahin pahnne waali....kisi ko koi chance hi nahin milega...misunderstanding ka..))

R : (( Haaiii....kitni pyari baat kahi hai...Uncle...Aaj ka toh din ban gaya...'Pyaari Jodi' sindoor...aur Mangalsutra bhi...aur...phir 'Jodi Forever' ki wish...! Itna sweet comment toh ab tak kisi ne nahin diya...Mom-Dad ne bhi nahin....and don't worry Uncle...Marriage mein toh aapko sabse pahle invite karoonga...main khud jaaoonga aapko Invitation dene...aur phir hum 'Happily Married Couple' bhi honge...))

O.M. : Achha-achha ab tum donon ko zyada disturb nahin karoonga....Prof. sahab se kehna,kabhi fursat mile toh apne purane doston se bhi mil liya karein...

R : Ji , zaroor kahoonga...Par Uncle ab aapki tabiyat kaisi hai...Diabetes aur phir aapke Ghutnoon (knees) ka dard kaisa hai...? (asked in very caring tone)

O.M. : Arre Beta,woh sab toh umar ke saath-saath laga hi rehta hai....Haan Diabetes control mein hai par, Ghootnon ke dard waise hi hain.. (smiled and said to GUNJAN) Achha bete...chalta hoon...tum donon bhi kabhi aao naa....

G : Ji..Uncle zaroor aaoongi... (she smiled softly)

And He left from there.....

R : Kitne Pyare insaan the naa...How cute...! (looked at his side)

G : (Said with curious tone) Par, RAHUL woh kaun the...? Kab mile ho unse...?

R : Pata nahin....I mean,main unhen nahin jaanta.....Woh Dad ko jaante hain toh,koi pehchaan waale hi honge...(said innocently)

G : (her mouth was opened,she shocked) RAHUL....par tum unse aise baat kar rahe the jaise ki,unhen jaante ho...? aur tumhen kaisa pata ki,unhen Diabetes aur Unke knees ki problem hai...?

R : Common Sense ! (He smiled) Pinki unki age dekhi...woh 50+ the...and generally 50+ mein aisi disease hoti hain....aur woh dheere-dheere chal rahe the....so.Its clear ki unhen knees ki bhi problem hai...Simple! (said proudly)

G : Par RAHUL,tumhen poochna toh chahiye..ki,woh kaun hain...?

R : Kya farq padta hai..Unhen bura nahin lagta kya...? Meri jagah tum hoti toh poochti kya...?

G : Main...? No...no...main bhi nahin poochti..she thought something...and said, "par,RAHUL....! Tumse kuchh kahoon..tum daantoge toh nahin...?

R : (Said softly) Nahin daantoonga...tum keh sakti ho...Pakka Promise...

G : RAHUL woh jab main Hall mein tumhaara wait kar rahi thi naa...toh,1 aunty ne mujhe...mujhe...

R : Tum keh sakti ho...main nahin daantoonga....(said sweetly)

G : Actually,unhone mujhe apni hone waali Bahu samajh liya...jab tak mujhe ye baat samajh mein aayi...main unhen batana chahti thi par,woh tab tak ja chuki thin...aur unse main kuchh keh hi nahin paayi...

R : Oh ! GUNJAN par maine kaha tha naa...

G : RAHUL tumne kaha tha..tum mujhe nahin daantoge aur phir mere saath bhi bilkul waisa hi hua jaisa abhi tumhaare saath hua...phir main Garden area mein chali gayi jahaan.....she stopped after rememberring SAMRAT anger face...

R : Jahaan...?? wahaan kuchh hua tha kya...?

G : naa..Nahin...Kuchh bhi toh nahin...((Agar RAHUL ko unke baare mein bata diya toh...toh woh kaise react karega...? no..woh unhen bahot maarega....jab ki unki koi galti nahin thi...mujhe Garden waali baat nahin batani chahiye))

R : (said hurriedly) Ab chhodo ye sab...Chalo chalte hain yahaan se...waise hi kaafi der ho gayi hai...Hamein aur bhi kahin jana hai...

G : Par kahaan...?

R : Woh main raaste mein bataoonga...abhi chalte hain.... and they left from there....RAHUL was Happy.......Extremely Happy.

-----------------------------------------------------------------

[C]

PARTY HALL -

Dai Maa was still searching SAMRAT and her 'RICHA'.....((Oh! Kahaan gaya ye ladka..P.C. toh kab ki khatam ho chuki hai, aur RICHA....woh bhi toh kahin nahin dikh rahi hai...Kahin donon saath mein toh nahin...?(She smiled) Haan...! Tabhi woh donon nahin dikh rahe...chalo...agar SAMRAT uske saath hai toh achha hi hai...Ye unke naye rishte ke liya kaafi achha hai..Aakhir donon ko apni puri zindagi saath mein....suddenly..she saw SAMRAT with 'original' RICHA.... par SAMRAT...woh toh kisi aur ke saath aa raha hai...toh phir 'RICHA' kahaan hai...? Yahin Corner mein hi toh thi...? Ab woh kahaan gayi...? aur ye ladki kaun hai..? Jo SAMRAT ke saath saath uske haathon ko pakad kar chal rahi hai..? SAMRAT se poochti hoon..usse zaroor pata hoga... RICHA ke baare mein..?))

And , she went near to SAMRAT and asked with full of curiousity...

DM : SAMRAT ! main tumhein hi dhoondh rahi thi...woh ..,RICHA...?

S : Haan,Dai Maa..main aapke paas hi aa raha tha...mujhe aapko kisi se milana hai...

DM : Main mil loongi beta...par pahle ye toh batao RICHA kahaan hai..?

S : Aapke saamne.. and he introduced "RICHA"...looked at her and said, "RICHA...Yeh hain meri Dai maa...aur Dai Maa..yeh hai RICHA...

Dai maa was shocked after seeing her...(( Yeh kaise ho sakta hai..? Yeh RICHA hai..,toh woh kaun thi..? kahaan gayi woh..? aur, SAMRAT ki shaadi iske saath...?...)) This truth is unbeleivable for her.

R : Hi !

DM : Khush raho Beta..! (She was still shocked and seeing here n there for searching her "RICHA")

R : (to SAMRAT) Oh toh ye tumhaari 'AAYA' hai ?

S : RICHA..!! (He shoutted angrily) Tumhen pata bhi hai... tumne abhi kya kaha...?

Hearing this lines of RICHA...Dai Maa eyes became moist... SAMRAT became more angry after seeing her undropped tears..n said to RICHA... "Tumhen shayad pata nahin ki, badoon se baat kaise ki jaati hai...? aur ye..yeh meri maa jaisi hain...so, say to sorry..now!"

R : Ohh...Ho..Maine aisa bhi kya keh diya...? jo tum itna over-react kar rahe ho...? anyway,I don't want to spoil my mood...agar tumhen lagta hai...mujhe Sorry kehna chahiye..its OK. (looked at Dai Maa n said) Sorry ! (in formal n carefree tone)

DM : Koi baat nahin beta..Tumne kuchh wrong nahin kaha..tumhen maafi maangne ki zaroorat nahin....(said sadly with moist eyes)

RICHA ignored her and said to SAMRAT.."Ab toh Sorry bhi keh diya ab toh..mere friends se milne chalo...

S :(said rudely) Tum jaao yahaan se..main unse baad mein mil loonga...and looked at Dai Maa...RICHA left from there with full of anger.

DM : (wiped her tears n said) Tumhen uske saath jaana chahiye SAMRAT...Aakhir woh tumhari hone waali wife hai...(said sadly) aur usne kuchh wrong nahin kaha...yeh hai toh aakhir ek sach hi.. ki,main tumhaari...

S : (He cuts her) MAA hain...aur ye baat usse samajhni hogi...(said with anger) usse aapko wohi izzat deni hogi...jo main aapko deta hoon...aap meri zindagi mein eklauta aisa rishta hain ,jo mere liye sab se zyada important hai...

A tear escaped through Dai Maa eyes..she quickly cleared it..n said..."Toh phir uske paas jaao SAMRAT...usse samjho..tabhi tum usse samjha paaoge...usse woh pyar woh izzat do..ki, woh tumhaari baatoon ko sune...Rishte dil se nibhaye jaate hain SAMRAT...Dimaag se nahin...Dimaag se nibhaye gaye rishte sirf Rishton ka Dikhawa hota hai...unme koi Feelings nahin hoti..koi Emotions nahin hote..."

S : Aap jo keh rahi hain...woh main..samajhna nahin chahta Dai Maa...kyunki,ab mujhme koi feelings..koi Emotions nahin bache...bas main itna jaanta hoon ki, Usse aapki izzat karni hogi...and he left from there...with his lots of thoughts...n anger...anger, for RICHA.

DM : ((Kaash... tum meri baatoon ko samajh paate SAMRAT...Kaash..ki,iss Businessmen SAMRAT ki jagah mera masoom SAMRAT hota...jo, Buisness se zyada sachhe pyar ko samajhta...Kaash...ki tumhaari zindagi mein woh aati... (and she remembered GUNJAN face) jiske aane ka matlab hi tumhaari zindagi mein khushiyaan le aata...Jise pata tha....Ghar kya hota hai...? Badoon ki izzat kya hoti hai...? (she remembered Gunjan's 'Aashirwaad' movement) Jo shayad tumhaare Dil mein 'Pyar' ke liye jagah banati...tumhen 'Pyar' ka matlab batati...Kaash...aisa hota...)) and some drops of salty water..escaped through her eyes...

------------------------------------------------------------------

[D]

Today,Mr. PRATAP SHERGILL (SD) was happy.Today was the big day for his Life..his Empire..He was happy for his mega Achivement...He was very exiceted..went to Mr.BALDEV SAXENA (RD) n said, "Mr.SAXENA,ab hamein zyada der nahin karni chahiye...P.C. khatam ho chuki hai...Hamare Project ki official announcement bhi ho chuki hai,Sabhi MEDIA persons bhi party mein hain....Shayad,ab waqt aa gaya hai ki,hum apne bachhon ki,Engagement announce kar den...aakhir aap bhi toh yehi chahte hain.

RD : Haan...main bhi aapka hi wait kar raha tha...Hamein der nahin karni chahiye.. Par aakhir hamare 'Love Birds' hain kahaan...? Kahin dikh nahin rahe...woh aa jaate toh..

SD : Wo aa gaye hain... (and he pointed towerds SAMRAT-RICHA,standing with her friends) woh rahe..main unhen bula kar aata hoon...aap..centre place par jaaiye...and he went..suddenly,Mr.SAXENA cell rang,He just saw number and picked-up the call immedidetly and said....

RD : Bolo VARUN...abhi iss waqt kyun call kiya...? woh bhi iss number se..? Tumhein pata hai naa ki,aaj meri beti ki Engagement hai,aur main aaj koi disturbance nahin chahta....

V : Sorry Sir! par...baat hi itni Important hai ki,mujhe call karni padi..woh bhi iss number se...

RD : (said angrily) Ab aisa kya ho gaya...MUMBAI mein TSUNAMI aa gayi hai kya.....jo tum itne darre hue ho..?

V : Sir,TSUNAMI hi aayi hai par MUMBAI mein nahin...hamare Office aur shayad pure 'SAXENA EMPIRE' mein..

RD : WHAT..? Aisa kya ho gaya...?

V : Sir, C.B.I. ne hamare sabhi office par raid ki hai...unhen "COMMON WEALTH GAME,2010" case mein hamari involvement n benefits ke proof mile hain...woh hamari saari companies ke papers check kar rahe hain...

RD : (said with very worried n tensed voice) KYA...? par kab...Kya tumhaari unse baat hui..?

V : Sir,main H.O. ke bahar hi hoon...maine pata kar liya hai...woh aapse milna chahte hain , agar aap unse nahin mile toh woh SAXENA Group ki saari company's office ko cease kar denge..aur ye SAXENA Group ke liye thik nahin hoga...aap jitni jald ho sake...H.O. aa jaaiye.

RD : Thik hai...Tum unhen roko...main abhi aa raha hoon.

just then,Mr. SHERGILL came there..with SAMRAT n RICHA...he listned only his last line...n asked,

SD : Kahaan jaana ha SAXENA sahab...! Apni beti ki Engagement toh ho jaane dijiye...aur aap...aap...itne tensed kyun hain...? Aisa kya ho gaya...?

Then Mr. SAXENA told every thing...about C.B.I. n Reid things.... Mr.SHERGILL was also tensed..after hearing this.. ((Oh ! C.B.I. ko bhi aaj hi ka din mila tha....? Ek baar Engagement ho jaati toh...phir sab kuchh thik tha...Iss shaadi ka jald hona zaroori hai....mujhe SAMRAT par bharosa nahin...woh sirf 55% ki partnership ke liye yeh marriage kar raha hai...jis din usne apna iraada badal diya....main kabhi bhi "RAINBOW COMMUNICATION" ko over-take nahin kar paaoonga...par kya karoon main...))

RD : Mr. SHERGILL hamein jaana hoga...yeh Engagement kisi aur din rakhte hain...

R : Dad ! aap aisa nahin kar sakte..aapko pata hai maine aaj ke din ke liye kitni planning ki thi..aur phir SAMRAT.... (Held his hand) usse kitna bura lagega...aakhir hamari Engagement ke liye usne bhi toh kitne sapne dekhe honge...Hum Engagement ke baad bhi toh ja sakte hain naa...

RD : RICHA samajhne ki koshish karo..Humare paas zyada waqt nahin hai... C.B.I. waalon ne mujhe Dinner par nahin.. Enquiry ke liye bulaya hai...aur mujhe next 1 hrs. mein wahaan pahunchna hoga....(looked at SAMRAT) Sorry ! Beta..but,I hope you understand my point n problem...

S : Its Ok. Uncle....I understand your point...hum Engagement baad mein bhi kar sakte hain...mujhe koi jaldi nahin hai...Please...aapko sorry feel karne ki zaroorat nahin....

and,thereafter Mr. SAXENA n RICHA left from there....Mr.PRATAP SHERGILL was sad.....but,SAMRAT...?

------------------------------------------------------------------

[E]

RAHUL-GUNJAN...on the way....in car...

G : Thanks RAHUL...

R : Thanks for what...?

G : Thanks...for Dinner...for my 'Butter-Scotch' Ice cream aur...

R : Aur....? (asked with smily face)

G : Slow n smooth driving ke liye....

R : Oh...Thanks for Your Thanks...but, kitna adventures day tha naa...tumhen Party ke liye manana...phir shopping... Party...aur woh jerks Reporters..(said in hatred tone)

G : Reporters...? Oh tumne P.C. attend ki..! kitna mazaa aaya hoga naa...aur kya kal tumhaari Pic. bhi news-papers mein aayegi...? How exiceting...!

R : Kuchh bhi exiceted nahin tha wahaan...woh ek boring experience tha...((Tum jo nahin thi wahaan...mujhe toh sirf tumhaari fikr thi))....do you know...mujhe toh unn 1-1 reporters ke face yaad ho gaye hain...loosers kahin ke...aur maine toh ussi waqt decide kar liya...

G : Kya...? (asked with curiousity)

R : Yahi ki, Kuchh bhi ho jaaye..apne bete ko...REPORTER nahin banaoonga.... agar usne zidd ki toh..toh...

G : Toh...?

R : Uske pair tod doonga...(said in fake anger tone)

G : (she smiled) Oh ! aisi kya buraai hai...REPORTER banne mein...?

R : Dekho GUNJAN..abhi se keh deta hoon...tum hum baap-beton ke beech nahin aaogi...main nahin chahta ki..mera beta Frogs ka relatives bane...

G : Main nahin aa rahi tum baap-Beton ke beech (she smiled)..par,REPORTER frogs ke relatives kab se ho gaye...?

R : Arre tumne suna nahin....woh bilkul Frogs ki tarah..."TERRR...TERRR...." karte hain...tabhi toh unhen 'REPORTERRR" kaha jaata hai....

GUNJAN laughed badly...she couldn't stop her laugh after hearing RAHUL's funny logic n tone....RAHUL smiled...he wanted to saw....GUNJAN's smile... and this was enough for him....after some times....she asked,

G : Ok...Ok..agar Reporter nahin toh kya banaoge...apne bete ko...? Don't worry main iss baar bhi baap-beton ke beech nahin aaoongi..(she smiled)

R : Hummmmm...Ok..agar woh meri tarah...SMART....GOOD LOOKING... HANDSOME...DASHING...extra CUTE hua....

G : RAHUL...yeh kuchh zyada nahin ho gaya...yeh tum kiske baare mein bata rahe ho..? (and smiled)

R : Very Funny...Main apne baare mein baat kar raha hoon...because,I know...sabhi ko nazar aata hai.. sirf tumhen hi nahin dikhta... (said n make puppy face)

G : Ok..Ok...Naraaz mat ho...sirf joke kar rahi thi...I agree....toh ab batao...

R : Haan toh agar woh...meri tarah...SMART....GOOD LOOKING... HANDSOME...DASHING...extra CUTE hua....aur Tumhaari tarah 'Duffer' hua toh...usse MODEL yaa ACTOR banaoonga...(n he smiled)

G : RAHUL...! Main duffer nahin hoon...(said with fake anger)...I am a toper student.School,College n University..sabhi jagah TOP kiya hai maine...

R : Wohi toh.....sach mein Yaar...India ka 'Education Standard' kitna low ho gaya hai,hamare baad....(he smiled). main toh soch raha hoon...agar Topper tum jaisi hai toh...others kaise honge...? (and he laughed)

G : RAHUL...you are very-very bad...jaao main tumse baat hi nahin karti...

R : Sorry...sorry Baba ! I am just joking...I know you are brilliant student...No Duffer...ab toh happy ho jaao...!

G : (little bit smile) Ok..par agar tum mein woh sab qualities hain..jo tumne abhi-abhi batai hain..toh tum khud MODEL yaa ACTOR kyun nahin ban jaate...?

R : Tumhaari wajah se GUNJAN...sirf tumhaari wajah se..tumhen kya pata...GLADRAGS waale meri ofiice ke kitne chakkar laga rahe hain...par sirf tumhaari waja se maine unhen NO keh diya...

G : (asked shockingly) Meri wajah se...? maine kab roka..? In fact,mujhe toh maloom bhi nahin ki, tumhen GLADRAGS waalon ne approach kiya tha...

R : Haan...Unhen NO keh diya because,I don't want...tum meri wajah se embarrass feel karo...

G : RAHUL...! Main kyun embarrass feel karoongi...? woh bhi tumhaari wajah se...?

R : Arre..! jab main 'GLADRAGS MODEL HUNT' Main 'Swim Wear' round mein , Ramp par walk karoonga....woh bhi 'uss' chhoti si Dress mein....tum mujhe dekh kar embarrass nahin ho jaaogi...? so,maine decide kiya...NO Expose.....so, NO 'GLADRAGS'..... (and smiled)

G : RAHUL....This is too much...(she smiled too) Thanks for sacrifice for me...(and both laughed....)

----------------------------------------------------------------------

[F]

This was the end of a day......a day...jo ab Past ban gaya tha...but,jisme Future hide tha....aisa kaafi kuchh ho gaya tha....jo...4 ki life...ko badalne waala tha.....some dreams true honge...yaa some new dreams shape lenge..... Yeh sirf aane waale waqt ko pata tha.....but....kuchh aise thoughts toh the.... jo unhen aaj sone nahin de rahe the....

RICHA :> (( Aaj hamari Engagement hote-hote reh gayi...SAMRAT...par koi baat nahin...main jaanti hoon tum mere ho...par mujh se itna naraaz kyun rahte ho....? Main koshish karoongi ki, tumhaare aur kareeb aa sakoon...tumhen samajh sakoon...

Tumhen..puri tarah apna bana sakoon...bas ek baar hamari shaadi ho jaaye...phir sab kuchh thik hoga....))

RAHUL :> (( Finally,aaj ka din guzar gaya... kaash.. aaj woh Ring bhi mil gayi hoti toh....par koi baat nahin..jald hi propose bhi karoonga....GUNJAN kitni khush thi aaj...Resturent mein..aur phir Car mein bhi....Kaash..ki,aaj Party ki jagah...Movie gaye hote , usse aur bhi zyada achha lagta..... par,aaj pehli baar kisi ne hamari jodi ko 'Pyaari Jodi' kaha...aur phir 'jodi Forever' ki wishes bhi di.. Thank You God...! Please aap unki wishes sun lena... main aapse zyada kuchh toh maangta bhi nahin...Mom-Dad...main aur GUNJAN..My sweet small Family..Hum saath hain..toh mujhe kuchh aur chahiye bhi nahin...Hum donon ek-dusre ke liye kaafi hain... jitna main uski care karta hoon...uss se kahin zyada woh meri Care karti hai...shayad,issi liye main usse itna zyada pyaar karta hoon..aur sabse badi baat hai...hum ek dusre ki, izzat karte hain...jo,shayad hamare...relationship ko aur strength deta hai...bas,ab waqt hai...toh,iss relationship ko ek 'Name' dene ki...jo main jald se jald doonga..))

GUNJAN :> (( Thank God ! aaj ka din khatam toh hua....kitna kuchh hua aaj...aur woh Aunty...kya soch rahi hongi ...mere baare mein...FRAUD..? nahin..nahin..maine toh aisa kuchh bhi nahin kiya...par kitni exiceted thin woh apni hone waali Bahu ko lekar...kaun hogi woh....Kitni lucky hogi woh ladki...jo unki bahu banegi...very loving person...bilkul AUNTY ki tarah....Aur phir woh Garden mein...kitne naraz the woh...par maine unke baare mein RAHUL ko kyun nahin bataya....? Maine Aunty waali misunderstanding toh share ki thi.... nahinn.....GUNJAN...tujhe yaad hai RAHUL ne last year Mall mein uss ladke ko kitna maara tha...jisne mujh par comment pass kiya tha...aur phir...!! no..maine thik kiya jo kuchh nahin bataya..warna RAHUL unhen bhi maarta...par kitna anger tha unki aankhon mein...par maine unn aankhon mein ek dard bhi dekha....jo woh apne anger se chupaane ki koshish kar rahe the..main unki aankhon ki language read kar sakti thi... bilkul, saaf tha woh....ek emptyness thi unme.aisa kya dard hoga unhen....par.. main kyun unke baare mein soch rahi hoon...mujhe unse kya matlab...hum toh phir kabhi milenge bhi nahin...phir..?
Aur....RAHUL...kitna funny hai woh...aur main uss se kitna darti thi pahle...par aaj....RAHUL aur sadness two totally opposite words....kitna care karta hai woh meri...Sorry ! RAHUL aaj maine pahli baar tumse kuchh hide kiya.... but...woh baat itni badi nahin thi... bas.. issiliye.... Sorry ! ))

SAMRAT :> (( Yeh aaj mujhe kya ho gaya hai..? Meri engagement..postponed hui hai...main RICHA ko kaafi dinon se jaanta hoon..par,mujhe bad feel nahin ho raha...aur aaj mujhe...mujhe neend kyun nahin aa rahi..? kyun aankhen band karte hi uss ladki ka innocent face saamne aa jata hai...jise maine sirf kuchh pal hi dekha tha...main toh usse jaanta bhi nahin..phir kyun...nahin bhool paa raha usse...?aisa kya tha uss mein...? Main kyun usse bhoolne ki itni koshish kar raha hoon...? lekin uska woh chehra...uski aankhen...kuchh bhi nahin bhool paa raha...Mujhe laga tha woh RICHA ki friend hogi...par RICHA ki friends circle ko dekh kar aisa nahin lagta ki,woh kabhi RICHA ki friend ho sakti hai...woh toh bilkul alag thi...Soft...Simple..Sweet...Cute...n Pure...main jaanta hoon...hum phir kabhi nahin milenge.. par main kyun usse ek baar aur milna chahta hoon...usse sun na chahta hoon...usse baatein karna chahta hoon....

But...no...SAMRAT..this is not right...uss ladki ka khyal..mujhe kamzor bana raha hai....mujhe khud par control rakhna hoga...mujhe usse bhoolna hi hoga... uss incident ko ek bad accident samajh kar bhoolna hoga...SAMRAT SHERGILL ek ordinery simple Girl ke liye...khud par se apna control loose nahin kar sakta...agar woh mujhe kabhi dobara mil gayi toh....toh...main..usse...ignore kar doonga...Main usse keh doonga ki,woh mujhse door rahe.. mere paas aane ki koshish bhi naa kare...SAMRAT ko kisi ki zaroorat nahin...Mujhe pata hai...aur main apni feelings ko samajhta hoon....aur,usse control bhi kar sakta hoon...))

But....is It possible...? Can you Control your feelings ??

[>>>>>>>>>>]

Edited by Joseph_A - 14 years ago

Quote

Ekta

@SandCastle.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#329

YAY! YAY! again me 1st.......😆.....its a hattrick wich i made in ur FF joseph.....its continuesly 3rd time in a row......i feel good...... & BTW congratulations 2 u......ur also a senior member now.......👏👏👏

ok now cumin 2 ur update........it was just sooooooooooooooo awesum, fabulous, fantastic, superb, flawless etc etc.......GOSH! i hadn't expected this 4 sure........i mean THE SAMRAT SHERGILL confused abt his feelings for a sweet simple girl, GUNJAN! this was totally unxpectd 4rm my side........i thot SaJan will have a love-hate relationship @ 1st but its nothing like that......in fact i feel samrat has already started falling for gunjan.......WOW! still feels like a dream 2 me......i really wish k is story pe koi serial bane with same characters...........it will be the most super-duper hit show ever.........😃

& i really like rahul's sense of humour.....(of coz the credit goes 2 the writer i.e u.....) he makes me laugh really hard.......evn in this update i was ROFLING.....!🤣.....but m sure hez the 1 whu'l make me cry as well & that too soon.......😭.....coz iske rehte hue SaJan ki love story ka happy-ending mushkil h........*fingers crossed*......

m thinking k agar trailer yaani introduction itna best h to picture yaani ab story kya hogi....... & u've xplained the introduction of all characters very well......samrat's arrogance & loneliness, gunjan's innocence & sweetness, rahul's livelyness love & possesiveness & richa's arrogance & selfishness....... & thnk u so much 4 clearing the confusion on dai maa.....i was confused whether shez samrat's real granny but shez not......but shez nt evn less thn that......luvd the way samrat supported her......proud of him.....hez samrat aftr all & hate richa......!! arrrrrgggghhhhhh.....wat does she thnk of herself......shez soooooo bad!!!!!!😡

& i 2 hated hum dil de chuke sanam's ending.......i was feeling very bad 4 sameer & crying.......😭 but thn i thot of nandini's POV.....maybe she was rite or wrong......i dunno......but i hated it..... & plzzzzz dnt keep sad-ending yaar.......its a request......plzzzzzz......cmon its audience demand.......evry1 will say that only.......so plzzzzzz dnt seperate SaJan......rahul ko koi bhi mill jayegi but SaJan cnt seperate.......plzzzzzzz.........😭😭

1ce again it was just awesummmmmmmmmmmmmmm........jitni taarif karu kam h......HATS OFF 2 U.........👏👏👏

CONTINUE SOON
UPDATE ASAP
THNX 4 THE PM & DNT 4GET 2 PM ME...........

w8ing eagerly 4 ur nxt update.......do cont soon.......😊

& sry 4 unressing my commnt late.......vry sorry..........😊

Edited by ekta_monaya - 14 years ago

Quote

Joseph

@Joseph_A

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#330

Hi Friends, Now I am back with my another 'longest' Update... (More then 18,000 characters😳,At the posting time...I-F se msg. bhi aa gaya Yaar! 😉 so,I edited some portions😭 😳) Anyway,This is the Final update of my "INTRODUCTION PART" Now,story begins.😉 Guys SORRY,If you are getting bore and disappointed with my updates😳. Thank you for bearing me. Love You....❤️

[JOSEPH]

Edited by Joseph_A - 14 years ago

Quote

1 ... 31 32 33 34 35 ... 103

..Mushkil Bada Yeh PYAR Hai ![1] {A SaJan FF} - Page 33

Related Topics

Explore Topics