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craziekudi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#921

continue soon!! u aid note on pg135... wher eis the update.... he he

please continue soon!!

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rohini

@Rohini20

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Posted: 14 years ago

#922

To open a new one...if it will take more time...then don't...plz..it will be better n easy if it is here..!!plz...fast..iam too sleepy..sorry..but plzzz..!

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

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Posted: 14 years ago

#923

Loved da updTe
Do continue
I feel so sad for geet
Do continue

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#924

i want Maan to realize his feelings with out Shoria as a catalyst .... Shoria can be a good friend but making Maan jealous thru Shoria is an old idea and considering the purity of Geet's love for Maan... it shud be enuff for him to realize ... no third person in the middle ...otherwise it will look too typical... and i guess his remorse will be worse realizing that she never went for any one else other than him ... u know wat i mean ....

dunno just a thought ... Geet's love for him is too pure to need a catalyst .. be it Shoria or any one else...

btw Thanks alot babe for the awesomest updates ...

waiting for the next part...

my very humble request keya gi.. plzz pllzz pretty plzz give this SS/FF a happy ending .... i've still not recovered from my Dark Lover's shock... reham kerna hum per

love

Sana

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sheena

@sheena_12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#925

Wat ever u do....jst make it quick!LOL

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FireSafireFire (Marvelousfire)

@FireSafireFiree

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Posted: 14 years ago

#926

***REMORSE***part 11
I still have no clue is this FF or SS' lol lets see how many parts i can type'.xxxFrom now on i am PM u all from FireSafireFire2'if you didn't get any PM thats because you are NOT in my list' so pls pm my 2nd acc & i will add uxxx😳

It Is You I Dream Of

A flower grows from beneath a blanket
Of fine and purest white
It reaches toward the sun for warmth,
For heat and for the light

My love for you grows stronger still,
Despite the surrounding cold
My heart is yours, bartered gone
For yours has it been sold

Its petals shine from morning dew
Its stem grows stiff and strong
It stands strong through the freezing cold
It stands the winter long

I long for you, for your soft touch
I miss the way you smile
The longer that we stay apart
The longer every mile

The flower stretches through the snow
It reaches toward the sun
And now without you the color is gone
The flower's petals, dun

But as we talk, and as we learn
The flower comes back to life
The snow now melts and goes away
As you take away my strife

Spring is here and groW*H abounds
As you and I are one
We are together, we are in love
The snow for now is done

I see the future, in dreams I have
Of our life, long and true
I see the times where all I need
Are comforting words from you

I see the times when winter comes
As winter tends to do
But we still love, and we still live
And I do still love you

And so we live, with children ours
And a life of much to see
With love we live, to live we love
Happy together are we

I see the flower, older now,
But still strong with fresh new leaves
I see it growing, tall and strong
Reaching to the eaves

We are now old, as years have passed
But old together are we
And strong our love still today
As strong as it can be

- J.R. King -

PLEASEE read this ff on my blog thanks

i am off bit in hurry' will PM u all later' and add more details'

thanks for all the love & support

xxx

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#927

nice update... see he doesnt wanna let her go .... he will cover it up by his sick reasoning but will not accept the reality and Geet knows this very well that he loves her... he cant love any one else even if he tries very hard... uff ... sudhar ja Maan puttar abhee bhee waqt hai ... sudhar ja.... waisay sudharay gi tujhay Geet hi ... am sure about it .... jaisay aaj nimbu paani piya hai us ka banaya hua waisay khana bhi khaaye gaa aik din .... duffer kahin kaa,, ullu da patha... khotta...

_____

Sana

Edited by sindu555 - 14 years ago