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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part. loved them.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

hey what the big deal dear
muslim or non- muslim it does not matter
even punjabi girls cover their heads in front of men outside their family
even hindu women, cover their head as well as adorn a Gunghat in front of non-family people
if you read about older english days the girls esp'ly virgins cover their head with a bonnet (better known as hat now) and cover their face with a veil, they were not to show a single strand of their hair before they were ready to be introduced in the tons
so it does not matter what religion she is from woman hiding their hair and face had been a synonum of purity in all religions
I hope Keyma you will forward my post to your readers
this may ease down their questions
thank you
Shruti



BABE i love you FOR THIS lol
too good. Explained my point perfectly.
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yes it shows the purity people who kept think its a religious iss its not… its just a ff… where covering her hair its geets own style… another hand it shows her purity…. sj explained it perfecty… so please don't ask any q… it only will create MU. xxx
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gosh u are making me hate maan but anyways i still love ur fanfic
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mishti4maan



i think what she is asking is that if geet is muslim thn is shoriya also a muslim? and she is asking if there is another reason to why maan is behaving the way he is. btw whn u cont?

yes mishti is right.. that was exactly my question...anyways i was little confused thats why i was asking...i loved ur all ff... its really nice... well u clear it...thank u so much... mishti & u... do con..
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Keyama: Are u updating today?.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
keyema

plss.....change maans attitude towards geet......

he is being very bad.....n i dnt like bad maan.....i onli like goodie maan.....

hope u r listening....n update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
It would be nice to know how Maan changes his attitude.......
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Posted: 14 years ago
idk hun' i am in paradox jone' it will take me time to come out :)
xx
+ i am so hungry. i am living on a orange juice. lol my mum is not here. i am home alone. so hungry… too lazy to cook… hopefully my brain will work soon…
i lost 2kg in 2 weeks lol. just bcs my mum is not here.
so tips… if you ever wan lose weight just tell your mum to go on holiday… lol proof… me & my sis both lost weight😆
Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

hi Keyma

in all this confusion I forgot to ask you what I was about to ask
part3
Maan- I pitty you. Love! He laughs. Look at your love. He is seeing you dying now. If you expect me to help you... I won't! Are you crazy? Seeing you dying is one of the most happiest thing in my life. I wanted to see you in road after my mum & dad told me to merry you. You made me feel sick. I would look back at the dog twice but not you.... And do you remember when you demanded you love me? He laughs & I humiliated you infront of everyone.
Maan's parents wanted him to marry Geet
is thia the reason behind his hatred for her?
was he showing this remorse just because his parents wanted him to marry her?
is this his way of saying that no one can bend his life it is he who decideds what he should do?
he did not hurt her that badly that she would die without getting a chance to call the hospital
part 4
Geet- can I leave. I don't think I have enough money to pay for the...
Armaan- no! It's ok. Don't worry. Some well wisher already have paid for you.
Geet laughs... Well wisher & for her. Most unlikely.
Geet- I don't have well wisher. More like enemy. She laughs.
Armaan confused- enemy? A sweet girl like you could never have enemy. Geet smiles.
Geet- thank you. Some stranger for the first time ever been nice to me.
Armaan pats her hand. Now rest. Your wound are still not healed. Geet smiles.
who is this unknown well wisher?
is he the one who is her enemy?
I don't know why? but I felt that it was Maan
part 6
Geet wore her dress. She still looked simple. The scuff over her head. She wore a nose ring which was glittering with the light. No make up. Nothing. Just simple. Except a glitter well designed expensive cloths. The room was dark. Everyone must be in the party already she thought. Suddenly two strong arm hugged her from the back. Geet froze on the spot. She started to take deep breath. She didn't expect this. She tried to protest... Seems like the person didn't like that. She tried to turn and push but in return his hand covered her mouth. Stopping her to talk & turn round. He removed The dupata from her hair and kissed her nape. Geet froze. Her eyes widens in fear. She tried to push him way with all her force but in return he pushed her hard against the wall. Tears rolled down geets eyes as his hand started to travel round her waist and slowly making it's way to her curve. She moaned nonstop. Trying to y'all for help.... But that just made him more angry.... He ripped the dupata off... Started to give her shower kisses on her back... The flesh some how tasted perfct for him.... His kiss started to get wet. He bit her shoulder.... Geet protested his every kiss. Trying her best to free her self... But in return his hand went her dress...... Stroking her curve. Geet tried to punce him off with her hand in shock. He holds both of her hand tight. She was trapped between the wall & the person.... He quickly unzips her. Geet started to panic. His hand traveled to her curve & started to play with them while his lips kissing her neck threaly.. Biting re earlobe... Kissing her cheek.... Geet was helpless. His body started to push her against the wall harder. She shivers in pain.. And then in one jerk he spines her round.... Only think both could see was one another eyes. Geets eyes twinkled with fears while maans shocked & surprised.... He was still holding her mouth while Geet shaking. Trying her best to push way. Pleading to leave her...
Maans reflex pushed her to the balcony under the moonlight. Geet was trying her best to free her self...
Geet- please let me go.... Please. She pleads.
Maan holds her tight- how dare you wearing sammeras cloths?
it was very dark
when he came to her, so she did not see him
does he not know how Sam felt when he touched her?
why did he not recognise that the girl was not Sam?
Geet did not realise it was Maan because she did not know how his hands will feel while stroking her
why will Sam protest?
why will Sam ponce him?
or, he knew it was Geet and could not stop himself from touching her
may be I have been over imagining
but all this hatred seems quite artificial
he always tries to avoid her WHY?
and at the same time knowing that she is in HP and will be back in a week goes there,
he silently watches her with Shoriya, and feels bad that she is laughing with him
he is strangely attracted towards her, this is what I feel reading the updates, may be you wanted to say something else
but I feel behind this hatred there is some one or something
deep within himself he loves her and he knows this that he loves her


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: smj1977

hi Keyma

in all this confusion I forgot to ask you what I was about to ask
part3
Maan- I pitty you. Love! He laughs. Look at your love. He is seeing you dying now. If you expect me to help you... I won't! Are you crazy? Seeing you dying is one of the most happiest thing in my life. I wanted to see you in road after my mum & dad told me to merry you. You made me feel sick. I would look back at the dog twice but not you.... And do you remember when you demanded you love me? He laughs & I humiliated you infront of everyone.
Maan's parents wanted him to marry Geet
is thia the reason behind his hatred for her?
was he showing this remorse just because his parents wanted him to marry her?
is this his way of saying that no one can bend his life it is he who decideds what he should do?
he did not hurt her that badly that she would die without getting a chance to call the hospital
part 4
Geet- can I leave. I don't think I have enough money to pay for the...
Armaan- no! It's ok. Don't worry. Some well wisher already have paid for you.
Geet laughs... Well wisher & for her. Most unlikely.
Geet- I don't have well wisher. More like enemy. She laughs.
Armaan confused- enemy? A sweet girl like you could never have enemy. Geet smiles.
Geet- thank you. Some stranger for the first time ever been nice to me.
Armaan pats her hand. Now rest. Your wound are still not healed. Geet smiles.
who is this unknown well wisher?
is he the one who is her enemy?
I don't know why? but I felt that it was Maan
part 6
Geet wore her dress. She still looked simple. The scuff over her head. She wore a nose ring which was glittering with the light. No make up. Nothing. Just simple. Except a glitter well designed expensive cloths. The room was dark. Everyone must be in the party already she thought. Suddenly two strong arm hugged her from the back. Geet froze on the spot. She started to take deep breath. She didn't expect this. She tried to protest... Seems like the person didn't like that. She tried to turn and push but in return his hand covered her mouth. Stopping her to talk & turn round. He removed The dupata from her hair and kissed her nape. Geet froze. Her eyes widens in fear. She tried to push him way with all her force but in return he pushed her hard against the wall. Tears rolled down geets eyes as his hand started to travel round her waist and slowly making it's way to her curve. She moaned nonstop. Trying to y'all for help.... But that just made him more angry.... He ripped the dupata off... Started to give her shower kisses on her back... The flesh some how tasted perfct for him.... His kiss started to get wet. He bit her shoulder.... Geet protested his every kiss. Trying her best to free her self... But in return his hand went her dress...... Stroking her curve. Geet tried to punce him off with her hand in shock. He holds both of her hand tight. She was trapped between the wall & the person.... He quickly unzips her. Geet started to panic. His hand traveled to her curve & started to play with them while his lips kissing her neck threaly.. Biting re earlobe... Kissing her cheek.... Geet was helpless. His body started to push her against the wall harder. She shivers in pain.. And then in one jerk he spines her round.... Only think both could see was one another eyes. Geets eyes twinkled with fears while maans shocked & surprised.... He was still holding her mouth while Geet shaking. Trying her best to push way. Pleading to leave her...
Maans reflex pushed her to the balcony under the moonlight. Geet was trying her best to free her self...
Geet- please let me go.... Please. She pleads.
Maan holds her tight- how dare you wearing sammeras cloths?
it was very dark
when he came to her, so she did not see him
does he not know how Sam felt when he touched her?
why did he not recognise that the girl was not Sam?
Geet did not realise it was Maan because she did not know how his hands will feel while stroking her
why will Sam protest?
why will Sam ponce him?
or, he knew it was Geet and could not stop himself from touching her
may be I have been over imagining
but all this hatred seems quite artificial
he always tries to avoid her WHY?
and at the same time knowing that she is in HP and will be back in a week goes there,
he silently watches her with Shoriya, and feels bad that she is laughing with him
he is strangely attracted towards her, this is what I feel reading the updates, may be you wanted to say something else
but I feel behind this hatred there is some one or something
deep within himself he loves her and he knows this that he loves her




great analyse. his hate is artificial. you got exactly my point. :D
gr8 gr8 supper analyise… i guss many people don't go that in depth… but i am so not saying anything els… lo… you just have to read..
but👏
lets find why he hates her so much… remmeber i kept saying he have no solid reason… ol even though people kept thinking there are some dark past… but i am saying the truth😳

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