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Posted: 14 years ago
i am loving it more day by day
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Sajjal

firstly..... sorry i didn't comment on part 2...actually i'm out of town...so it's a li'll difficult for me to come online regularly🤔

but.... it was truly amazing😃

and about part 3.... no doubt this was superb....😃😃

but i hope Nupur ke sheeshe ka mahal toot naa jaaye....😔
and m sure she's strong enough to put it back together😊

thnx for de pm

luv ya🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow saj

wht an upd8!!!!

Superb

simply loved d MN moments
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Posted: 14 years ago
sweets, plz update soon........ 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter 4: Karwatein
Mayank unlocked the door to their bedroom and headed inside followed by a worn out nupur who was on the verge of fainting due to the excessive amounts of jewellery she was wearing and adding another couple of pounds was her finely garnished light pink dress that had been coordinated to match mayanks cream colored suit.

Nupur found herself she busy in the closet searching for a pair of clothing she could change into, She also pulled out a pair of track pants and white tee for mayank setting it on the bed for him. She quietly walked away into the washroom.

After changing mayank found him a cozy corner and started working on his laptop checking important files when washroom door creaked open distracting his attention, He looked at her walking out dressed a pale white night suit busying drying her with a towel.

Nupur made her way to the dressing table and sat before it, 'Nupur ---"

"jee'" Nupur answered back looking through the mirror, she was still uncomfortable under his gaze.

''Kal se kaam shuru hogayega toh ---"mayank dropped his words seeing her turn around instantly, "kya hua?''

''Woh... Mayank humein aapki ijazat chahiye!" mayank looked at her confused, "meri ijazat?'

Nupur nodded slowly, " jee ' who'hum'kaam karna chahte hain"

"kaam? kaisa kaam?"

''shaadi se pehle baba jani ki madat ke saath maine aur aapi ne bank se karz liya tha''' her words trailed off seeing mayank anxious to hear what she had to say, '' woh karz humne apni boutique kholne ke liya tha' Nupur heaved a sigh of relief completing her sentence.

''par agar aap nahi chahte hum kaam karein toh hum kaam nahi kareinge'' Mayank smiled and put away his laptop, " Nupur yeh tumhari zindagi aur isme tum joh bhi karogi, har kadam pe main tumhara saath doonga''

An immediate smile spread on Nupurs face, "aap acche hai, bahut acche hain mayank''

Mayank frowned and looked away, " subha jaldi bhi uthna hai, sone ki tayari kartein hain'' nupur was definitely distraught by the sudden displeasure on mayanks face but she didn't say anything.

Mayank got into the bed facing away and Nupur awkwardly snuggled into the right side of the bed facing away also. They could feel each others presence yet they were so far off from each others reach that it made both afraid of where there life was heading towards.

The sun shone through the window illuminating various parts of their bedroom causing nupur to stir away in hopes of distracting her from it; unknowingly she stretched her hand off onto the other. For a while she didn't feel anything, but she suddenly woke up seeing the other side empty.

Nupur pulled off the covers and forced herself out of the bed quickly, she took out a white salwar suit and took a shower changing into her formal clothes and than headed downstairs seeing mayank was not in the room. She prayed hoping he had not left already, and reminded herself to wake up earlier from now on.

" Good morning'' Mayank chirped from behind the newspaper, Nupur solidified hearing the voice, but than smile seeing mayank pull the newspaper down, " Subah Bahkhair Mayank"

Nupur entered the kitchen to find it empty, she thought of asking mayank but decided against it, " Ammi aur dad khala ke ghar gaye hain kuch zaroori kaam agaya tha, aur Sana apne ghar wapis chali gayi''

Nupur turned around to find mayank walking in with a smile; he was still dressed in his night clothes distracting herself, Nupur opened the fridge taking out the milk and than looked around wondering which cupboard held the coffee beans. She had spotted the coffee maker on the counter but there were so many cupboards it was impossible to guess which one held the beans.

''pheli almari mein''

''jee? "

Mayank smiled and sat down on the stool opposite to the counter, '' coffee beans pheli almari mein hain''

''uh ''' walking forward nupur opened the cupboard and took out the beans., She set the coffee maker and than took out other material needed to make breakfast but stopped realizing she really had no idea whatever about what mayank liked or didn't.

''kya hua?''

''aapko nashte main kya pasand hai?"

''kuch bhi!'' nupur looked at him with the utter most shocked, '' kuch bhi?" she asked unsure.

''haan kuch bhi!'' mayank repeated himself allover again, '' kyun nupur tumhe kya pasand hai''

''toast aur garam garam coffee aur bass'' Nupur said with a bright smile, opening up the bakery fresh bread placed on the counter,'' toh theek hain phir aaj mujhe bhi toast aur garam garam coffee chahiye nashte main'

"nahi, hum apko kuch aur bana dete hain'' nupur insisted

'nahi, aaj joh tum khaogi wohi mere liye bana'' Nupur smiled and found herself busy in making breakfast while mayank carefully watched her with various thoughts floating in his mind.

They both had breakfast together in silence mostly, and afterwards Nupur headed upstairs to lay out his clothes while mayank was still finishing up downstairs.

Mayank in a while left for office, leaving nupur alone in the house all by herself. She at first cleaned up the kitchen and than found herself watching t.v to rid of the sudden boredom she was feeling.

She fell asleep right their on the couch in the middle of watching some cooking show, she didn't realize when the day fell and night awakened in the mist of the moonlight. The door opened and in walked mayanks mom and dad. They looked at a sleeping nupur on the couch and smiled at each other.

"nupur bete''' shilpa shook nupur abit, and nupur jolted awake in a second. She felt horrible for sleeping and started to fix herself getting off the couch, 'woh ammi, ankh lag gayi aur '''

''aree bte koi baat nahi, aapka hi ghar hai'' Mayanks dad said stroking Nupurs head and blessing her.

''beta hum upar kamre mein ja rahein hain, mayank aye toh hume bata dena, humein aap dono se kuch zaroori baat karni hai''

Nupur nodded seeing them walk away but stopped them suddenly, " ammi humein aapse aur baba se kuch poochna tha'

Shilpa took a seat on the couch along with Mr Sharma anticipating what nupur had to say, "hum kaam karna chahtein hain''

Shilpa looked dismayed, ''par beta iski kya zaroorat hai?'' Nupur smiled, 'aamii zaroorat nahi, shauq hai aur ek sapna bhi hai''

''nupur beta hume koi atiraaz nahi hai, balke hum toh chahtein hai ke aap kaam karne ghar main akele reh reh ke aap tang ajayeingii' Mr Sharma said proudly nudging Shilpa to agree upon his decision, ''Nupur Jaise aap chahein beta'' Nupur smiled and hugged shilpa, ' shukriya''

Mr, Sharma and Shilpa left for their room and Nupur entered the kitchen to make dinner realizing it was almost time for mayank to come home. While making dinner she didn't even realize when the time passed and the clock struck nine, she smiled to herself and started setting up the table. It would again be mayank and nupur only at dinner because the parents had already eaten.

She waited and waited for him on the table for at least an hour until finally the bell rang, but Nupur frowned at the fact that it was her cell phone ringing not the doorbell.

"Aslam ' o ' laikum' Her sudden happiness felln hearing what the person had to say on the other side, ''jee mayank theek hain' closing the phone nupur rested it on the table sadly.

Mayank had called to tell her to eat and go to sleep as he would be late due to a mistake in some deal they were to sign off on today.

Nupur covered the food and sat down on the chair pouring herself some bits to eat, but she couldn't get herself to eat it and since she had woken up a few hours ago...Sleep was the last thing on her mind deciding to take a stroll outside, she covered herself with a shawl and left for the garden.

It was beautiful outside, the navy blue sky was like blanket that was covering the earth, glittering in all the right places and those twinkling stars amongst it were a magnificant sight to see....Alisbha rested on the swing looking at the sky for the longest time as far as she could remember without a spare thought in her mind.

She got up to head inside when passing by the bushes her gaze fell on something, struck by the image she moved closer to get a better veiw of it, engraved on the tree were two letters.
M and S, her heart decieted her mind and she turned away making it seem as if she never saw what she had just witnessed. it was pointless this marriage was her only option now, she didn't want to lament mayank for his yesterday beause it might just end up destroying her today with him.
bheege sapne, kacchi ankhein, choti choti dil ke batein kehti hai yeh zindagi.....
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Okay before you think Mayank and another girl...let me just say yes there was another girl in his life...but its not what you think......he did not love her and neither the girl loved him....
Anyway hope you like it.....
Again, if you don't want to read it i won't post it..i really have no problem with that guys😆...
and if you don't understand something feel free to ask!
Sajjal
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey saj......
hayee.i am the first one..........😲
i came first.............yaya🥳
ok now coming to the update
aww......kash tum aise hi update karti raho....😆
i am just too much love with this FF.......just awesome......
nupur wants to work....very good.....😛...mayank is really very nice😳
he's acting so sweet in this FF😳
he's trying to understand her so well......and i am loving it😛
nupur's inlaws are really nice.......loved them....
oh god!!..yea kya tha......😲..M&S
they were not in love..😕
ok i am bit confuse........
anyways pls continue soon

love
fia

Edited by tasfia123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG..
This was awesome..
I luv Mayu's mom.. I like they parlor conversation..
Lovely..
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was awesome..........how mayank understnd nupur's unsaid words n kitchen it was superb.........waiting for next part........ nd want to know who was that girl...........cont soon.........love u
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Posted: 14 years ago
was wating for the update
nice story
nupur is really very sweet here
now wtg for tom to read the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
sweets, i loved it.... do update soon n pm me...... 😊

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