My Maan...FF- PART 45 PAGE 85 LAST PART! - Page 2

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Part2:

Both Maan and Geet entered the office with a very professional stride in their walk. Geet smiled to everyone, while Maan was the more serious one and nodded his head signifying his "Hello". Everyone stood up from their seat in respect. Both Maan and Geet stopped. Geet finally spoke and said, "Good Morning everyone! As you all know it is a very big day for KC as we have managed to get the biggest contract that we all have been working hard for. I want you all to present your best and give your best as this special contract goes through the meeting process. "finished Geet. Maan continued on, "Thankyou everyone and please get back to work". Maan then gestured Geet to follow him into the board room along with the whole team. As everyone sat down, Geet noticed that Maan was nervous about something. "Kya hua Maan? Kuch problem hai kya?" asked Geet innocently. "Nahi nahi Geet, bus thora nervous ho raha hoon". Geet smiled at her husband and said, " Maan, aap fikar maat kijiye, sub kuch smoothly ho jayega!". Maan smiled and was relieved with the assurance that Geet gave him.

After ten minutes, the Rathods team had entered the boardroom. The meeting went very smoothly with all the presentations from both sides. Geet however, was the one leading the meeting because Maan had faith in Geet's presentation skills and knew she could not make any mistake. The meeting went very smoothly for about 2 hours. Geet had sat down after the meeting had concluded. She had full faith in this day and knew that she could not let Maan down. Soon afterwards, one of the Rathod Representatives had gotten up and said, "Mr Khurana, we are very impressed with Miss Geet's presentation, in which we have decided that we are going to do this deal with you." Geet smiled and well…Maan was just beyond happy and of course proud of his wife! Maan and Geet stood up and shook hands with the Rathod team. Everyone left, except Geet and Maan. Maan looked at his wife's face with tears in his eyes. Geet walked up to Maan and hugged him tightly in which Maan held onto her tightly as well. Geet unfastened herself from Maan's hold and wiped his tears delicately. Geet returned to her comical self and said, " Oye hoye, aap to bilkul hi Meena Kumari lag rahe hain". Maan laughed."Chalein, lunch kartay hain aur iskay baad Aryaan ko lena hai school se." added Geet. Maan nodded and followed his wife out of the meeting room.

After Maan and Geet had their lunch, both went into the car towards Aryaan's school. As soon as they reached the school, the car stopped to let both of them out. Outside the school, Aryaan was waiting for his parents to come pick him up. Both Maan and Geet were looking for Aryaan until Geet spotted Aryaan sitting on the bench. Geet ran towards him and Maan saw that she had spotted him. Aryaan saw his mother and ran towards her as well. Both met in a tight hug and Geet said, "Oye hoye, mere hero, kaisa tha tera school?". Aryaan nodded and said," Good Mama! I learned so much today". Suddenly, Aryaan saw that Maan had walked towards them as well. "PAPA!!!" yelled Aryaan as he unfastened himself from his mothers embrace. Maan went down on his knees and opened his arms wide for his son. "Papa Papa! Aapko pata hai kay aaj school mein kya hua tha?" said Aryaan excitedly. Maan laughed and said, "Nahi beta, batao! Kya hua tha?". Aryaan began to speak when some girls giggled, "Byee Aryaan!". Geet saw them and opened her mouth out wide," Haww!".

Maan smiled at his son and said, "koi baat nahi beta, main tumhe bacha tha hoon" winked Maan. Geet folded her arms with a big frown on her face. "Bye Mr Khurana" giggled the mothers of the girls who first called Aryaan. Geet was now raging in anger and jealousy. Maan stopped laughing and signaled Aryaan to hold his hand. Both walked upto their favorite lady and Aryaan said, "Mama, these girls are silly, don't worry!! You are my favorite girl". Maan smiled and continued seriously, " Haan, jo bhi Aryaan nay kaha". Geet smiled and turned around towards her two favorite men. She walked towards Aryaan and bent down, " you are my favorite too beta!" . She kissed her son on the cheek and stood up. Maan was expecting some sort of sweet gesture but Geet turned to him and held his collar lightly, " Agar phir se hua na, to main unkay chotay chotay tukray kar doongi aur aapkay bhi". She smiled and let go of his collar. Maan smiled at his wife's jealousy. All of them laughed and walked towards the car. The three got into the car where they drove off towards the house.

I know this part was very boring, but! There is suspense coming up soon!.. ill try to update and put up a character sketch for you as well! :)😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awhhh
Such a cute FF
lol..Geet is total Punjabi sherni haha😆
Love her
Awhh Maaneet and aryaan scenes are soo cute
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Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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Character Sketch:

Geet Maan Singh Khurana
: She is a fun loving and protective mother of her son Aryaan. After struggling all her life, she met the love of her life and husband Maan Singh Khurana. She is a pure Punjabi Kuri who has a very "sherni" attitude if it comes to Maan or Aryaan. She is sophisticated and very educated, yet she has the values of a traditional Indian woman. She loves her devar as her own little brother and treats Maan's family like her very own. She is a strong girl who protects others and then saves herself. Although she may come from a different background from Maan, but she knows her traditions very very well! perhaps more than Maan.

Maan Singh Khurana: He is the rude, arrogant and cold hearted man that fell in love with his sherni and wife, "Geet". This man is the owner of Khurana Constructions and holds honesty, respect and hard work in high regard. He loves to romance his "Geet" and play with his son Aryaan! ? The all famous Maan Singh Khurana sets the whole world on fire as soon as he walks in! The ladies drool over him, even after he gets married! He is the eldest son and brother of the Khurana family.

Aryaan Singh Khurana: This lovable 6 year old is your average naughty boy who will "accidentally" throw his baseball into your window, thus breaking the window into small pieces. Just kidding! He is an obedient and fun loving child that holds his mother and father in high regard. He is the oldest heir to the Khurana Empire! Although he can be quite a papa's boy at times! Like his father, he attracts all the ladies towards him.

Dev Singh Khurana
: The middle child of the Khurana brothers and is quite the "drama king". He is a greedy and selfish man who would do anything and everything to ruin something for someone. He is the young and charming brother who woos all the ladies and after getting what he wants out of them' he leaves them immediately. He owns his own hotel business in order to compete with his brother Maan Singh Khurana. He hates Geet and only aims to hurt her and not anyone else.

Meera Singh Khurana
: The young wife of Sameer Singh Khurana! She a devrani to Geet and a very fun loving one as well. She spoils her little devil Aryaan with chocolates, gifts and tons of love. Geet and she were best friends since they were little girls and who knew! They became even closer in relation! She has a clean and pure heart that shows on her face. Like Geet, she is sophisticated and modern but still holds her traditions in high regard.

Sameer Singh Khurana: This naughty and young Khurana, is a fun loving guy who has clean heart! He makes mistakes, but always looks up to his brother Maan for advice. Both Meera and he live in Canada because he owns a business that runs there. Even before getting married to Meera he always treated Geet like his own sister and mother! His brother Maan is like a father figure for him! Meera is the love of his life in which he seeks comfort and peace. He treats Aryaan like his own son and showers him with love!

Savitri Devi Singh Khurana (Daadi Maa): This wonderful woman is the grandmother of Maan, Dev and Sameer. She is a kind hearted and soft spoken woman who loves her children very much. She lives in the ancestral Haveli in Jaipur. She is a modern dadi, who still upholds her traditions to the utmost regard. She treats Geet and Meera equally as her daughters because she did not have any daughters in her own children. She has the silent hand of authority in her household, but is a very leanient daadi maa. And how else to describe her? Well she's like every other loving Daadi maa in this world! :)

Naina Singh Rathod:
Well... who could have imagined that a woman like her would be in a relationship with Dev. She is a self centered person who just cares all about wealth and power. She has a rough past... Everything got taken away from her when she was a girl and she landed up from a rajput family to a brothel. Since then, she has been out trying to gather herself and Dev was the only support she had.

Armaan Malik: The hearthrob of all doctors! He has been a very close friend of Geet and later became very close with Maan. He has always supported Geet in everything she did. He is a fun loving and honest guy who would literally make every girl's dil go " dhak dhak" in the hospital. He has been married to Shilpa for the same time Geet and Maan were married. He fell in love with Shilpa while they were interns at Sanjeevani and his heart went " dhak dhak" for her. He lives his every moment cherishing his wife, his life and love. Although at the hospital he can be quite strict or serious... he never misses a chance to romance with his wife!

Shilpa Malik
: A word to describe Dr. Shilpa: Sweet! She is a honest and sweet girl who lives her life the way she wants to. Her bubbly attitude and caring nature has left a thousand just breathless. Her innocence and charm is what Armaan fell in love with and now she is happily married with Armaan. She was playing hard to get, tough girl at first, but she slowly fell for Armaan! Their sweet and romantic love would make anyone want to go " hayeeeee" And she has been a friend of Geet and Meera since they all went to University together.

Prem Juneja: He is Geet's maternal cousin from Hoshiyarpur and a lawyer by profession. He lives with his wife Heer in Mumbai.Geet treats Prem like her elder brother and his wife Heer like her own sister. Prem and Geet have grown up together and she shares the littlest of secrets with him. He funded Geets education and helped start her construction business. He is a sweet guy that has respect for elders and everyone. Although you don't want to make him angry, but overall he is a nice guy and will do anything to help you. He and Maan get along very well because they are similar in personality and Prem knows that Maan will always keep Geet protected and loved.

Heer Juneja: Prem's wife and the sweetest girl you would ever meet. She and Geet went to the same school when they were young girls. She is a fashion designer by profession and no matter how busy she is, when it comes to Prem or Geet.. she always comes to their aid. She loved Prem since she was a young girl and Prem had feelings for her later.She may sound like a modern and snobby wife of a rich lawyer, but she is traditional and she still keeps her values in tact.





Edited by Desigirl144 - 14 years ago
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both parts love it pls add pm list pls update soon my dear
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Thank ya soo much for the Character sketch
Uff Dirty dev here too..lolz
awwhh loved Aryaan's description hehe
Thank ya

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