My Maan...FF- PART 45 PAGE 85 LAST PART! - Page 16

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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part.....................relieved that someone caught her................hope its only Maan....................cont soon.................

All the Best for ur exam....................
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 23
nice part...................so twas Armaan................Maan and Armaan looking each other seriously??????????????? dramebaaz honge dono.........cont soon................
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it n all the best for ur exam
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Posted: 14 years ago
Veryyy nice part!!!!!
Continue soonnn.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 24: Enjoy and Please Comment :)

Both of them looked at eachother face to face, and then suddenly both crept a smile on their face. Then both guys burst out laughing hysterically. Geet and Shilpa looked at eachother so questioningly. Maan and Armaan hugged eachother and had big smiles on their faces. " Kaisay ho dude?" asked Armaan as he broke out of the embrace and put his hand on Maan's shoulder. " Main theek hoon yaar.. tu kaisa hai?" replied Maan with a glow in his face. The childhood friends were back on track... well after some patching up by their wives of course! " I heard you're a doctor now.. congrats man!" said Maan. " Haan dude.. bus.. bangaya.. aur humari patni jii mere saath kaam karti hain"replied Armaan as he winked at Shilpa. Shilpa got a little shy but Geet being the comical one she pushed Shilpa jokingly with her shoulder. " Oye hoye... tu kyun sharmane lagi" said Geet in her typical punjabi style. "Chup kar" said Shilpa as she fought a smile. The guys were just talking nonstop and were totally ignoring their better halfs so to say. " Chal chor.. Meera bhi yahaan hai... chal usko surprise detein hai.. woh tujhe dekhi gi to bohot khush hogi!" said Geet as she dragged Shilpa away.

Geet, Meera and Shilpa were both chatting in the opposite rooms just giggling their heads off and just plain catching up girl time. Geet was laughing so hard when she suddenly had throbbing pain in her stomach. It wasn't normal at all. She stopped giggling and instead she started throwing up and her face went completely ghost white. " GEET.. KYA HUA.. WHAT THE HELL.. MEERA.. THIS IS NOT GOOD.. WE HAVE TO TAKE HER TO THE HOSPITAL.. CALL MAAN AND ARMAAN" yelled Shilpa as she was horrified seeing this scene. Geet stopped throwing up and just fainted onto the bed, leaving her already pale complexion even more pale and with blood trickling out of the sides of her mouth. Both guys ran upstairs and Maan took her into his arms and they all drove off towards the hospital.

They ran into the emergency and suddenly nurses and doctors came rushing with a emergency hospital beds.. which actually looked like a stretcher.. except it had wheels. "DOCTORS.. HER CONDITION LOOKS SERIOUS.. ICU... NOW!" yelled one of the doctors. Maan placed her onto the bed and all of them rushed towards one the hospital rooms. The doctors stopped all of them from going in except Shilpa and Armaan. " Aap andar nahi jaa sakte.. Dr. Armaan and Dr. Shilpa.. please come this way". They both nodded their head and went into the room leaving Maan and Meera outside. " I'll call Sameer.." said Meera as she was dialing Sameer's number. Maan was just too scared and frustrated to even care what would happen. He just didn't want anything to happen to his Geet.. his angel.. his misthii..

Sameer came running into the waiting area outside the ICU with Daadi maa and Aryaan and said, " What happened?? is she okay? doctor neh kuch kaha?". " Maan beta! kya hua Geet ko?? doctor??" said Daadi worriedly. Meera stood up and said, " Nahi.. abhi kuch nahi pata". Sameer looked at his brother who looked half dead.. as if half his soul had been ripped out of his body. Maan had silent tears running down his face.. not even saying anything. Daadi maa had gone to Maans side and he instantly put his head on her shoulder and even more tears started to come out. " Kuch nahi hoga beta.. i promise.. please.. chup ho jayiye"comforted Daadi maa. Maan couldn't stop.... this wasn't the first time. Suddenly Shilpa and Armaan came out of the room talking. Maan instantly got up and with red teary eyes said, " Armaan... Geet theek hai naa.. usse kuch nahi hoga?". Armaan put his hand on his shoulder and Shilpa said, " Maan... abhi condition bohot hi nazuk hai.. abhi kuch nahi kehsakte". Maan's heart fell.. it broke into pieces in front of him. He couldn't move... he stood there frozen... not being able to process the information that his friends had just said.

I hope you guys liked it! please comment!
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Posted: 14 years ago
poor geet ..hope she's okay
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Posted: 14 years ago
just read parts 23-24, im happy you brought in ArSh into your story, the parts were brilliant, keep it up, look forward to the next parts and thanks for the pm!
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Originally posted by: lil_desi_goddes

just read parts 23-24, im happy you brought in ArSh into your story, the parts were brilliant, keep it up, look forward to the next parts and thanks for the pm!



Lol.. I can tell you love ArSh with your dp :) and you welcome :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
i want Geet fine and healthy... and Aryan to be Maan's son with Geet and not that stupid Dev's... please please please...
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poor Maan i hope geet get well soon so she lost the baby wonder what happen to her awesome update pls cont soonnnnn thanks pm

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