O.o.....gripped....hard!
That last bit from the prologue was just as jittery for me when I first read it or more! Both the stubborn souls are restraining their feelings for personal reasons but more than that both AR from DMG (as in the original story) were also portrayed to avoid their love, courtesy egotism.
And the precap right...It's like when is it finally gonna happen...when will Armaan finally get a breakthrough! When is he gonna commit himself to love rather than unintentionally being in love.... I believe that doesn't make much sense lol! BUt nonetheless, what made me flip is the JUNE statement...I first read it in ur OS and it's already too much to take with ur stubborn protagonists....lol! Good Luck for your exams....par kabhi kabhi hum pe daya zarur karna kamse kam one-shots deke?
Woh kya haina....it's very ard to put a finger on but if you actually read ur very first OS to the current one...there's always something different about them...not only the concept but the way you write as well! It's very hard to point it out but you put just a teeny bit more heart into every OS you write...like...You do it wit dedication, already but I'm not gonna bother explaining it. I JUST CAN'T OKAY!
Apart from that, it was very nice to see Armaan so concerned about Shilpa.....he just can't help being the playboy he is but deep down, he gets so lost in his lady love....he loses himself too soon! Like the way he lovingly gazed at her before going to sleep!
And the regret e always has...something...he can barely acknowledge. And seriously what's with the Armaan that dies 12 years ago. Like kitne aur chilling mysteries man....aur 3 months tak we'd have no clue! Ugh!
And the reflex for trust Shilpa puts into Armaan. When is it finally gonna happen, Rida? Not anytime soon...I know I know lol!
toh at the end of the day...one-shots toh bante hi hai...I'm pretty sure ki shayad maths ke exam nahi toh english ke pehle ki boredom mein ideas zarur sujenge Rida ko. Ab aisa toh ho hi nahi sakta ki your brain wouldn't indulge into any fantasizing for 4 months! Toh just grab the pen next to you and put it out for readers like us lol! All the best once again for the exams! Hoping to hear soon form you, eh?
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