[MG] in love with enemy (II)updt-100 & new thread - Page 18

loved it......update soon...lol .....although I know you just did BUT already we want more....

U updated after a very long tym

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I REALLY LIKED THE PART.

IT WAS AWESOME AND CONTINUE SOON PLEASE. I WANT MAAN AND GEET BOTH TO PROFESS THEIR LOVE TO EACH OTHER AND GEET KNOWING THE TRUTH OF MAAN.

ITS REALLY INTERESTING

RES
not able to say anything full of feelings and emotions
continue soon

I really dont know how shud i start n 4m where. Er it was going so smooth,lighthearted with all except chief enjoying. But then d violence part, terrible. I m not complaining, i understand tht it was integral, bt how did u even picture it all in ur mind, it was horrible, quite disgusting, u ought to have seen those expressions when i went thru tis part, i felt lyk throwing up.thats smtin i never wanna read again, quite unlike me. N let me clarify, i srsly m appreciating it, it shows tht u have tht amazing ability to write on poles apart emotions. So here comes tis hug 4 u. Btw d shlok part was a bit 2 dramatic, i wasnt actually convinced, never mind, may hav clicked to many out ther. So now m eagerly waiting to know chiefs truth.... Seems lyk a lot is ther to get unfolded:-)

ps. Now i srsly need to plunge myself in studies after spending my last 2 hrs here on IF thanks 2 ur super mammoth part. All d best 4 ur studies 2:-) study well:-)

Originally posted by: sarita21992

I really dont know how shud i start n 4m where. Er it was going so smooth,lighthearted with all except chief enjoying. But then d violence part, terrible. I m not complaining, i understand tht it was integral, bt how did u even picture it all in ur mind, it was horrible, quite disgusting, u ought to have seen those expressions when i went thru tis part, i felt lyk throwing up.thats smtin i never wanna read again, quite unlike me. N let me clarify, i srsly m appreciating it, it shows tht u have tht amazing ability to write on poles apart emotions. So here comes tis hug 4 u. Btw d shlok part was a bit 2 dramatic, i wasnt actually convinced, never mind, may hav clicked to many out ther. So now m eagerly waiting to know chiefs truth.... Seems lyk a lot is ther to get unfolded:-)

ps. Now i srsly need to plunge myself in studies after spending my last 2 hrs here on IF thanks 2 ur super mammoth part. All d best 4 ur studies 2:-) study well:-)

waiting for u to show up

pheww!!
just read all the earlier parts..took me almost 2 hrs..
but this deserves this much time..
well! umm...talking about this part..
i feel that the way u described their emotions..their feelings..was awesome..I loved it!
Geet hurting herself!! no..no..please don't this to her..
baaki..i loved the story..
do cont....waiting!!

That was soooo gooooood.........i have no words...u have it gal!