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himani

@Sour Skittles

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Posted: 19 years ago

#121

[that is sooooooooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz. plz. plz cont. soon 😊 also make sujal and kashish love each other really soon 😊 although ther fights r sooo cute 😆 😆

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Taniya

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Posted: 19 years ago

#122

Part 16-

A Couple Days Later-

Sujal was in his room with all his luggage packed looking for Kashish...
Sujal: Kashish where are you?
There wasn't any reply...
Sujal thinking maybe she is downstairs...He goes to the receptionists...
Sujal: Did Ms. Kashish leave a message for me
L: no...but she left the hotel...
Sujal: thanks
Sujal thinking maybe she already went to the airport...He goes there and has been waiting for an hour but she's found nowhere...He thinks what should I do now I can't go home without her...Then the last call for his flight is made so he decides to go...

Airplane:

He sits at his seat and sees Kashish already sitting there at the seat next to him...
Suajl: you are here?
Kashish: yeah...where else should I be
Suajl: do you know I had been looking for you for such a long time...
Kashish: aww...how sweet...I didn't know you cared about me so much...
Sujal: I don't
Kashish: as you say...

Beverly Hills:

The plane has landed...He goes to the baggage claim looking for Kashish but there is no sign of her...he thinks I should have said sorry it was my fault I started the whole argument...he waits a while more but Kashish is still not there...He thinks if she wanted to come she could come on her own...He hires a cab and goes home...he rings the bell...The maid opens the door and takes his luggage...Just then Mrs.Garewal comes outside
Mrs. Garewal: Sujal beta tum agaye
Sujal: ji mamma
Mrs. Garewal looks around in confusion then says: kashish kahan hain
Sujal: woh mummy
Then you hear someone say "Kya app bhabi ko wahan pay bhol kay to nahin agaye"and then you see Kripa standing there...She runs up to him and hugs him...
Kripa: so bhai mere liye kya laye...
Sujal: woh bag main hain
Kripa micheviouly says: so app ka honeymoon kaisa tha...I'm sure app ko bohat mazaa aya hoga
Sujal gives her an angry look...
Kripa: jaa rahi ho bhai...with saying that she leaves...
Ms. Garewal: Sujal tum nay meray sawal ka jawab nahin diya...Kashish kahan hain?
Sujal: mamma mujhe nahin pata...
Mrs Garewal: kya matlab mujhe nahin pata...tumhe yeh bhi nahin pata kay tumhari biwi kahan hain...tum kab bare hogay
Then Mr.Garewal enters saying " Itna shor kyon ho rahan hain?"
Mrs. Garewal: App apany ladlay say khud puchay...khud to agaya par apni biwi ko chor aya...
Mr. Garewal now screaming: Kya? Sujal tum koi kaam theek say nahin kar saktey...tum nay Kashsih ko ghuma diya...Kashish koi khelona to nahin hain jo ghuma diya jayen...wo aik insan hain...
Sujal: papa actually hamara jhagra ho gaya tha...tu woh gussay may chali gaye
Mrs. Garewal: tu tumhay use mannana chaye tha...
Sujal: par
Mr. Garewal: mujhe kuch nahin sun na...jab tak tum Kashish ko apany saath nahin laoge tum is ghar main nahin asaktey...
Sujal: but...mamma app papa ko samjhaye na
Mrs. Garewal: main ajj pehli baar unkay faslay say razi hoon...
Mr. Garewal: ab tum jao...jitni jaldi Kashish ko dhund kay lao gay utni jaldi tum is ghar main asako ge...

Sujal now all worried abt Kashish and mad at her at the same time gets out of the house and drives off to Rishi's place...

Rishi's Place:
Rishi: Sujal...when did you come back?
Sujal: today
Rishi: so how come you're here...shouldn't u be resting after the long flight
Sujal: yeah...but my parents kicked me out
Rishi: WHAT?
Sujal: yes...Rishi...and now he sits on the couch
Rishi: but why?
Sujal: cuz I lost Kashish
Rishi: you lost kashish
Sujal: yes
Rishi: how can you lose her?
Sujal: I don't know...we had a fight and she went away in anger and didn't come back...
Rishi: so what are you gonna do?
Sujal: I don't know...but I'm really hungry...what do you guys have to eat?
Rishi: you'll never change
Sujal: that's true...

A while Later-
You see Rishi and Sujal going around the city looking for Kashish...while the song Kahan ho tum from No Entry is palying in the background...(If you have seen No Entry Jsut picture it how it was in the movie...how Anil and Fardeen were looking for Bipasha but instead it is Sujal & Rishi looking for Kashish)...

Evening Time-
Sujal is standing outside the Garewal Mansion...He's contemplating on the fact should I go in or not...he's thinking his family is probably mad at him still...then he finally decides to go in...he enters and sees his whole family sitting and chatting and everyone looks at him...
Sujal smiles at them nervously...
Mrs. Garewal: Sujal tum agaye hum sab kabse tumahra intezaar kar rahe they
Sujal thinking maybe they forgave him...he comes and sit down
Abhay: tu honeymoon pay mazaa aya?
Sujal: ji bhaiya
Abhay: acha hain...mujhe bhi apany honeymoon pay buhat mazaa aya tha...(Kkusum blushes)
Aakash asks: yeh honemoon kya hota hain?
Everyone is in silence
Aakash: kya Sujal Chahca apni honey kay sath moon pay gaye they
Kripa: ha Aakash...you are absolutely right
Everyone starts laughing...
Kripa: tu bhai app nay mujhe bataya nahin kay app nay wahan pay kya kya tha?
Sujal was about to say something when a voice interrupts him "Kripa...Sujal tumhay kya bataye ga...main batati hoon..." and she is none other than Kashish...who looks pretty weaing jeans with a blue top...
Kripa: bhabi aap kab uthi..app aram kar leti...
Kashish: may nay tu apni puri neend puri kar li aur safar ka thankan bhi khatam ho gaya...main nay sucha kay aap logo say aakay thuri deer baat kyun na ho jaye
Mrs. Garewal: tum nay bilkul theek kiya...
Kashish comes and sits next to Sujal and gives him a smile...
Sujal thinking she was sleeping here in peace while I was searching the whole city for her...
Kashish starts talking to all and tells them about what they did at the honeymoon...
Mrs. Garewal: tum nay bataya nahin tumhare mummy papa kaise hain...
Kashish: woh tu bilkul theek hain...woh aap kay baray main pouch rahay they...main nay tu unko bata dia kay sabse pehle main un say milne ayi thi tu app logo kay bare may mujhe kuch maloom nahin tha...tu mama nay phir mujhe jaldi say yahan bhej diya...
Mrs. Garewal: acha...
They all keep on talking for a long time...now everyone is tired so they head back to their own rooms...

S & K's room:
Kashish is sitting on the bed filing her nails while Sujal is standing and giving her an angry look...
Kashish: why are you looking at me like that?
Sujal: then what should I do...I should smile at you...
Kashish: sure if you want too...
Sujal: whatever...I still can't believe what you did
Kashish asking innocently: What did I do?
Sujal: you left without telling me where you're going and didn't even inform anyone.
Kashish: well...you started the whole argument so I lost my temper and went to my house...
Sujal: you could 've called...
Kashish: I know but I wanted to see you suffer...now I'm sleeping so don't disturb me...
She switches off her lamp and goes to sleep...

Next Day-
Morning Time-
Kashish is standing and making her hair when there is a knock on the door...She opens it and the maid is standing there...
Kashish: what happened?
Maid: someone is here to met you and Sujal
Kashish: who?
Maid: I don't know...
Kashish: ok...make them sit...we'll come...
She goes back in the room seeing Sujal sleeping on peacefully on the bed like a baby...
She goes toward him..then she bends down and screams in his ears "SUJAL WAKE UP..." very loudly...Sujal with jerk wakes up and says: What happened?
Kashish laughs at seeing him...
Sujal: why are you laughing?
Kashish: you should have seen the look on your face
Sujal: why did you yell?
Kashish: to wake you up
Sujal: you could have done that nicely too
Kashish: yeah but then I wouldn't get to see this look on your face...
Sujal then lies down on the bed again...
Kashish: wake up...there is someone here to meet us...
Sujal: I don't want to
Kashish: wake up or I'll scream again and louder this time...
Sujal gets up and gives Kashish an angry look then goes to the bathroom...

Downstairs-
Kashish goes down to the living room and sees Rishi and Sanjana sitting there...
Kashish: Sanjana...how are you? And hugs her...and ignores him completely...
Sanjana: I'm great...how are you?
Kashish: I'm fine too...
Rishi: how are you bhabi?
Kashish: I'm fine
The Sujal comes down too...
Sujal: Rishi my man how are you?
Rishi: gr8
Sujal: so how come you both are here?
Sanjana and Rishi smile nervously at them...
Rishi: well
Sanjana: we are
Rishi takes a card and gives it to them...
Rishi: open it...
Kashish opens and reads it...Sanjana Kapoor Weds Rishi Khanna...
Sujal & Kashish: What?
Rishi & Sanjana: yes
Rishi: we both are getting married
Sanjana: next week...
Kashish and Rishi are in a deep state of shock but then they both recover and congratulate their friends...

After a while-
S & K's room:
kashish is sitting and talking with Sanjana on the bed...
Sanjana: you didn't tell me...how was your honeymoon?
Kashish: it was fine
Sanjana: what...nothing happened...
Kashish: you know everything then why are you asking
Sanjana: Cuz I was hoping something does happen...anyway leave that...tell me how was Switzerland?
Kashish: it is beautiful...even though it was kind of chilly it was fun there
Sanjana: that is nice
Kashish: I just remembered...you aren't gonna believe who I saw there
Sanjana: who?
Kashish: guess
Sanjana: Tom Cruise
Kashish: no
Sanjana: Brad Pitt
Kashish: no
Sanjana: Panna Gill
Kashish: I wish...ok...this can take a while...I saw Zayed khan
Sanjana: oh no you didn't...you mean the Zayed from our college...
Kashish: and he's married
Sanjana: wht?
Kashish: I was shocked too...and her wife doesn't talk at all...I don't know what he saw in her...
Sanjana: you are so lucky
Kashish: I know
Sanjana: so is he still that cute?
Kashish: way cuter
Sanjana: really? I wish I could see him
Then you hear someone cough and it is Rishi
Rishi: so you really like Zayed?
Sanjana: kind a
Then she realizes it was Rishi so she gets up...
Kashish: she had a major crush on him in college...it was even bigger than mine...
Rishi: oh...what abt now
Sanjana: I still do
Rishi in a sad tone: ok
Sanjana: I was kidding...I only like you...I mean love you...
Rishi's face lights up and he hugs Sanjana...When Sujal also comes in seeing them both hug...
Kashish thinking eww and Sujal fo get a room people...

Sorry for not continuin for such a long time...I didn't knw what to write...Sorry for the bad hindi...lemme knw if u don't understand something...Hope you like this part...next part coming up tomorrow...Plz read and comment...😊

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Taniya

@taniya_22

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Posted: 19 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Sour Skittles
[that is sooooooooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plz. plz. plz cont. soon 😊 also make sujal and kashish love each other really soon 😊 although ther fights r sooo cute 😆 😆

Thanks a lot for replyin...I'm glad you like my fan-fic and to knw the fact tht u like their fights...😊
Luv Taniya

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Taniya

@taniya_22

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Posted: 19 years ago

#124

Thanks To EVERYONE for replyin and readin my fan-fic...and plz cont. to do so...
Luv Taniya

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himani

@Sour Skittles

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Posted: 19 years ago

#125

😆 that was sooo funny!!!

Edited by Sour Skittles - 19 years ago

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KulBin

@KulBin

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Posted: 19 years ago

#126

hey taniya that was really a cute part.. & Funny 2....
😉 👏

well now plz try to cont soon.... 😊

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APARAJITA

@aromi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#127

brilliant but tanya add some romance too between s and k please....

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Parvathi

@Paru6

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Posted: 19 years ago

#128

it was a really sweet part tanya 👏 👏 👏 cont soon

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kriti mehera

@Love''sAngel

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Posted: 19 years ago

#129

it is brillant. it is so funny. but where hav pratham & gauri gone. i will love to see their condition also

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#130

taniya tumne bohat dino baad continue kiya aur bohat hi achche tarike se continue kiya... 😊
indeed a very nice part...... 😃
but plzzzzzzzzzzz ab zara sujal ,kashish ko ek doosre ke kareeb lana shuru karo.......... 😉
plz continue as soon as possible......... 😳