UNNAMED RELATIONSHIP( mjht ff) |updated|

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Important Character's
Mayank
Nupur
Samrat
Gungan
Sheena
i'll nt describe their character skech as this story is full of twists n turns''so as d story will move u will understand them'..

part 1

A beautiful morning welcoming mr n mrs sharma. Yes they r the most happily married couple of the world. They liked each other during colledge days n on the right time they told abt their relationship to thei parent. Both the families are rich n of high class so no rejection or problem from any side. After marriage they shifted to Mumbai from delhi .
Mayank is a big businessman n his beautiful wife is a well known fassion designer'''this couple is appreciated by all d people as they match each other perfectly''.if she is most beautiful girl of d town then he is also d most handsome guy of that city''if she is so intelegent that he is also geniuos''.n both hv high class taste'.

Morning time sun is sparkelling on d sky''.mr mayank shrma is observing d beauty of her wife n says'how cn some one b so beautiful n she immediately opens her beautiful eyes n says in d same way in which u r so handsome n they share a hug'''..they r half nacked n the condision of bed sheet cn say the story of their last night'..
Mr sharma: they shona gud morning n a very happy anivesery my lovely wife
Mrs sharma: same to u my lovly husband kissing on his forhead''chalo ad chodu
Mr sharma: why? U don't lik my closeness'teasingly'''
Mrs shama: shut up''.cutely''tumhe office nhi jana
Mr sharma : nhi''.
Mrs sharma: kyun
Mr sharma: jab kisi ki itne kubsurat wife ho tho kon kambagt office ja kr time waste karega''..
Mrs sharma : realy''..(cutely)'''.dont tell lie tum or office miss kr do ho hi nhi sakta..
Mrs sharma : ho sakta hai jb mane office se chute li ho specialy apne wife k lia
Mrs sharma: mayank''..chutte lane ki kya jaroorat thi ?
Mrs sharma: chutte nhi leta tho party ki tayari kase karta ?
Mrs sharma: party? (exitingly)
Mrs sharma: yes''..ye party is city ki bst party hoge afterall hmare 3rd marriage aniversery hai'''koi choti moti baat nhi'..
Mrs sharm: thankyou mayank, thankyou so much saying happily she move on when mayank holds his hand n push towards him''.dont go na lets do hanky panky''.
Mrs sharma: kyun? kl raat se tumhara dil nhi bara..(scoldingly)
Mr sharma : nhi'''(cutely)
She gets blush n playfully hits him n rounding a bedsheet around her she runs towards bath room n mayank calls her name rook na SHEENA''' Mrs Sheena Sharma''abhi tho chali gye ho pr tumhe tho main raat ko dekh luga, akhir ana tho mare pass hi hai'..my sweet wifey'.....n he gives a sweet smile showing his cute dimples n seen's gets over'

Ok ok ok guys I know aap logo ko bohat bada jatka lga hoga or I promise or bhi bohat se jatke lagege bt plz gussa mat karma. I gurantee u all u will lov this ff''..after all its mayur ff'''
Age ki story mae bake characters introduce hoge hopefully''..till then bye'''..
INDEX-
1) 1ST PART - PG 1
2)2ND PART-PG 2
3) 3RD PART - PG 3
4) 4TH PART- PG 3
5) 5TH PART- PG5
6) 6TH PART-PG 6
7)7TH PART-PG 8
Edited by Sanugr8fan - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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You are absolutely right

atlest mujhe to bahut bada jhatka laga. mein to puri hill.gayi........... what have u done😡😡😡😡 yaar it is only mayank and nupur aur mayank aisa relation sirf nupur k sath rakhe . atleast mene kabhi sapne mein mayank ko aisa potray nhi kiya hai. lets seee. aage aur kitne bade bade zor k jhatke millenge😡😡😡😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲😲
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Posted: 14 years ago
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goshh....it was really a jatka...plzz pm me...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was soo much shocking...but waiting 4 the updates..lets see how mayur get united

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Posted: 14 years ago
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yes i got a bigggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg jatka why u portrayed that kind of bond b/w them i love mayur only in that kind.pm me when u update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg...very shocking update...
i was shocked...
itna zor ka jhatka de diya ..
ab pls jaldi continue karo..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG That was a big SHOCKKK!!!!! I expected Nupur Obviously but Omggg......... But to be honest No one can replace Nupur LOL

Goood story tho ;) Make some more:D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@@@@ shafyy- i know dat it is a zor ka zatka....😉

but u c its not made by me...its my frenz creation......n letss c wat she makes aage!!!
IT WILL B GR8 ONLY
BY DAT TIME JUS ENJOY!! READIN....
Edited by Sanugr8fan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG...
I was almost gonna tell u dat by mistake Sheena's name is written wen i realised dat its actually Sheena,,.....!!!!!!! lol...
Bahut bada jhatka laga.....
Yeh koi bura sapna haina???

Continue soon....
Wanna read wat happens further.....
Plss pm....


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Posted: 14 years ago
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great start 👍🏼

ye to kafi zor ka jhatka tha by god 😆
would love to read more
continue soon
nd add me to ur pm list 😊

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