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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
hey thank u for adding me to your pm list😊.the update was very very good👏 . eagerly waiting for your next update. i have a doubt is abhimanyu is kinshuk mahajan😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
i will update soon😊
but thanx guys a big 🤗 to all of you
abhay piya zindabad
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
is this real or just a fantasy post i mean are all these character really going to be in the show please pm me if all this is real.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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cool ff cont soon n plz pm me on d next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
chapter 3
all the 4 raichands take abhay and sit in the cafeteria trying to control abhay and console him.in the other side misha and pia are checking the name charts and roll numbers
misha: dad ne toh subah kaha tha ke hum 3rd section mein hain where the h**l is the 3rd section name chart yaar
piya: misha... kya tum andhe ho gaye ho ya phir pagal name chart tumhare samne hai
misha: oh ok
piya: mishu
misha: section 3 abhay raichand , ananya raj ,angad khanna,bhaskar menon,bunty kaur,deepa kulkarni, farida khan,gouri singhania, harpreet singh,kabir rathod,misha dobriyal,piyali dobriyal,ritu verma,ruhi walia....oh my ruhi bhi hai and
Tanush .......WHAT THE H**l
t woh bhi humaare saath kyun phir se fail ho gaye. bimbo queen....kyun yaar college ka first din hi itna bada disappointment
piya: jaise karni waise barni...
misha: ab tumhe nahin lagta tum kuch zyada hi hindi proverbs use kar rahe ho
piya laughing: oh my god misha ko pata tha ki woh proverb hai aaj toh baarish hogi
misha: shut up
misha runs to call kabir to show who was in their batch and piya could see that kabir and angad were shocked and blabbing nonsense thinking of the fact that t was with them . in the other side sakshi is standing near the wall and piya looks at her and smiles and sakshi smiles back and walks towards piya.
sakshi: hello. my name is sakshi ( she says in her typical childish tune)
piya: hi . i am piya . piyali dobriyal
sakshi: piya...LI right
piya: but i prefer piya
sakshi: ok piya so how many years have you been in dehradoon
piya: for the past 7 years you must have heard of arnab dobriyal i am his daughter
sakshi: oh and her ( pointing at misha)
piya: she is misha my sis
sakshi : so haw many of you dobriyal children totally ( trying to find more information on piya)
piya: actually 5 of us . vishal, panchi, jay, misha and me
sakshi : vishal he is your brother. he works in our business partners office.but none of them look like you
sakshi had actually controlled piya's mind that she would speak the truth without realizing to whom she was telling it to . so piya opens up about her mom.
piya : actually all of them are my step brothers and sisters . my dad is arnab but my mom is ...........
misha : piyaaaaaaaa........ help kabir's chasing me
piya gets distracted but sakshi doesnt leave .
sakshi: what is your mothers name
piya: sugandh
sakshi: sugandh... she is your mom
piya: yes
sakshi: what is her full name
piya: sughand trishna jaiswal
sakshi: oh i see ( trembeling)
she hugs piya tight and just walks away in tears and from far lets piya's mind out of her control. piya comes back to her senses
piya: what hapened i was saying hi to sakshi and ........... i dont remember a thing anyways........... mishaaaaaaaaaaa kahan ho tum
misha: main yahaan hoo phoolan devi tumhare peche iss rakshas ke haatho mein
piya turns and sees misha tied up to the wall by kabir and angad and kabir eating misha's favorite chocolate in front of her and making fun of her. piya couldn't control her laughter and walks towards misha .
in the other side RAICHANDS
abhimanyu: kya hua sakshi did you find out about piya
sakshi : she is arnab and sugandh's daughter
dhruv and vandana look at eachother and turn to look at abhay who was sitting in the canteen table staring at the mountains he had not heard what all of them were talking.only lost in his thought about maithili
dhruv: piya sughand ki beti hai aur hame pata bhi nahin chala. isi liye toh main itna hairaan tha ki piya ki shakaal maithili se itna kyun milti hai .
vandana sees haseena's number flash in her mobile phone and she picks it up
haseena: vandana hows abhay
vandana: he is fine now mom hust lost in his memories as usual
haseena: thank goodness warna aaj toh kuch aur hi ho jaata
vandana: but mom ek naya khabaar hai. piya sugandh ki beti hai. sugandh trishna jaiswal ki. can you imagine it.
haseena : perfect . the perfect news to hear on a perfect day.( in a scarstic voice) and turns to chand.
haseena: chand you have news...............
Edited by koyal-kajal - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
loved it but der a lot of characters so it was lil confusin but nvr mind liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
thanx guys for liking sorry for too many characters
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
wat will happen next?
waiting 4 ur update..
but feeling bad 4 d dejected abhay..
make him interact with ppl in some manner..
pm after ur update.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
add me to ur pm list for this ff
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
awesome plz continue soon 😊

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