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magss24

@magss24

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

tat was a good start😊 please continue. do pm me if possible

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koyal-kajal

@koyal-kajal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: maheswari1188
tat was a good start😊 please continue. do pm me if possible

i will

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

do continue soon...
too many kids in each family..
will take some time 2 keep track of them..
pm me when u update..

Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago

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Kaushiki

@kaushiki9

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

ha ha ha

extra cast????????

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

looking frwd to your update

its really nice post

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koyal-kajal

@koyal-kajal

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: RB81
do continue soon...
too many kids in each family..
will take some time 2 keep track of them..
pm me when u update..

yes i made it to many so that there willl be more lovestories triangles and in clan wars it will be great like in twilight the werewolves are 7 of them vampires are 8 and the extras are some 7 i am sorry i am a maniac and love love stories and also wanted some justice for people without anybody in the show like kabir and t

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koyal-kajal

@koyal-kajal

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

chapter 2😊

in the car (piya and misha's car)

piya: awesome na hum ab college jayenge finally

misha:tum aisa bol rahi ho jaise hum koi mars ya venus par sufar karne ke liye ja rahe hain

piya:misha you know just leave it tum nahin samjho gi just forget it

misha: hey wait koi ek kaho ok either just leave it or forget it ...oh ok tum mujhe options de rahi the choose karne ke liye hai na

with her usual super sweet smile

piya just reminded herself whom she was talking to

MISHA

the one who no one could win over .she slowly looked outside the window and noticed three jet black cars howling their way into the college thier tyres screeching and almost looked like sparks would come from the tyres

misha:whoa! yeh koun hai yaar uss ameer baap ki bikadi hue bimbo toh nahin ho sakte because she owns a pink audi tts

making a funny face pretending to be t
piya laughed and got down from their car with misha and watched as all of the raichands got down and kabir came hoping skiping and everything a little boy would do when he gets a chocolate he knew what misha and piya were looking at the raichands

kabir:they are the raichands new in town a little too sophisticated

misha: kise ko jalan ho rahe hai ki woh ab dehradoon ka sabse hot boy ab nahin raha

kabir: you

misha ran and kabir followed her trying to hit her

just then vandana looked at piya

vandana: what the h**l it cant be she is dead .............dhruv

dhruv: what happened vanda.......maithili how can it be no she died in front of me it cant be

abhimanyu and sakshi turned and looked at piya all of them stood speechless and piya noticed that they were staring at her and she looked away. abhay was standing still as if any moment he could breakdown and cry his heart out. vandana and abhimanyu held him tight

dhruv: abhay......... listen it is not her ok she just looks like her dont breakdown here people are around

sakshi: i will call chand ...

dhruv: no wait i will call him. abhay needs you here just control him let there not be a scene created

sakshi nodded and went towards abhay

dhruv opened his iphone and before he could call haseena's number flashed

dhruv: yes mom there is a problem

trying to find words to speak

haseena: yes i sensed something wrong. is everything fine and what about abhay . behaving mean again?

dhruv: mom ..mom wait there is a girl who looks like maithili here we are not imagining. we all saw her here, abhay is becoming incontrollable ....she looks exactly like maithili

haseena now shaking with fear: what .........maithili

chand who was pouring wine into the wineglass now looked at her with shock

haseena: i will call you soon bye

dhruv: do it fast tell dad quick

haseena closed her phone and quickly walked towards chand

chand: what happened how did that girls name come out of your mouth with so much fear

haseena:there is a girl in mount college who looks like maithili a carbon copy of her. all of them saw her. she is real. abhay is becoming incontrollable

chand: ... just as i feared i thought maithili's memories will make him mad but now a girl who looks like her that too so close ... abhay will become incontrollable... you know haseena what happens when he becomes mad

haseena: i know . abhay is the strongest of all our kind there is no one who can defeat him. he can change the world if he wants ..he is capable of so much that a thousands of us can do ..

chand: we must do something about this

haseena and chand looked outside the window planning their next move

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Kaushiki

@kaushiki9

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

chand fav dialouge in show seems 2 b : v have 2 do smthing abt this....... and its here 2

😆

2 gd man

very nice, and this one is 4 u........

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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koyal-kajal

@koyal-kajal

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: kaushiki9
chand fav dialouge in show seems 2 b : v have 2 do smthing abt this....... and its here 2
😆

2 gd man

very nice, and this one is 4 u........

👏

thank you so much this is my first ff😊

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Aromal saxena

@--AROMAL--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

too good !!👏

there are many character which made me a bit confused😕 ! but nothing matterz !!!!!

please continue soon i am waiting !!!

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koyal-kajal

@koyal-kajal

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: aromal
too good !!👏
there are many character which made me a bit confused😕 ! but nothing matterz !!!!!
please continue soon i am waiting !!!

sorry for confusion first time writing ff and didnt know what to dobut all characters have a important role in future but dont worry will update soon