ff:new beginings - updated chap14 on pg 28

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Gals

@Cute_Gal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#221

Awesome Update Diya.. Poor Piya..Abhay should not hav behave so rudely..bt its not his mistake..its d monster in him..
OMG Abhay n Smiling n every1 just staring at him.. Atleast they Credited Piya for his smile.. Loved d Raichands part.. Poor Dobriyals.. So finally Aditya is back.. Eagerly waiting for d next part.. Continue soon.. Thanx for d pm..lol.

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Nidhi

@...Nidhi...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#222

Awesome update...!! I was really missing reading ur ff... Thanks for posting this...🤗
Will be waiting for the next part and then I'll comment in detail...😉
Luv,
Nidhi😃

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Bharti

@TheSexyDevil

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Posted: 14 years ago

#223

Cont soon and PM me 😃

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_Klaroline_

@_Klaroline_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#224

very good writing
I alwayzzz luv ur updates
Pleeez pm me
And need more abhiya part
Pleeez pm me

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ilove99

@ilove99

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Posted: 14 years ago

#225

update yaar again so long break

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Minahil

@minahil1997

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Posted: 14 years ago

#226

hy kajol!!!!😳

a new reader of ur ff... loved all the updates... abhay and mathil's bond is strong here... and i love the way his family console him and make him feel better unlike the serial... i love both ur ff's and plz continue soon ❤️