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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Effects of Blue Bird (a)










(Nupur's POV)

I am back to my home. Today was very hot, I don't know what the temperature is, but unbearable humidity made me sweating. I slump on the bed as I switched on the fan with full force.

"Munni, kahan gayi thi beta?" I heard Babuji's voice on the doorway. I quickly woke up.

"wo main Mayank ko Jhora dikhane le gayi thi." I walk near him, "but don't worry Baba, main abhi khana bana deti hoon."

Babuji smile and soothing my hair, " you are like your mother."

I smile and run towards the kitchen.

I start cooking; the menu is so simple, so it will not take too much time. So, I put daal on the presser cooker and I concentrate to cutting veggies '. but the Jhora incident was still floating in my mind. He was concern for me, but why he was concern about ME?

Off course, Nupur, I patted on my head, it was obvious, because you are his friend. But something different, I don't know what, but something was really differenct '

"ouch!!"

Damn! I cut my finger .. it was bleeding ' I rush to tap, sucking my finger ' cold water sooths my pain and my eyes fell on neighboring house. A big leafy Mango tree hide my little kitchen from them, but form my side in between branches and leaves, I easily found some portion of the room through their big window.

I was surprised to see Mayank in the room. I know that is Jethumoni's house, but I didn't know that Mayank using that room. His back was facing my side, but I know he is only Mayank. I was so excited and about to call him, but a sudden sight made me stop. I saw Mayank sat on the bed, he wore only jeans ' I couldn't help but stare at him as my eyes are caught his well-built, muscular bare body and broad shoulder '. I fixed my gaze on him ' I was lost in him, but suddenly back into reality, my eyes caught my attention '. a huge blood mark was in his bare back!!!!!!

Blood!!!

I could feel an ache on my heart '.

What happened to him? Sometimes ago, he was fine, and then what happened so soon. I saw Jethumoni entre with Detol and cotton in his hand. Mayank stretched his back as Jethumoni applied Detol on the wound.

I caught my breath as could feel the pain '. all is my fault. Why I was not asking him after fall that he was fine or not? Main bhi na!! kissi kaam ki nahi!!! It was all my fault '.

Mere wajah sehi wo '.

Tear forming in my eyes '.

I removed my tears and back to kitchen as presser cooker whistled.

I settle my mind to see Mayank in evening. I was worried about him, he hurt for me only.

*

It was evening. I was trying to find some excuse to go to Jethumoni's house. Damn!!!! I never searched any excuse earlier, so why today Nupur? Be brave!!!

I gulped down my nervousness and prepared to go to Baba for asking permission. Suddenly Baba call me ..

"Munni, are you free now? Or you have some other plan?" Baba asked me as he closed the book and placed on the table.

No No NOOOOOOO ''' I am not going anywhere with you Baba, please not now, I am going to see Mayank, he was hurt. Please Baba, Pleaseeeee '.

"No, Baba. I am free." I smile sarcastically, "kahin jana hai kya?"

"haan, wo main soch raha tha ke Mukherjee se mill lun, kuch kaam tha. Toh tu v chal."

God, tussi great ho!!!!

I nodded my head. Babuji little frowned as notice an unusual big grin in my face.

*

We all seat on the yard, Babuji and Jethumoni seated on cane-chair and I and Sutra, he is my best friend since childhood seated on staircase and busy our own chatting. Sutra describing that how he controlled an adamant Ox alone. He is a Santal, and this type of bravery could help to impress his would be in-laws.

I am pretending to listening him, but my mind somewhere else ' with someone else. In the mean time, Sutra went for some pending work ' they are very sincere for their work. I am alone and trying to find Mayank. But he is nowhere. May be he went to evening walk. DAMN!!!! Use aaj hi walk pe jaana tha!!!! Idiot!!!

"Nupur," Jethumoni's voice break my thought. He is smiling, " I know you are getting boar. So why aren't you chat with Mayank! He is in terrace."

I smiled broadly and run toward to terrace.

"Who is Mayank?" Babuji asked.

"son of Abinash ''. Abinash Roychoudhury, my friend '. You met him before."

"Oh, that rich Mumbaiya businessman."

"why you still angry about rich person Sengupta. They all are not so bad."

I couldn't heard Babuji's answer as I climbed up on stairs. But I know, what his answer was!!! He has a hatred of rich person, specially from Mumbai!!! It was all about Uday bhai and Chitra boudi (bhabi, in bengali)!

I reached on the terrace. The terrace is very big, similar like a medium playground. I reached near Jhula and saw Mayank '' playing basketball!!

I was spot rooted to see his gesture. He is handle the ball with full control and scored goals with perfect aim. He wore blue jeans ' he was sweating .. sweat rolling down from his body and hair ' black vest stick on his muscular body. He shakes his head and sweats was sprayed out from his black hair ' He look so handsome, so attractive, so sexy ' in the light of setting sun.

I couldn't off my eyes on him. I know this is not a good idea to stared a boy '.. but couldn't help it.

"aarey Nupur tum? Tum kaab aayi?" Mayank notice me, "maine tumhe notice hi nahi kiya!"

His dimple flashed. I notice his dimple earlier, but now, I fascinated about those.

He quickly covered the distance, picked the shirt from Jhula and wore quickly.

"toh, miss guava thief ' aaj kuch chori karne naahi gayi?" he chuckled.

I frowned, isse kisne bataya k main peyara (guava, in Bengali) chori karti hun!

He reads my mind through my expression, " Jethumoni ne bataya '.. whole afternoon, he told me about you." He chuckled again.

"kya!!! Kya bataya Jethumoni ne?" I was fuming '

"ke tum kitni chori karti ho '' kissi ki nahi sunti ho '. pura din durti-bhagti rehti ho-"

I was furious ' Jethumoni told whole worse thing about me to MAYANK!!!!

I am now in the mood tof fight with Jethumoni.

I turned to leave, but he caught my elbow, "arry Nupur, ruko to." I feel wave of unknown feelings inside, automatically I gazed on my elbow. Mayank removed his hand as soon as he realized what he had just done.

"urn 'sorry." He look embarrassed or shy.

"its ok, Mayank." I am trying to overcome from the stage of unknown feelings.

"urn, tell me something about Mumbai. How is the city look like exactly! Matlab TV me jaise dikhate hain, builkul wisa hi?"

"tum ' tum kavi Mumbai nahi gayi na?" he look in to my eyes.

"Mumbai to kya'.main kavi Kolkata bhi nahi gayi." I smiled to see his wondering face, "lekin ab jayungi ' MBA karne."

Mayank's eyes glittered, "achcha main bhi US jaa raha hun, after MBA ek training karne. Agar tum bhi chalti to kinta acha hota '' saath me rehte!!" he said very excitedly.

I smiled at his innocent talk, he didn't know about our financial condition.

"toh kya hua '' par saath saath MBA complete to karenge na!" I cover up my sadness,

" phir two friends, Mr. Mayank Roychoudhury, the topmost businessman and Ms. Nupur Sengupta, a stupid employee of an unknown farm '' kitna maaza ayega na?!" I said all this dramatically, which made him laugh.

But he just smile ' I never saw him laughing these days. Why? And now, I found some pain in his smile '. am I said something wrong, which hurt him?

"kya hua Mayank''koi baat hai?"

"urn ' nothing." he smirk, "who Nupur Jetuhumoni ne bataya ke yahan pe ek mela laga hai ' toh wo kahan pe hai?" he trying to pretend casual, but I knew, there is something definitely wrong, that he changed the topic.

"you really want to go in our village fair?" I asked.

"offcourse '' if you will allow me to go with you."

"ok,done! Tomorrow morning '' you, me and Pranjal."

"Pranjal!!! Who?" he asked with confusion.

"Pranjal'my buddy'.my yaar."


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Precap : Mayur in terrace.

Here is the 5th update.

plz do comment.


Love

suja❤️








hey suja loved it.................😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sujaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
waiting for ur update
plsssssssssssss post it soon dear

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: jiya_angel

res


*edited*

yayy me first

hmm... ki boli bolo toh...
bhishon bhishon bhishoooon bhalo
👏

Nupur is falling for Mayank.... soo cute😳
But what is dis😲... Nupur's baba will be the kabab mein haddi😲
and what is it with Mayank... is there something about his past? or just his introvert nature?😕

but very nice update

thnks

luv ya
🤗


Thank u so much for ur lovely comment.

mmm....mayank er byapare next update a jante parbe.


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Posted: 14 years ago
Suja update ur title
ur page no should be 16

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-

Edit-----------------------

Hey Suja
Thank u so much for updating my fav ff
it was a beautiful update as usual
awwwwww - what happen to nups?????
is she falling for mayank????????
Hayeeeeeeeee at first mayank and now nups -both r in love with each other....


Hmmmmmm she was hurt when she saw that maynk got injured
She was worried abt him and was trying to find some excuses to go to jethumoni's house
wah wah wah- and finally she got the chance

the terrace scene was superb.
loved mayur covo
both want to complete their MBA

but suja tell me one thing - nups came here to ask abt mayus injury
but i think she forgot it.LOL
aisa he hota hai- pyaar main log bade bade cheez a bhul jati hai.LOL

wah- meela- my fav
i love meela- so now mayur r going to meela
yeeeee i hope they will enjoy a lot
but who is pranjal- nups ki yaar- kahi maynk jealous na ho jaye.LOL
bechara- tak tak- kuch ulta sidha na sochle


it was wonderful update sweety
rocking one
keep it up
and try to update before tuesday- i mean monday upate karo-plizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


take care


Thank u so much for ur lovely comment.

thik kahan....pyar sab kuch bhula deta hai!!!

i know......u r curios for Pranjal's entry.....his identity ll revel soon....till then enjoyyyyyy⭐️

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Annie-

🤣 I got the pm late..Had already start reading..🤣
OMG! Suja babes!
U rocked with it...
Seriously...
Hayyye Nupz falling for Mayu...
The cut scene...
Cute!!!
Simply adorable update...
Muahhs!
Love u re...
One of the cutest updates...
Thanks,
Annie


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Posted: 14 years ago
hey Liaba first of all
em soo sorry for not unreserving my post
had sed ealier to myself
dat will deffi read this FF yesterday
but guess I forgot
em ghajni at timezzz😆
ok so the concept is amazing
n so iz the title
the feathers of a blue bird
so Mayu rich
Nupz middle class
their CS iz amazing 2
can't wait to read more
-❤️Linu
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Posted: 14 years ago
part1 this part waz amazing
so Nupur leaving Mumbia
in her vacationz with her daddy since she already did MBA
n waiting for her resultz
n then her lil sis Gun
lol loved her part
shezz sucha fun loving person n so naughty too
so then they came there
n then start making fun of Mayu
hezz choo cuteee
opening window when the AC is on lol this part waz amazing
cant wait to read more
Part 2
hailaa I got lost
so who is Mayua again to Nupur???
kinda confusing
or maybe itzz just me ???
well this part waz nice
Nupur visiting her villiage
just wish could get to know who is Mayu again??
-Linu
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: .PINK.


hey Liaba first of all

em soo sorry for not unreserving my post
had sed ealier to myself
dat will deffi read this FF yesterday
but guess I forgot
em ghajni at timezzz😆
ok so the concept is amazing
n so iz the title
the feathers of a blue bird
so Mayu rich
Nupz middle class
their CS iz amazing 2
can't wait to read more
-❤️Linu



Linu tera demag kharab ho gayi- she is not laiba - she is suja...........................
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is good
so nupur mind preoccupied with mayank's thoughts
oviously mayank haai he aasa
anyways due to her continuos thughts she cut her hand ohhhhhhh careless girl but here mayank is wounded due to the fall
and for this nupur is feeling bad she wnats to go to mayank and talk to him
the terrace scene is really beautiful
loking forward to the mela trip
plz cont soon and pm me


Originally posted by: nightdreamer_mn

Wonderful....update....kia baat so fast...but it was really amazing i luved mayur scene ...dey were really cute one....specially nupzzi...😳


Originally posted by: chilluppp

done donna done

amazingggggggg update dear
loved it to the core
superbbbbbbbb
brillliantly written
u r describing the feeling of nupur reallu wellllllllll
mayu is the best
loving him
great job
do continue sooooooooon




Thank u so much for ur lovely comment 😊



Edited by SujaLuvsMayur - 14 years ago

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