Maneet FF: Dreams ~1~ Part 21 page 143

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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#831

loved it...🤗

loved the sentences by which maan defined geet.....👏

You are like a candle coming into my darkness, bringing warmth and light with you. I don't think I am capable of living with out you.

Geet, you are my sunshine that starts my day

maan not letting geet out for a week😲...awww...so sad for geet..but good for maan....😆

but i think maan needed assurance that she is fine....n he was not ready to lose her again...

waiting for dev n geet talk...

Edited by jyoti_l - 14 years ago

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maansee

@maansee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#832

loved it 👏 superub part. waiting for next part.................................

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craziekudi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#833

nice update.... would love to see something like that in serial!!!

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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#834

awesome part. loved it.
maan is so caring, understanding.
update soon.

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Durga

@mrk-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#835

wow thats awsome one yaar

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#836

lovely part

awesome😊

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sweet scorpio

@sweet scorpio

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Posted: 14 years ago

#837

awesome!

awww!...maa is sooo caring!

sooo sweet!

continue soon!

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#838

madamji finally deigned to update....

why isnt there a love button i wonder!!!

ok anyways....maans care was sooooo sweet..........

but care me bhi he doesnt lose his attitude wala image!!

thats the mSK ii love!!!

dev....twist twist twist,,dont u dare make him positive!!

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-jia-

@-jia-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#839

Originally posted by: Water.
Hey,

I read ur FF in one go...it is brillant and you are an amazing writer.

U capture emotions very beautifully.

I loved it very much.

Please include me in ur PM.

Will eagerly wait for the next updates.

😊

Wow... you read all the parts together....👍🏼

Thankyou dear... you are an amazing writer yourself.. 😳

Will PM you the next time I update...

Thanks 😊

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Water

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Posted: 14 years ago

#840

Originally posted by: -jia-
Wow... you read all the parts together....👍🏼
Thankyou dear... you are an amazing writer yourself.. 😳

Will PM you the next time I update...

Thanks 😊

Thank you.

Will watch out for the PM.😛