Promise and Pyar FF#3 ~Part 545 to 548

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

Viewbie

+ 43

Posted: 14 years ago

#121

Part 548

Geet bends down to cut the thread and her lips touch his chest...

It sent shivers down both their spines...

Geet then turns...

M: Button to laga do Geet!

Geet blushes...

M: Please!

Geet turns around and starts buttoning his shirt. His hand holds her hand...

G: Maan! Chhodiye na!

M: Kyun? Main to romance ke mood mein hoon!

G: Maan! dadi neeche hongi! Breakfast bhi banana hai!

Maan smiles...

M: par pehle mujhe meri Good Morning AK chahiye!

G: Wo to aapne utthte hi le li thi na!

M: Mujhe ek aur chahiye!

Geet blushes...

G: Abhi nahi! Baad mein!

M: Baad mein kab?

G: Breakfast ke baad! Ab chhodiye...

M: Pakka?

G: Haan!

Geet runs down to the kitchen leaving Maan with a huge Grin on his face!

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Pratima Singh

@Rocks.Dhara

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#122

awesome dear....!!!

loving the closness and m very excited for their HM...

pls continue...!!!

Edited by Rocks.Dhara - 14 years ago

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#123

so romantic .... thanku mina ji

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chsweety22

@chsweety22

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#124

loved all the updates
do continue soon

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roopali

@rsroopali

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#125

hope this practise cms 2 their use
n awesomeeeee romantic update yaar

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funnymonkey

@funnymonkey

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#126

great updates

loved each parts

Maan is so sweeet

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Shreya

@..shreyaa..

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#127

Hayeeeeee
Ufff
loved the update
Specially AK..lolzz
Awesome updates mina
Continue soon
Thank u
143

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Shamima

@-shamima-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Haye so cute and their love is so sweet and the classic button and ripping the thread with the mouth never gets old and you used it at a good time too so the scene was even more romantic anyways great updates can't wait to read more 😊

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Vijaylakshmi Singh

@Lakshmi86

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#129

Hi Mina,

Nice updates!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You have continued very well,

Its a good combination of Sweetness and romance and funny too.....................................

Hmmm Geet has improved a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Lets see..............they will rock the HM.............

Waise Padosi ka session acha tha, and both miya biwi have thought padosi........ek saath...............funny.............

Hi Tonya,

I read your FF Promise aur Pyaar for the first time,

i thoroughly enjoyed the hilarious episodes,

be it PP's confision, Geets craziness, - scooty, Action Movie and convo, Ramayan and the backfire story....... Chandu-CID, Nakul and Chandu convo............., then 143 and all its different dirivities........and ofcourse SR and its training.................amazing................

(Well i have alos commented on 2nd thread)

Well Mina is a good decision to carry on the story................

Take Care............