Promise and Pyar FF#3 ~Part 545 to 548 | Pg 20 - Page 12

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Posted: 14 years ago
finally geet knows wht 143 is so now she wont tell chandu or nakul to tell it thank god
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome parts. loved them.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: tonyahk

Hi Mina,

finally i'm here. sorry for the late comments. loved all the parts.

i too prayed along with maan so that no foodpoisoning happen to maaneet.if there is any foodpoisoning because of geet's dinner then what would happen to honeymoon?i'm sure maan would kill her this time🤣.

finally geet knows what 143 means and loved maan's explanation for four.very cute.

eager to see what plan maan has for our CID and Nakul.

thanks for the updates dear.i too missing all of you but your updates compensate it.

i may come up with some hilarious oneshots whenever i find time.

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Tonya



Hey Tonya.....

Glad to see your comments!

Will be waiting for your oneshots!

Whenever you write your OS, post the links on this thread!

I'm missing ur hilarious updates!

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Mina
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey frenz...

Thank u so much all of you for the appreciation and love!

Will continue tonight!

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Mina
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice updates.. luved it.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part....so now geet knows what's 143.....
continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome parts.
loved them.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 545

Geet gets up in the morning and finds herself in Maan's embrace...
Geet tries to remove his arms but her tightens it...

M (sleepishly with eyes closed): Sone do na!
G: Maan humein 11 baje nikal na hai!
M: Ummm...
G: Maan saath baj rahe hain! Utthiye na!
Maan gently opens his eyes... Hides his face in her neck...
M: Thodi der aur sone do!
Geet blushes....
G: Mujhe to chhodiye...
M: Nahi! 10 minute aur....
Geet smiles... After 2 minutes she feels wetness on her neck... Maan was placing wet kisses on her neck....
G: Maaannn... (she moans)
Maan goes upto her lips and nibbles onto it as she responds to it very eagerly...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 546

Finally after 10 minutes Maan breaks off the kiss gasping for air and kisses her forehead...
M:Good Morning!
G: Good Morning! (she smiles)

Finally Geet gets up and goes for a bath.. She comes out wearing light pink kurta with slim fit jeans...

She sits on the dressing table combing her hair.... Maan comes from behind, kisses her wet hair and walks off to the bathroom...

He comes out in his towel and Geet was sitting on the couch reading newpaper....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 547

Maan sees his blue jeans and white shirt kept on the bed...
M (thinks): Finally meri wife, ek wife ki tarah behave kar rahi hai!

Maan slips on his jeans and then removes the towel...

Geet looks up at his bare body... She smiles.. He wears his white shirt... He finds his lower button was missing and was removing his shirt when...

G: Rukiye...
She walks to him...
G: Main kar deti hoon! she brings needle thread and extra button and starts fixing it onto his shirt...



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