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Posted: 14 years ago
awww loving ur ff... maan is sooo cute going against what everyone thinks for runny nosed geet! plz update soon and add me to ur PM list :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
HI EVERYONE HERE IS MY NEXT UPDATE................

PART-7 .

MAAN: GEEEEET GEET GET UP.......

geet is sleeping peacefully .....slowly she open her eyes she smiles seeing maan in front of her eyes..

GEET: maan ..she touched his face lovingly
MAAN: he close his eyes feeling her touch .....
he know that he love her so much but he is confused with geet actions she never showed her love towards him....he always wanted geet to feel the same way like him...he want to see love in her eyes not only trust which he always sees in her eyes....he know geet is so innocent dont know this world ,she never use artificial make to look good ....she always do something or the other by which she gains lots of love by him.....she is pure with her beauty as well as with acts......but she is just wear suits of old types and her specs and her nose ...he smiles thinking that
last sadi ki hoke pheli sadi ki hai meri geet....
he is loosing himself to her ...he want to take geet in his arms ...he want to kiss her roughly...he want to touch her..........he slowly raise his hand to touch her face and he does both lost in each other eyes forgetting everything ........he kneel down towards her and place a soft kiss on her cheek and move towards her lips ....geet closed her eyes and want to feel him ...
suddenly winds blow and curtains flowing fast with the heavy winds ........windows making sounds .........

maan came back to his sense ....he saw geet closed her eyes he want to move to her lips but he know this is wrong geet still dont know any thing ............she need to grow with mind to.

MAAN: ummmm geet get up we need to go to college .......
GEET: she opened her eyes and saw maan facing towards the ground...
to remove themselfs from this situation
MAAN: geet get up how can you be late to your first day of college ....with this he gave his hand to geet...
geet gets up ...and maan send her to the bathroom...
GEET: what was that ? why i feel some thing different with his touch.....uuuhhhhh geet you gone mad dont think to much maan is waiting outside hurry...
MAAN: geet you get ready i will bring your breakfast here..
geet was not in her sense she is just staring him even she forget to blink ...
gee geet ........maan shouts ....geet was still staring at maan....
maan smiles seeing how much geet is effected with his touch .... he feel happy may be geet understanding meaning of love...
MAAN: geet stop staring i am not a ghost so that you are standing num by seeing me ..... i am your
GEET: what? you are my what? she asked impatiently ...
MAAN: smiles and said ,....i am your friend .no no no...best friend
by the way what else did you want?
GEET: nothing ... i will get ready . .....she faces her back towards him and removed her towel ...she was still not in her sense .........suddenly maan was shock with her act and closed his eyes and run.........
after some time maan came back but geet was still doing her work slowly ....
MAAN : geet if your mood is not there for college today then say me but dont do this acting in front of me like you are ill......
he know she is doing this all because of him....
GEET: shut up! i am not ill...wait in 5 mins. i will be back..
she dressed herself in maans favourite color .....and she wore her earrings that maan gave to her for her first day of college....
maan felt like taking his geet far from every one ..where no one is there ...so that they will be lost in each other eyes.
they both eat silently taking glimpse of each other...

IN COLLEGE:


geet you go inside i will park the car and will be there with you soon.
geet noded and went inside the college campus it was huge one she want to see the full college but confused from where she should start .....
she went to canteen side and settle her self on one seat of the table ...
mean while a group came into the canteen they know today is the first day of their juniors so they decided to have fun.............that gang was none other than maan's gang ......girls with mini skirts and boys with cool charm ......enters the canteen .......
they sat on the stairs of the canteen .......
suddenly one boy eye caught geet seating happily..

IN PARKING AREA:
bro...
maan turn to see anni standing with dev she was fuming
with anger....
MAAN: shit! now anni will not leave me...
ANNI: bro you know na today is my first day but you remember to take geet but not me?
MAAN: thats because i know dev will take care of you....as he also doing his 12th from this college ....he said by seeing here and there......
ANNI: ok .go but dont talk to me now....
she turn to leave ....but maan held her hand and said my anni doesn't need any one because she is grown up and bold enough to take care of her.....and he hide his smile saying and anni knows karate too...
dev laughs........anni hug maan ....yes bro your anni is strong .......
MAAN: i know but geet is not strong she goes outside only with me think if i leave her and any one tease her in first day of her college then ................
all three laughs thinking geet acts.

IN CANTEEN:
BOY : hey guys see that girl ....
all saw geet sitting happily ..
come we got our bakra for today(geet bakra sana 😆)
they all make their way to geet ....and starts teasing her
BOY 1: o see this ugly sitting like princess......
BOY 2: no no not princess but princess slave
all laughs loudly .........all get together in canteen with the laughing voice..

geet started crying.........
GIRL 1: shut up boys! see this bhenji she dont deserve to be the slave of princess also......
GIRL 2: she removed geet's specs .......OMG o my god see her specs how old fashion yakhi......yakh yakh!
GIRL 1: see her she put two ponies also
they removed her ribbons and thrown on the floor
geet fall on the floor with sudden push..........
BOY 1: hey guys may be we are wrong she must be the cleaner of the canteen and not a student....
mean while maan , anni , dev moved towards the college before they enter ....they heard the loud laughing coice coming from the canteen ....
they saw eachother scare faces which tell that ....that must be geet.
one of the boy moved forward to geet to remove the
dupatta..........
as his hand caught the dupatta .......one strong hand grab his shoulder ...
boy turn to see..he is maan..
BOY 2: come on maan you to have fun..
they are not aware of that geet is his love.........
maan give a tight punch to him with that the whole canteen got silence ....
GIRL 1: maan what happen first time you are fighting in the college ...that to with your beat friend RAHUL.


MAAN: bus sameera just shut your mouth !.he is in last stage of anger ....if he dont leave now anything would happen.
he ran towards geet picked her in his arm all student opened their mouth wide ....
what is this happening the most handsome boy of the college with this ugly girl.....he also punched his best friends sameera,rahul...........
with geet he went out of the college.......

PRECAP: more maneets moments.


please leave some more more comments sana wants more.........and lovely and longgggggggggg comments..

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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful part!...
pls update soon..... can't wait for the nxt!...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wowwwwwwwww this realllyyyyyyyy shows maan luv towards geet
so pure n innocent
hope thy stay like this their whole life

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update.. Maan is so much in love with Geet..... so protective .... just loved it....
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg omg omg
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update
both the update are too good
love it
i like the precap :Ppppp
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was really cute update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update...👏
Maan to much love Geet and very protective
how he hug geet great ...
sameera was shocked...pls cont.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwwwwwwww maan is so sweet fighting for geet luve him amazng update
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow maan left annie for geet he is so much in love wid geet and loves her so deeply

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