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sumaiya

@RishbalaAsyaMG

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Posted: 14 years ago

Hii.. new FF this has been playing in my mind for ages and i was thinking wait till my other ff finish.. but they still hav a long way to go.. so i decided to start with this one.. .. there will be weekly updates for each update.. from nw on

1. mine will b fridays

2. back 2 me.. mondays

3. unknown consequences on weekend somepoint double updates for that one

and this one on sundays or wednesdays

Characters

Geet Handa-- An Orphan.. the youngest careworker at Delhi Children Orphange at age 19.. Lively bubbly mischevious with the kids

Mike- (Manchanda full name) Head Careworker.. strict but at times fun. Geet and Mike have a good father daugher relationship

Gina-Secondary careworker. Married to Mike. Strict with kids but caring nature.

Kids.

.. Ronit- age 12- Clever scheming trying to hatch plans to make misery for the careworkers

Atul-- Ronit's right hand man quiet but clever.. -age 12

Ananya- Sweet cheerful girl age 11.. always helpful helping the careworkers

Nikita- age 13. Sweet but always fighting with the boys.

Karan- age 4 the cutest kid. The apple of everyones eyes.

Piya- age 11- Ananya best friend in the carehome

Rati- age 14 oldest in the house. tries to keep order

And last kid in the orphange is Rahul-- The clever one.. who annoys everyone with his cleverness.

BUT in ALL the kids are alll together mischevious

Maan Singh Khurana-- a shrewd Businessman.. Wants what he sets his eyes on, his properties or business deals.. he always gets it.

Vicky Singh Khurana... Maan's younger and only brother.. Loves Maan but always getting into trouble. (he is friends with Geet as he met her in college before she graduated still meets her.)

Dadima.. needs no introduction.

PART 1

'WHAAAT' Geet yelled. The kids of the orphange were crowding around the orphange office where Mike Gina and Geet were having a conversation.

'I'm afraid its the truth Geet, we have to accept it.' Mike said putting his head down.

'But But how can that be? We've been living here for so long. For the last 25 years this orphange has been opened. How can they close us down?' Geet asked.

'The government did not extend our lease and has sold this land to a business man.' Gina said.

'But the kids, what do we do, where do we take them?' Geet said worriedly

'They will be sent to other orphanges and carehomes but seperated' Mike said dejectidly putting his head down.

'NO' said the kids running inside.

'We are not letting this happen' Said Ronit

'Too right' Said Rati

'We are staying here and its final. No business man can kick us out' Said Ananya

'I don't wana go' said Karan. Geet picked him up.

'AND WE WON'T' said Geet with affirmaty.

'Geet, its done' Mike said

'NO. Who is this business Man may i ask?' asked Geet.

'Maan Singh Khurana' Mike said

'He ain't taking our home from us Mike' Geet said.

'Geet Geet don't do anything stupid' Gina said

'I'm not. I'm just going to call my the neighbours and make a few speeches of how Maan Singh Khurana is taking the home of these pure innocent children' Geet said

'You mean,'Piya said who wanted to be a journalist'

'yes Piya, you write your article i'll get that published'

'Geet i think thats a great idea' Mike said

'Yeah' said the kids agreeing

'Gina what do you think?' Mike asked

'I don't know its a Geet Plan'

'But Geet plans Work' Geet said 'well most of the time' Geet said remembering her plan to fix dinner of the childrens choice and how it all went wrong.

'Well lets see what happens' Gina said 'i'm in'

'Hurray' The kids cheered

'Now watch Maan Singh Khurana how i annoy you so much that you won't live in peace. You took the peace from us, now how could we not do the same to you' Geet thought to herself.

PRECAP: Maan angered by the article.. He goes to the orphanage to see a protest. Geet is standing on the roof with a loudspeaker.. she falls down 3 stories only to be caught by ...

Please comment and show what you think.. its a new idea totally... there going to be so much fun and argumetns.. the kids and everything aganist the MSK!!! PLEASE COMMENT

Part 2-page 4

part 3 page 8

part 4page 14

part 5 page 20(updated with a long promo) 6..nd 2 chk

part 7 36 part 8 44

Part 9 54

part 10 60

PArt 11

page12 75

Part 13 77

Epiglogue-pa78

Part 10 PART 2- 66