[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134)

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bluerose1889

@bluerose1889

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#451

That was hot!
I have to give it to Aarya. That man has a huge amount of self-control.
Nirosha's paying for torturing him with that dance. I loved the last line.

"Please... please have mercy on me Rosh…"

Poor guy! But I think it's sweet that he wants to wait before they take the next step.
Another awesome update devi!

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#452

I thought nayana is bolder while teasin vicky but rosh not equaly but bold when it comes to torture aarya, poor guy was in such a horrible plight, but i love d part where he was pleadin her to hv mercy.

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#453

Hawt!! I can't even go drink cold water....I have tonsils already!! Poor Aarya!!

Rename Shiv and Gauri's house as Prop-house!! They can let it out on lease for couples who would like to enjoy clandestine romances or are having secrets affairs!! They could probably advertise like this:

Aiye aiye!! Agar karna hai girlfriend se pyaar aur nahi chahte interuption bekaar!! Saare plans ho jayen flop and you are in need of a prop!! Then this the place for you!! Ek baar aao...and apni bandi ko hamesha ke liye apni bahon mein paao!!!

Warning: This house has however certain aversion to clothes. Please carry spare because you may enter fully clothed...but will leave only in shreds!!

🤣🤣

Edited by jazzerette - 14 years ago

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Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#454

Wowee Devi ...is that HOT or is that HAWT ....😃....me wondering who that person wa who came to sit there for a while ...if only that person had known becoz of him / her we got such a treat ....😆

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#455

that was hot........................
cont soon................some Shiv Gauri moments like this plz...................

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richiiiii

@richiiiii

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#456

gosh it was steaming hot!!!

loved it....

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538783

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#457

Originally posted by: nikipuki
Holy Moly.....that was a hot update......I was tickled that you rated the update 21+......does it really make a difference after 18+??

Lol... I think there was one that was 24+ (I think where Maan and Geet *ahem ahem* in Love and Despair during that party; come to think of it, I think all my parties have some form of *ahem ahem* 😉) - it tickles me too when I decide on the age and especially when I differentiate between NRIs and non-NRIs... (I mean, NRIs and RIs ;)

Edited by sridevi27 - 14 years ago

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#458

i think i am in love with him...damn rosh really needs to show some love back! lol! i am losing things to say every time you update because it just keeps getting better and i dont think words are even needed anymore..... your writing gives me happy butterflies in my stomach!

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311578

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Posted: 14 years ago

#459

Do you happen to have the number of the Khurana's and would-be's or Kapoor's and would-be's tailors? I need to get something made for myself.

I love your updates. I'm a bit under water with work due to my upcoming India trip so read it on the go and cannot comment that often....But you know I'm reading right?

Please tell me how where you get your writing inspiration from. I used to write random one shots but those were inspired by Maaneet. Now days they make me wanna keep a safe distance. LOL

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538783

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Posted: 14 years ago

#460

Originally posted by: dolphinUSA
Do you happen to have the number of the Khurana's and would-be's or Kapoor's and would-be's tailors? I need to get something made for myself.

I love your updates. I'm a bit under water with work due to my upcoming India trip so read it on the go and cannot comment that often....But you know I'm reading right?

Please tell me how where you get your writing inspiration from. I used to write random one shots but those were inspired by Maaneet. Now days they make me wanna keep a safe distance. LOL

Shiv and Gauri and Shaan and Thalia and Aarya and Nirosha and Dhruv and Neela are all inspiration enough now; somehow they seem real in my head... ;)

However, television-wise, I have to say, Caroline and Taylor are my new couple of choice! I am so glad the Vampire Diaries season restarted on Thurs. Working on an update about them as we speak (well, as I write)... I haven't updated Oil and Water in so long...

I am glad to know that you're still reading :) I do occasionally go through my PM list and take out names of people whom I haven't heard from in a while... but you're safe :)

-Devi