[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134) - Page 39

Even i wanna apologise if ever my comment disturbd u, n i realy wanna assure u tat ur updates r always amazin n worth readin again n again n even enjoy readin d chemistry b/w not only d lead but othr couples too. Plz dnt stress n compramise ur sleep we realy appreciate ur work.

U r an amazing writer. It is equally interesting 2 read abt other pairs. Plus everybody cannot manage so many pairs like d way u do.

U have been very generous regarding updates. There have been times when u've updated even thrice a day while some of d writers take weeks 2 update.

We do appreciate d time and effort u put in this ff. If any of my comments have ever hurt u then I apologise.

Pls keep writing this ff d way u do as u know better than us.

Now that's what we call it a Perfect Treat (present) for the Anniv Gal right Tammie?....Loved it...simple yet passionate...innocent encounter between two souls who has crossed the path several times. One was trying hard to get the other's attention, but it didn't know the perfect time was scheduled for the perfect start. Infect a beautiful start.

I have to feel your tender touch;
I have to hear your voice;
No other one could take your place;
You're it; I have no choice.

I am loving this pair....everything about them seems so soft...just like the light pink shade of her outfit...😳

Ishq aisa karo ki dhadkan mein bas jaye...
Love in a way that it makes home in your heartbeats...

Saans bhi lo to khushbu usi ki aaye...
When you breath, her aroma should feel your sense...

Pyar ka nasha aankho pe chaye..
The love should be drugged in your eyes in such way..

Baat koi bhi ho par naam usi ka aaye.
Whatever the talk maybe, the name must be there.

PS:- I tried my best to translate and give the justice to the original words.

Devi! That was such a cute and sweet update :D I loved it <3

Originally posted by: saomom

Thank you! I'm guessing I've been married longer than you've been alive. <sigh>

No not really...may be I have been alive way more then you were married. No need to sigh..I'm sure you must have all sort of colours, flavours, seasons to cherish and grow more with the experience that your 28 yrs must given it to you and you can pass on to the generation behind you.

Originally posted by: sridevi27

Hello lovelies,

You know I adore you all and appreciate all your readership and comments, but please dears, there is nothing more disheartening than writing four pages for an update to post it only to have the comments ask for just another update without commenting on what was just posted or to ask to write about another couple when the story is really not there yet... Not meant as a criticism, but some of you are writers, so you know what I am talking about...

I can write about Shiv and Gauri's heart-to-heart tomorrow and wrap it up, but the story will probably end the day after then...

I apologize if I sound irate, but I did this update at 3:30 in the morning and... well, you can see where there is a tiny frustration factor...

-Devi

I never meant to be a trouble maker...but Allah knows why they call me trouble, a double trouble...I wonder? How about we start over again...Kit Kat chaley ga? Ya phir Twix? Woh bhi nahi? Then? Aaah I know Five Star..Dairy Milk...oooh C'com Maan bhi Jao..Gems should work...? Yes it will I know.😉

great update...only u have the knack to make all your couples lovable and make us crave for an update about each one 🤗 xxx