[Shiv-Gauri] The Oldest Story... - 3 (END -p. 134) - Page 102

You should be prohibited from posting such updates at this hour when we can read them in the office without having the amenity of a cold shower...

*SIGH*...I love Shiv! and I love you Devi!

P.S. - Just for clarification...my love for you is platonic :D

AHHH!!! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE THEM!

I'm not in the state to comment!
... I need to breathe..walk around and then come back...

Thanks for writing [and completing :P] the oldest story! You're a fab writer! I 'm glad I read the ending before anyone reports, or before you decide to remove it!
I'll miss this FF! ..

p.s: your 3 paragraph warning...😆

Devi- Was it a boy or was it a girl?

I'm glad I got to read it before you decide to take it down. That was a hot end to the hottest FF ever. I loved it. It's already 97 degrees outside, and now my ipod's about the blow up! I'm going to miss Shiv and Gauri's smart mouths. From "obtuse nimrod" to "oh, shiv."

Thank to so much for finishing the oldest story!

Your three paragraph warning... 😆. If you decide to take it down, please PM me a word version of it 😉. Just kidding! And Maryada- PG-13? Not for long, I hope.

Love yah, Devi.

P.S. You really should publish something, I would buy it 😊

It'll take few minutes and a couple of deep breaths to start my numbed brain.

Oh! Devi
I'm surprised my screen didn't blow off. SG can seriously set things on fire.

I wish GV would take some tips from SG. Cucumbers, chocolates and now nailpaints will never b d same for me.

finally finished.. my most fab fanfic.. I want to thank you from the bottom of my heart for writting this ff. luv you devi..

I can't say anything that can explain what I feel for for this FF, except that this is one place where I went through a myriad of emotions, from Love to anger to Jealousy...

You know I fell in love with your character Shashank (Too bad I don't get rightful dues from my favorite Shashank.), but Shiv and Gauri are right next to him. Its only quite wonderful and appropriate to pull the curtain with their passionate moments.

Its high time I acknowledge this...When it comes to writing sensuality, there is no one better than you out there. No offense to other writers, but I just like yours best. And it doesn't end there, for your writing style also unwraps layers of thoughts and persona of the characters in the story, in a way it leaves an imprint on the reader for a long time. Your talent needs to be showcased and I can only hope you are taking steps towards that.

Thank you for a great story Devi...And I wish to have many more Arabian nights of your story telling.

Hasini

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The warning was hilarious.

Haha I loved the warning and who would report you such an awesome update

I will miss this story, esp Shiv 😆