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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update.
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 11!!!
eeksssss.................☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
aww... my cute nups & carin mayu!!!😍😍😍😍
& d kiss...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
such an hawwt...update...
luvd it mulan!!
luv ya!🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

HELLO TO ALL MY LOVELY AND ADORABLE FRIENDS!!! THANKU SOOO MUCH FOR THE LOVELY COMENTS!!! 😳😳😳

KINZUU NO IT WASNT EDITED !! 😆😆😆

AMY AND AFSHA I AM SOOO SORRY FOR THESE SHORT PARTS BUT AM A LITTLE CAUGHT UP WITH COLLEGE HOMEWORKS!!😲😲😲 I WILL WRITE A LONGER UPDATE SOON!! 😃😃😃

HOPE U ALL LIKE IT!!!!! PLEASE DO COMENT!! YOUR COMENTS MEANS SOO MUCH!! 😊😊😊



PART 12

Samrat kept glancing at Gunjan who was sitting behind him and constantly smiling at the stupidity of Ria. Samrat had to admit he was getting irritated now. He realized how uselessly Ria kept on chatting. But then he was distracted by the smile playing on Gunjan's face. she was completely unaware of his glance. Samrat again felt that attraction between them and that was before Gunjan looked at him and their eyes met'

Didn't mean to get so caught up..
I can feel the attraction attracting me to ya...
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Gunjan felt a warmth engulf her body when their eyes met... there was something about him that baffled her nerves...his flirting nature disturbed her... unlike the other flirts this man effected her.. in just one day he had effected her more then any man ever could....

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Ria: " today was fun! Right Sam?"

Sam : " hmmm.."

Ria had not missed the glances Sam was passing Gunjan and she was extremely jealous of Gunjan.

Ria : " Gunjan you must have felt uncomfortable?"
Gunjan: (confused) " errmmm why ?"
Ria: " we all were couples there except you."

Pooh: " whats new in that? Isn't she always?"

Ria : ( laughing) "array han! this is true! You see Sam Gunjan is not girlfriend boyfriend type! Wo kya kehte hain , typical behanji ."

Ria and Pooh giggled while Gunjan face flushed. Sam felt anger rose inside him. He was shocked by the sudden urge he had to pull Gunjan closer and erase that embaressed look from her face. he wanted to console her by telling her she is unique... she is beautiful too.. and ... Soo innocent...

Sam: " I am happy to know still girls like you exist Gunjan. Your innocence is avery rare jewl nowadays."

Samrat was not at all philosopher type man but the urge to support Gunjan was too strong to ignore...

He passed her a reassuring smile which she returned even if hesitatingly. Their eyes again met and he realized her eyes were shining.. as if she was hiding tears...his blood rose into a jet.. he felt possessive about this innocent girl.. he wanted to hold her and tell her how special she was ...their gazes locked again....

Finally gravity pulled us closer....
I feel like somebody just knocked me over....
And i'm falling....
I'm falling so in love with you...
With you with you....

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Nupur woke up in the morning and felt her heart filled with joy. As she remembered the night events she blushed. It was as if she had dreamed..it was sooo beautiful...

She turned around to see Mayank lying beside her.. much more closer then he usually did.. again she was touched by the serene look on his face' unconsciously she leaned closer to him..

" it seems my wife like me the best when I am sleeping.."

Nupur went red while Mayank chuckled.

Nupur: " this is not fare'you always pretend you are sleeping '"

Mayank: " this is exactly my point' my wife can try looking at me while I am awake!" he scowled and looked so cute that Nupur couldn't help but laugh.

Taking advantage of her being offguard Mayank pulled her towards him'he hugged her and kissed her forehead while moving his hand through her tangled hair..

After the first shock of the contact Nupur felt herself relaxing in his arms' it felt so right to be there..enveloped in his strong arms' she felt as if she was at the place her heart wante dto be' closer to him' his fingers moving through her hair soothed her...

Mayank: " how are you feeling now princess?"

The endearment touchd the chords of her heart and she was again effected y the magnetic pull in his voice...she felt herself being pulled to him through an invisible string...


Your arms felt like a cradle...
And when you took my hand..
I was no longer able..

It never felt so right before..
I need to be with you much more..
I can't believe this kind of fate..


Is it love?...



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when a heart is captivated ..it will find a way that will lead to the perfect road.. road to love... road to eternal happiness.. road to fulfill fantasies...road to a happy ending..
Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow...the Mayank-Nupur scene was like 😍

I totally understand about your college and assignments and all...its okay...will wait for the long update😃😃

This was gorgeous....Mayank is leaving no chance to flirt with Nupur and she keeps getting more and more attracted...hehe😆😆 Its pretty cute😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwww..that was so lovely..loved sammy supporting gunjan.😳.and this ria and pooh😡

and MAYUR..OMG..that was so lovely, mayank and his taunts are amazing..my favorite is, "u can stare at me while i am awake", excellent..

cont. soon..well how abt the 150 questions of maths assignment?..😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Brilliant update. Mayur were so cute and adorable 😳😍
Waiting for the next part.
Thanks a lot for the pm 😊
Edited by Alisha-MJHT - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wao so beautiful part
I loved it
Thanks for Pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Aazing!!! this FF is getting interesting now!!!
cont soon
thnkx For The Pm sorry
cuddnt commengt big 😔
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awsome update
loved the part so much
loved the sajan seen so much
hate ria and pooja
but i loved how possasive samrat got for gunjan
and also loved cute and adoreble mayur seen
cont soon
love
tanzeel
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wonderful update....mulan...story line has came on amazing track,...waiting 4 ur next update..😊

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