ff carnival of love-(abhiya)(updated)

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FRNDS DIS MY FIRST FF😊

INTRODUCTION OF MAIN CHARACTERS

GEET HANDA

A VERY STRNG N YET A BUBBLY SAW MANY HARSHIPS IN LIFE N ALWAYS HOPES FOR A BR8 FUTURE.ONLY DAUGHTER OF A RICH PARENTS SHE IS TALL SLENDER N IN ONE WORD BEAUTI FUL

PIYA N MISHA

DIS TWO R DOBRIAL SISTERS N TTLY OPPOSITE FRM EACHOTHR

MISHA IS TALL N SLENDER N HAS APT FOR SPORTS WHEREAS PIYA IS SHORT PLUMP N VERY CUTE N QUITE

ABHAY N ARJUN

THEY R RAICHAND BROTHERS N BOTH R TALL HNDSM N SPORTY ABHAY HAS APT FOR MUSIC N ARJUN LOVES ADVENTURE

MAAN SINGH KHURANA

HE IS ONE OF A KIND BUT HELPFUL N GOO HEARTED N VERY ARROGANT N MOODY

OTHR CHARACTERS

DADI

MR N MRS DOBRIAL

MR N MRS RAICHAND

MR HANDA N MRS HANDA

PROLOUGE

THIS A SIMPLE STORY OF SIX PPL WHOS LIVES CHANGES TTLY IN AN INCIDENT THEY CM TO KNW EACHOTHR N THUS A FRESH LUVSTRY STRTS

(P.S-I COULDNT UPLOAD DA PICS OF CHARACTERS DUE TO SM PROB SO DO 4RGV ME FR DAT)

HOPE U GUYZ LIKE MY INTRO N PROLOUGE😊

CRITISISM COMPLIMENTS COMMENTS N SUGGESTION ALL R WELCM
THANK U 😊
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hi frnds was excited 4r da upd so here i go😊

GIRL'S MEET
The sun rose slowly without haste n as da maiden removed da current it slowly touched geet's butiful face she mumbled smthin maiden called 'geet ma'am uth jayiye' but geet said still eyes closed 'i love u 'maiden shocked n called loudly 'ma'am'geets eyes flew open n she sat up on da bed,she said'kya yaar itna aacha sapna dekh rahi thi woh mujhe kiss karne hi wala tha ki tu beej mai aake mujhe jaga diya'she yawned n said;itna chila kyun rahi thi?'maiden got shying n said woh kaun tha?geet said tujhe kyun batau n maiden ran away geet slfthot sapna mera tha sharam isse kyun aaya?n r eyes went str8 2 da watch it was 8 n geet suddenly remebred tday was her frst day in college she jumped out of da bed n went to da toilet.
she quickly got rdy n dashed dwnstairs mrs handa was setting da tbl 4r brkfst get said bye mom n mrs handa said wait whr do u think u r goin without hvin ur lunch geet said my mothr india aaj mera college main pehla din haiso hv to mk it fst she kissed her moms 4rhead n took 1 apple frm da tbl n went away.
it was really mess in dobrial house not actually in da house but in misha n piyas bedroom piya'mish do it fst we r alrdy 10 mins late'misha frm da bathrm said'tum kya ayinstin ya isaac newton ki behen ya woh tumhare koi ancestor rahe hongay jo tum hamashe time calculate karti ho?'piya got angry ok den i m goin u cm latr'misha hurridly came out of da bathroom n said'matey mujhse galti hogayi hai mujhe maaf kardo'piya said chalo thik maaf kiya nw lets leave they came dwnstrs n both took a glss of juice n fruit n said okay mom bye n dey went
mount college
geet entering babaji aaj mari raksha karna mujhe koi ragging na kare n there came out 3 witches of da college tasha, T n sasha came in frnt of geet n said toh time fr sm fun geet says xcuse me n is abrt to go she stps her tumne ragging ka naam toh suna hoga so tumhey bahut chota kaam deti hu.......
misha n piya entrs da college at da sm moment n T sees dem n slfthot da dobrial sis den asks geet go n kiss da tall grl cmin dis way she denies okay den sm othr thin.......geet says okay n advncs towards dem misha undrstnds n as geet comes n abt to kiss her says woho babes chill i knw da wicked witched ragged u see mai kaise maza chakha ti hu n goes to T n slaps her 3 witches shcked T says misha dobrial u slapped me hw dare u misha coolly said evry bdy does ragging to othrs but i did it to myslf n i told myslf to slap u so........3 witchs stomps n goes awy
all nucmers assembl in da hall n dey r gvin instruction abt rules of da college misha gets bored n says man dey r sooooooo boring geet agrees n piya says shhhh dnt talk dey will punish ull misha says look at her though we r fraternal twins we ttly opposite to echothr .
in da canteen da 3 nu frnds sit togethrthey talk abt each othr n den piya says i dnt knw college mai ek sit kahli thi n two ppl got admitted in 1 sit n hw dnt knw who da prsn is n strts weeping misha says hai bhaggu kis mitti se isse banaya pata hai geet yeh hamesha aapne saar ke upar tension ki talwaar latka kar ghumti hai aur hamesha ganga jamna baha ti hai kabhi kabhi toh lagta hai ganga or jaumna ka origin himlaya se nhi iske aankh se shuru hoti hai piya flares up says shut up n da two strt cat f8ing unaware dat de r under da spotl8 n evry1s eye is on dem but geet notices n tries to resolve der prob n says guyz evry1 is seein ull n misha realizes it too n says yaha koi daily soap chal raha hai kya jo tum log itne dhyan se dekh rahe ho?n instntly evry1 strts doin der on work
da ends butifully n da 3 go bck to der way home😊
precap-ntry of da dashing dudes maan abhay n arjun😉
comments criticism n suggestion all will be appreciated😊
thnk u
wid love
frm asmi😊
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index
chp 1-pg 1 chp 2 -pg 6
chp 3-pg 9 chp 4-pg 13
chp 5-pg 17 chp 6 - pg 22
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow man its 2 good.....
i m waiting 4 next 1......
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loved it yaar.... waiting to see the hero's entry ...
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wow yaar
the starting seemed nice
waiting for our hero's dashing entry
cont soon
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Loved it..... Awesome yaar hope maan is not vampaire in dis ff... Waise agar woh vampaire bhi hai to ki fark paenda hai.....lol....
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Its tooooooooooooo good nice
Wow wht a lovely part
Can't wait for next update plz update soon
Hero's r coming.........
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Really i can't wait for next update
Plz update soon
Its a very nice update
Love it
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nice do continue but plz distance deke likho mujhe problem hoti hai pane me thanku and u also read my ff on maneet pyar hojayega thanku
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awesome dear
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