FF (M&G):Close Yet So Far(2)-[Note Pg.142]

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 14 years ago

#421

😍😍lovely update😍loved it a lot😃

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Lovepreet Kaur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#422

loved itttttt

amazing

n ur poem was rlly gud

waiting fr nxt1

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siroilily

@siroilily

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Posted: 14 years ago

#423

Superbmindblowingfantastic update. O My God! maan is so romantic n geet is so lovely .

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ruchi

@macho_muffin

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#424

So sorry for not replying back before..didn't get a chance and I just wanted to update since everyone was waiting lol

haha I hate Arjun too thats why he is like Manisha lol...atleast less subtle way

Saree..hmm I never wore saree either..and I tried it once..almost fell down...idk how poeple can ever walk in it..its mad hard but they are so beautiful lol....

The poem was hard to write..Just for maan and Geet I came up with something 😆😆 I think that wil be my first and last poem but YAY!! I am glad tht my twin sister liked it lol...Nicknames I know they are bad but tht's what i could come up with..I should've messaged you bout it 😭😭 if you come up with some cool nicknames for them..I will put them in the story 😉😉😉

btw hows ur college going...ur classes???

I heard that it is goin to snow AGAIN!!! I can't shovel anymore hehehe 😆😆😆

With the last snow storm....NY streets were in pretty bad shape...I couldn't walk anywhere..with puddles and snow frozen on almost every street 😆😆

Good luck 😳

heyyy tia (mind if i add a di after that, well since ur older?😳)

oyeee are you kidding?....the nicknames were mad awesome and i lovedd them cuz they were soo youu😆....so no changing missy....if i can think of extra ones, i will let u know though😉....i think all my buddies have ruchi special nicknames cuz well, its just something i do to everyone lol....you are lucky u weren't a food cuz mostly, i give food ones hehe

ohh man don't ask....college is like ultra hell😡.....and another sem of orgo, i think i am gonna die *sob*....since u didn't see my previous comment, i think i asked what do you do? like major wise? i know ur out of college lol....but i have to know this about my twin naa😉

and i heart loved ur poem cuz it was simple and sweet....just the way i like it😳

omggg i know....i am loving the baarish of snow, except the falling every 2 seconds part and for shoveling, well that is my bro's job so idc much😆....aww u gotta do it?....then that must really suck lol....omggg same here, NJ is horrible....i don't even remember what it used to look like without snow cuz snow has been here since foreverr😆

aww thanks babes and good luck to you too, for ur future job (or whatever it is, considering someone hasn't told me yet what she does lol)😳

love ya twin!

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anupam

@shining_moon

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#425

this was fab yaar

the song was amazing heard it after so long

n the surprise was beautiful.......loved it

the nick names were quite funny😆😆😆

poor maan..........jealous of his designer bro😉

love to see him more jealous on lunch😉

keep writing

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ansah

@SahSah

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Posted: 14 years ago

#426

gawd that was awesome update as always....

maaneet are so adorable....really love emmmmm

and maan is sure darling....loved the surprise he

gave her....

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divareena

@divareena

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#427

Chapter 26

So sweet that geet left him a white flower. 😍Loved maan's bechani to find out where geet lives and how he cannot wait to go and meet her. Loool she punches him in the stomach and tells him off for taking 2 hours to find her.

Lool geet is enjoying maan's bechaanii. Love the way maan is pulling her into his arms. 😍😍😍

Lool maan telling security that geet is his wife and security believe him and not geet.

Ahem maan kissing geet is 😍😍☺️

Chapter 27

Aww he buys a saree for geet. it's a beautiful saree as well and love the song as well.😍😍😍

Their dance together was so romantic and their kisses.☺️☺️☺️ Aww he organised rose petals to fall down on geet, so romantic.

Good that geet finds mr kharoos more romantic. Wow love the hall maan has decorated to have dinner with geet.😍😍😍😍

Soo sweet the way they feed each other. Lool geet's nickname is jalebi and maan's is monkey. 🤣🤣

Lool maan's shock as she kisses arjun on the cheek. 🤣

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Kads

@Kadds02

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Posted: 14 years ago

#428

Awesome update!!
The song's 1 of my favs too!!! So... u knw my feedback!! :D

Looking forward to the lunch date hoping Arjun does'nt turn up...
Update sooonnnn!!!

-Kads

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Isha

@JilyPotter

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#429

That was amazing...i love both of your FFs Close yet so far and Lethal Attraction. And than i read A Walk to Remeber...you are amazing...i love you FFs you are a good writing...please add me to you PM...and i cant wait for both parts...continue soon

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#430

that was an awesome update..........such a romantic surprise from maan didnt expect it................eagerly waiting for the next update.................