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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gr8 part
thanx 4 pm
cont soon
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Thank you all for the comments.😊

Chapter 4

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Since the duties are over all accumulate for briefing in nurse station.All is busy discussing their own issues when suddenly the place goes silent when Dr.Mallik enters.
Dr.Mallik starts off with how the interns performed today.He displayed quite satisfaction considering their overall work today.He was happy by their work and appreciated them.
The next morning.It was briefing time where all got their 2nd set of duties.The duties followed up same , Dr.Riddhima was still assisting Dr.Mallik in a case.
After 5 hours or so , it was finally the time to take a break since it was recess.All the interns immediately rushed towards the canteen while Riddhima crossing Dr.Armaan's cabin eavesdropped conversation where the Nurse insisted Armaan to have his lunch since he didn't had breakfast also.
After eavesdropping the conversation, Riddhima decided to continue walking , when suddenly she changed her route and startled approaching Armaan's cabin.

She entered Armaan's cabin with a pack of lunchbox.She saw Armaan busy in files and thus to grasp his attention she started off to talk.
Riddhima : 'Kya karahe ho aap'.(trying to start convo)
Armaan who was continuously busy in files , now look up and answer.'Makkiyan maar raha ho,madad karogi?'(saying sarcastically).
Armaan : Arrey file paraha hoon , dekha nahin tumne.(now getting serious since he noticed Riddhima got offended).
Riddhima : Meine Dekha!!
Armaan : Tu phir?
Riddhima : Tu Phir????
Armaan : Haan , tu phir?
Riddhima : Nahin , tu phir?
Armaan : Arrey tu phir choron , aapko mujhse koi kaam tha?
Riddhima : Jee Haan!!
Armaan : Farmaiyaan!!
Riddhima : Jee woh..actually(blushing and getting shy)..woh actually..
Armaan : Sahi se batao , mein tumhe kha nahin jaonga.(armaan said humorously)
Riddhima : Aapka kya bharosa!!
Armaan after hearing this , goes back to his past.
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Armaan : Kya aap aana ka kasht karengi?

'Hmm..Nahin'..
Armaan : Kyun?
'Aapka kya bharosa'..
Armaan : Oyye Hoyye!!Sharmaegi..fikar math karo , mere saath Goa ajao , not as Fiance tu friend hi sahi.
'Hmm..Sochongi mein..Sochke..Kal parso bolongi'..
And she runs away while Armaan shouts to make her stop but she has gone too far away.

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Flashback over.
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Armaan getting back to his senses.He becomes more serious now.
Armaan : Dr.Gupta any issues?
Riddhima : Sir aap ne abhi tak lunch nahi ki aur breakfast bhi.
Armaan : Tumhe ye kisne bataya?
Riddhima:Wo mein yaha se guzar rahi thi tu meine aapki or nurse ki convo sun li.
Armaan : Dosron ke life mein interfere karna achi baat nahin hain.
Riddhima : Meine interfere kab kiya,,mein bus yeh keh rahi ho , aap kuch kha lijiye.Aap doctor hain and bajaye aap logon se advice kare ke waqt pe khaane khaaye , log aapko advice karahe hain.
Armaan : Mujhe kisi advice ki zaroorat nahin.(said while getting up from his chair).
Riddhima : Advice pooch ke kii nahin jaati.
Armaan who was stealing his eyes from him , looked at her now.
Riddhima : Khair mein aapse koi argument karne nahi aayi ho.Mere paas khaana hain , aap please ye khaa lijiye.
Armaan : Tum.
Riddhima doesn't leave Armaan to complete his sentence and speaks along.
Riddhima : I am not requesting my senior doctor , instead I am ordering my patient.
Armaan : Okay!!
Armaan agrees and starts to take his lunch.
Armaan : Hmm..Meal without a soft drink is impossible.
Riddhima : Haila!!We are so same to same.Even I like meals with soft drink.Wait let me bring Pepsi.
She gets up to take Pepsi while the Pepsi bymistakely falls on Armaan's shirt.
Armaan immediately gets up.
Armaan : OMG!!Crap , what am I gonna do now?
Riddhima : Am sorry..sorry..Sorry Sir..I am seriously sorry sir.
Armaan : Chup ek dam chup.(said he getting very infuriate).
Armaan immediately approaches towards the washroom to clean his shirt.
Riddhima : I am extremely sorry Sir.(said she getting frightened and anxious.)
While Armaan starts approaching , he slips on banana piece which makes all the files to fall down and the ink from ink bottle to spread all along the cabin's carpet.
Riddhima : OMG!!Dr.Armaan aap theek tu hain.
She gives her hand to Armaan so that he can get up but rather him getting up , she is pulled by him which causes her to land on the floor below Armaan.
Armaan while staring at her again remembers few moments from his past.
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'Help me Armaan , I am falling.'
Armaan saves her from falling down but both end up falling down because of banana piece.And there he all stares at her beauty.
'I am sorry Armaan.Meri wajah se tum bhi girh gaye'.
Armaan : Ah!!Koi baat nahin , tumhaari liye mein kuch bhi karsakta ho.
'Mein bhi tumhaari liye kuch bhi karsakti ho'.
Armaan : Acha!!Jaan bhi desakti ho?
'Haan'.
_________

Armaan comes back to the present and gets up and immediately moves from there.He is angry plus upset.And Riddhima , poor she is worried and anxious as how Armaan will react since because of her such big havoc has been created.


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Apologize for gramatical mistakes since I haven't read it yet.😊
Press like button and Do Comment.😊
Edited by Princezz22 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
Hey,.. AWESOME FF!
really loved it.
plz add me to your pm list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Fabulous update sweetie 👍🏼
Loved reading it....beautiful 😃
Keep it up!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
hiiiiii
awesome update
loved it
loved AR
ridzy is a pro at disaters
poor armaan
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
MAAAAAAAAAAAAAHIII HEYYYY so heres myy comment😳
okay so i loved this part
Firstly i liked how ridhimma is so caring for armaan...he dint ate anything and she brought food for him..awww this was so cute
And I liked the convo part where armaan says sarcastically mein makhiyan maar raha tha😆
I always like the dialogue parts of ur FFs..u know when to make it funny and when srs
I loved especially the part where they r like 'tu phir' 'tu phir' 😳 this was awesome
And it was sad to read Armaan's flashback part
wonder who's that girl and what happened between armaan and her
In the end where ridhimma spills pepsi over him and drops ink...
whao she creates sucha disaster hehe...but i liked when she falls over him..
Loved that AR eyelock part😳
Once again this part was very well writtten
Loved it to bits
Continue soon
Muahhhh
Edited by CoolAquarius - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: CoolAquarius

MAAAAAAAAAAAAAHIII HEYYYY so heres myy comment😳
okay so i loved this part
Firstly i liked how ridhimma is so caring for armaan...he dint ate anything and she brought food for him..awww this was so cute
And I liked the convo part where armaan says sarcastically mein makhiyan maar raha tha😆
I always like the dialogue parts of ur FFs..u know when to make it funny and when srs
I loved especially the part where they r like 'tu phir' 'tu phir' 😳 this was awesome
And it was sad to read Armaan's flashback part
wonder who's that girl and what happened between armaan and her
In the end where ridhimma spills pepsi over him and drops ink...
whao she creates sucha disaster hehe...but i liked when she falls over him..
Loved that AR eyelock part😳
Once again this part was very well writtten
Loved it to bits
Continue soon
Muahhhh



Gosh , How much I wait for your comment that you ended up telling mee 'Meri maa comment kardongi'.🤣🤣
Okay I liked your comment alot and its best among all.😛
'Tu Phir' 'Tu Phir' part was just simple dialogues , never thought you'll like them so much.
@Black : That's such a big compliment for me.😳Thanks Sis!!😛I am glad you like my writing.😳😃
Ah!!Him and that girl is a big secret which would be revealed very late.😊
Zindagi bhar wait karna for the truth.🤣🤣

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey princezz
amzing ff. plz accept ma buddy request and do pm wen u update nxt
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Originally posted by: -Aahana-

Hey,.. AWESOME FF!

really loved it.
plz add me to your pm list.



Thanks and added you to the pm list.😊
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Originally posted by: -Sabz-

Fabulous update sweetie 👍🏼
Loved reading it....beautiful 😃
Keep it up!!!



Thanks so much Sis.Although you dun like AR but you are reading for me.😳😆

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