''The Mysterious Past' AR FF(Chapter 17 - Page 51) - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51


Originally posted by: Riddss

heyyy dear,
nice part
continue soon




love
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Originally posted by: sammy4u

great update dear

loved it



Thanks all of you for commenting.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: ARMAANKSGFAN

hiiiiii

awesome update
loved it
loved AR
ridzy is a pro at disaters
poor armaan
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm





Originally posted by: sana.shanak

Its awesome...keep writing dear



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Posted: 14 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: pixie_n

hey princezz
amzing ff. plz accept ma buddy request and do pm wen u update nxt



Hey so sorry for adding you lately in my buddy list.
But added you now in friends list.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Princezz22



Hey so sorry for adding you lately in my buddy list.
But added you now in friends list.😊


yeah i ws thinking on d same lines ki y r u nt adding me since months.2day i came through ur ff so asked u. its k dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: pixie_n


yeah i ws thinking on d same lines ki y r u nt adding me since months.2day i came through ur ff so asked u. its k dear


I have got many friend requests since months and some of them I didn't know so didn't add them , mostly were newbies , I never noticed you username also.😆
Anyways thanks for informing me and I have added you now in friends list.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
woww...hey hun..i just read ur ff...n really liked the concept n the happenings in it..:)
plzz plzz add me to ur PM list n cont soon..:)
luking forward to see AR's relationship growing in which direction....lol
tc ;)
Preet <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
woww mahii i lovee urr ff its realli gd
cnt wait 4 more
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

Chapter 5

'Great!!',Yelled Armaan.
'I am extremely sorry Dr.Mallik',Said Riddhima.
'Quiet.Please Keep Quiet',Said Armaan fuming with anger.
Armaan rushes to the washroom to clean his shirt but Riddhima stops him.
Riddhima : I think you don't have spare shirt , but its okay , I live near the hospital only , you can come there and I can clean your shirt and give it to you.
Armaan : Acha!!Ghalti bhi karti ho or phir ghalti ko sudhaar thi bhi ho.
Riddhima : Aap jo samjhe!!Par ab aap please ayein mere saath , I'll clean your shirt.
Armaan : Mein nahin aonga!!(being stubborn)
Riddhima : Please!!
Armaan : Nahin Aonga!!
Riddhima : Please!!
Armaan : Nahi bhola na , ek baat samajh mein nahi aati!!
Riddhima : Please!!
Armaan : Maaf karo mujhe(saying sarcastically and getting irritated.)
Riddhima : Please!!
Armaan : Suno!!(before he cud finish she spoke)
Riddhima : Please!!
Armaan was stunned to see the stubbornness of Riddhima and yet he agreed.
Armaan : Chalo!!

Since Riddhima's house was near , they went by walk.Riddhima stopped in a shop.
Armaan : Kya??(asking where u going)
Riddhima : Kya Kya??
Armaan : Kya?
Riddhima : Hayye Rabba!!Kuch Nahin.Mein abhi aayi.
Armaan : Kyun jarahi ho?Mein bhi saath chalonga.
Riddhima : Arrey aap kyun jaoge?
Armaan : Kyun is shop pe meri entry aana band hain?
Riddhima : Kuch aisa hi samajh lijiye.
Armaan : Oh Acha!!Aur jaise is shop pe tumhara naam likha hain.(saying sarcastically)
Riddhima : Jee Bilkul , is shop pe mera naam likha hain.
Armaan : Chale??(and he enters first)
Riddhima : Arrey arrey!!(shouting at him to stop and she also enters then.)

Armaan hides the stain by wearing his coat.
Riddhima buys sees a black colour T-Shirt.
Armaan : Kis ke liye le rahi ho?
Riddhima : Apne boy friend ke liye.
Armaan : Kya??(getting shocked)
Riddhima : Kya Kya??
Armaan: Kuch Nahin.(getting disappointed)
Armaan immediately goes to another section and starts to buy a necklace.
Riddhima approaches there and asks him 'Kis ke liye ye aap le rahe ho'?
Armaan : Apni girl friend ke liye.
Riddhima : Kya?Aapki girlfriend bhi hain?(getting shocked)
Armaan : Kyun meri girl friend kyun nahin hosakti? I am 26 years old , budha nahi ho mein.
Riddhima : Nahin age ki baat nahi hain , aapki mood ki baat hain.Ahem Hitler Armaan Akad Mallik.
After hearing this he goes in Flashback.

'Aunty dikhaye na ye Armaan kya karaha hain'.
Armaan : Haan na mumma dikhayi na ye mera pyaara Armaan kya karaha hain?(teasing her)
'Armaan!!',Shouting at him.
'Sweetheart',Shouting back.
And she blushes and looks down.
Armaan : Oyye Hoyye phirse Sharma gayi.
And she blushes more.
When suddenly Armaan's mom comes.
Aunty : Arrey Armaan kyun tang karaha hain meri beti ko?(getting angry)
Armaan : Beti nahi bahu.
Aunty : Beti hain ye meri.
Armaan : Acha bhai!!Tu phir apni beti se pochiye usske kis type ka larka pasand hain.
Aunty : Hmm..Batao Beta.
'Mujhe bindaas larka pasand hain jo kabhi zindagi mein Hitler na bane , kabhi ghussa na kare , akdu na ho , sarhu na ho.But sweet sa cute sa adorable sa charming sa larka jo care-free ho aur hamesha hasta ho.
Aunty : Phir tut u barhi khush kismat hain.Armaan tu bilkul aisa hi hain.Serious situation mein bhi ye pagal khush rehta hain , kabhi akdu ya Hitler nahin banega.

A disappointment expression was reflected from his face after he remembered all this.
Armaan : Hmm..tum kabhi nahi samjhogi.(saying in a mysterious and disappointing way and goes.)
Riddhima : Samajhti ho isliye tu ye sab karahi ho.(said in a soft and sad tone.)

They reach Riddhima's house.She opens the door and invites Armaan to come in.
He comes in.
'Suniye , aap shower li lejiye tab tak mein aapka shirt do deti ho aur iron bhi karlongi',said Riddhima.
'Okay!!'Replied Armaan.

Armaan goes in for a shower and Riddhima on the other hand starts cleaning his shirt , although she does all this clothes in Machine but Machine takes long time so thus , she washes the shirt herself and put it in balcony to dry the shirt.
She provides Armaan with the black shirt she had bought in the shop today.

When Armaan actually sees it , he gets shocked and surprised since he never thought Riddhima will buy shirt for him.He seriously thought she is buying for her boy friend.

He wears the shirt and comes outside.
Armaan : Tumne ye shirt mere liye!!
Before he finishes she speaks.
Riddhima : Haan!!
Armaan : Kyun?
Riddhima : Kyun ka kya jawab hota hain?
Armaan : Hota hain na har sawal ka jawab hota hain.
Riddhima : Magar mere sawal ka aapke paas koi jawab nahin.
Armaan : Kya sawal?
Riddhima : Aapse behtar wo koi nahin jaanta.Mein bhi nahin.
Armaan just stares and says nothing because he really cannot utter a single word about that matter.For him it's a deep hidden secret whom he doesn't wants to share with anyone.
Riddhima : Coffee?(Offering him cup of coffee which makes him come to real world from his wild imagination).
He goes in flashback.
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'Coffee piyoge?',Asked he.
'Nahin , tumhara kya bharosa , zeher hi na daal do tum us mein.(teasing him)
Armaan : Tum kya sochti ho , ke mein tumhe maar sakta ho?
'Kyun nahin!!Armaan Mallik kuch bhi karsakta hain'.

After flashback when he comes back to reality he refuses to drink the coffee.
'Meine coffee peena chordi hain',Said Armaan.
Riddhima : Theek Hain!!Mein chaye bana deti ho.
And she starts going while Armaan stops her.
Armaan : Nahin its okay.Bus paani chalega.
Riddhima : Alright!!
She brings and gives him water.
Armaan : Chalo mein chalta ho.Tum yaha hi raho , kal aaja na.
Riddhima : Theek hain , Bye Sir.
Armaan : Bye.

Armaan leaves.
Riddhima with her cup of coffee approaches towards the window and starts thinking about Armaan.
'Mujhe kya hogaya hain.(getting confused and questioning herself).
I have met this person yesterday and I have got so attached to him that I have invited him to my house also.Bought a shirt for him , washed his cothes , made coffee for him and when he refused I didn't mind either.
Something special is there in him that I have built my trust upon him so easily.He is really not same how he appears from outside.He is very mysterious.It seems time has changed him a lot , he might have experienced something very bad but what?I do not know.But I want to know , but he is not willing to tell me or anyone anything.
I am sure he is not like other guys who only knows how to disrespect and mock others but he is a person who respects his elders and loves his younger one's , although he appears strict but he has a kind heart , a golden heart.'
'Wait hold on.(Realising something).Why am I thinking about him?He is just my senior doctor and a stranger.I instead of thinking about his personal life should concentrate on my internship.I think I should leave to Hospital.'


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Do read and comment.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
hey dear
awesome part
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ohhh i wnt to knw armaan's past
continue soon


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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
Nice, Mahi! I had to catch up from part 3. I really like how the story is progressing. Armaan is so different from what he was in the show. He's not funloving and jovial at all. Rather, he's quite sadu and akdu. Maybe because of what happened in the past? Why do I feel that that girl will be Shilpa? Wonder what happened to her.

P.S. Proof reading means reading to check for errors.

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