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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update..
so maan is helping her learn...
waiting for the next
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
cont soon
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awesome ... superb ...

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Rajji chalo deer ho rahi hay aur pata hay kal muje kahi jaana hayh

Lekin didi kal……………………………

But seeing geet face she understands

Ok didi jaisa aap kaheen………………………………

Next day morning

Dadimaa observed thatboth girls are sad.

And they went somewhere……………………..

Just then.rajji came along with a packet in her hand.

As maan and geet left morning……………………

Dadimaa saw the packet…………..

Kya baa thay beta tum dono parishaan hoo.

Kuch baat hay kya.

Jee aaj…………………maa aur bauji ke barsi………..hay

Kal didi se poochne ke koshish ke muje laga didi kaam ke chakkar mein bhool gayee

Lekin didi ko yaad tha

Isliye muje mandir beja thi…………taaki mein unkaa prahsaad collect karoo………………………………………………

Aur muje boora lag raha hay.ke didi itne important din ko bhoolgayee……………………………………………………

Lekin who hi bolti hay ke

Kaam sab se jyada upar hona chaheyee…………………………………………………

Aur kaam may bhi bagwaan hota hay……………………..

Isliye thoda upset hoo…

Dadi surprised at this girl…………………………………

It is her sanskaar…………………………

On the other hand.

Maan is busy in staring session…………………………………………………

Just then inner voice

Oye gadee…

He looked round to find a distant image of him..little bit causal dress.looking at him.

What are u doing

And who are u

Im u………..idoit

Maan………………

Maan was me………….

No….it sme…………..

Whya r estaring .;and u didn't do much after that

What do u mean maan hurted.

Oyee oyee………..kya plan kiya tha…………….geet se baat karegaa…

Yaa sadoo shakal banake…………use dekhtee…………………..rahegaa

Maan 1 was angry

And maan2.and haa.tumara gussa ego apne pass rakha.mera saath nahii……………

Ab jaldi kuch karoo.warna muje kuch karna padegaa

Kya karegaa tu.

Kya karunga.with in a minute he start tickling.and the car start going different directions and stopped at once;.

Where maan is breathing heavily

Which brought geet to open her eyes

As she woke up early.she cannot sleep.;as it is thesad day happened where she lost everything…………on thisday she did not want to comeout but she always respects her work……..and maan sir words hetrusts her

She did not want to break the trust so.she came along she knows rajji mood also off……………………………………

So……………………..she is busy in thoughts not realized when she drozed into sleep…..

Not knowing the double role of maan J

With him and himself…………………………………………..

And the car stopped with panting maan,

Sir all u alright………………………………………………

Helooked a t her

First she is the one for all these……….

Yes……………..

And now her cute and innocent face asking are u alright

How .can i…………………………….

Sir…………………….

Maan sir…..

Geet asking repeatedly

I think there is a probl with thecar…

He openthe door to come out other wise he is going to get mad………………………….

He smiled.

And it is not a dejected place.

And there is a dhaba.

He remembered that nether of them had breakfast.ofcourse of his stupid plan.

Geeet lets us go there and eat.

Sir here.

She pointed the place.

She knows him.

Haa geeet mein yeha why what is the problem.

Sir this is dhaba…and the food is completely unhygienic.

And u…….here

She is completely confused.

Sir…………………………………

Maan is lookingat her

First time.she is opening up///////////she is talking more of a work……………

He smiled.

Good work maan step 1………..

He just looked at the dhaba……yes it is truly not his style………nor the ambience

But now his beautiful dream with him,,,,,,,,,,,,so he need to do this.

Why geet we are human beingsf .and whyu do u think I can't t enjoy food ehre……………………..

Let us go.my stomach is grumbling.

Geet is shocked……………………..

He sat at the bench.

It is too small..where about to fall.

Geet is verge of smiling but controlling hers elf

Where all ar elooking at them,,,,,,,,,,,,,the person in the suit…………………

Then next question geet stomach churned to laughter

Did I get mineral water here…………..

Maan asked innocently……………………

Precap: more of dhaba………………………………………..

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb ... awesome ...

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Geet smiled…………………………..

Seeing the face of the owner

As he is in shock.to see the person who is outside the world…………………….

Sir…………………………………..

Mineral water

Geet wishpered sir yeha par who sab nahii miltha

Napkins…………………..

She wondered

Cannot able to control her laughter she laugh louder

Maan again lost in her smile

Just then maan 2

Oyee…………….

Too joker kab se bangayaa.

Joker…he looked at ………………………………..him…………..

Ab normal insaan nke tarah behave kar nayeee prince ke tarah……………………………….

He smiled.

And before he asked some stupid questions

Geet ordered some food

Maan lookeda t the food as he is seeing some alien

But he need to be normal……………….

The food is nice……………………..

But it is spicy and he cannot stand spicy

He started to cough.geet got frightened.and suddenly she came before and made him drink lassi.

She caught hand in this process

He looked a t her

The second maan is doing dance…….

He is surprised…………..

After some time.sir are u ok she asked confused…………………………………….

He pay the bill……………………………

They left the place………………

It is the best dine after so many days

They reached the site and worked for long time……………………………………….

After some time ……………………………

Geet drossed into sleep

And maan stared a the sleeping beauty

Geet u look beautiful when u laugh

I want ur smile always onur lips

Sorry I hurt u …..but I promise…………….

I always make u happy.

They reached the hotel…………………………………….

He enter the room.

Geet enter the room.

She is waiting for long time.

His room is adjacent to the other side

Did he have his dinner inorder to……check………….

She enter the room.

But his room is locked…..

May be he gone out.

Even she didn't order food………..

At the night geet woke up

She checked for other room,but it is locked

He didn't came where he is

He is at bar.

She came to the reception……….

And she called to his number

After some rings he picked up…………………..

Hello sir

Hello

He is completely drunk

Sir……………..maan sir

Yeh babaji h e is drunk

And after some time she find out…………………………him.

He is totally drunk………………

She caught himh\

He is fumbling

She made him to lie on the bed…………………..

Akhir tum apne aukaa t mein agayee.naa tum……….

Geet looked a thim shock.

Tum bhi unnladikyon ke tarah hoo…………………….joo apne masoom aur.bolee chehre leke………………………..

Mujko bala pushurakar…………mere daulat hadap ke bagna chahtaa hoo……………………….bolo………………………………………

Tum jaise masoom ladki……………………….ke natak karke ……………………………………..

She cannot.take his words………………………………………………..

……………she ran away to her room………………………………………..

Next day morning……………..

He open eyes………………

His head is heavy…………………………………..

Just then bell rang………………………

He open the door.to find waiter with lemon juice in the tray

Along with a note

He open the note

Sir………………….i need to go im leaving……………………………………

Geet………………………………….

He took the juice

He went to shower

Close his eyes

At the afternoon after meeting

He is very happy he thought of spending some time…………………….with geet

He enter the room.to find a envelope

He open to find th e shock.

As geet Is talking to someone……………………………..is the person from competitor company…………………

And handover a envelope.

He want to ask geet for explination………………..

Just then he saw her…..she is the same.how can he forgot her.

Once again.

He called geet number bu t it is switched off……………………………..

Then a person came…..with letter

The letter………….

He read it and throw on the dust bin.

And he move towards bar.

And start drinking

On the other hand geet didn't know what happened……………………….

She cried.a lot.and decided that she should be strong and be independent………….

For her and also rajji………………

Next day morning.

Maan enter office in a foul mood…………………..

He called someone.

And adi enter………….in the office

He know there is something going on the office………………….

He saw geet sad face.

After few days

Adi discovered some weird behavior in sasha .

She is happyh.lll

And talking on someone s phone…………………

So he decided to keep a eye on her..

Next part

But geet is same

She decided to notn tom come infron t of maan.

And maan also start avoiding her

He donot want to disturb dadimaa.

But dadimaa found some fishing…..

Geet want to find the truth.

So she told adi about his behavior…………………………………….

So adi and geet decided of the plan…………………….

Part 2

Geet in office

geet is working on something

She is not smiling……..

Just then….adi enter………………………………………

And she bumped with sasha……………..

Sasha dropped the phone.

Where no one noticed that pinky……………………took her mobile

And handover to adi………………..

He took it and after some time

Alarm alerted……………..

As maan came back from his tour .

He attending some work in Mumbai

Want to avoid geet completely…………………

He enter the office he lookeda the binds and didn't found her

He knows she is avoiding ……………

His heart saying tobelive geet

But his mind……..says to not to believe her……………………………………..

He is working on something…………

Suddenly……………………..he got a voice mail.

He open to find some voices

He fumed in a nger

Along with some photographs.

The telephone conversation……

Yes you will get the money…………………………..

U had helped us to get the contract…………………………………………

And ur the one who had took money from us…………………………

And how did the great .msk fooled by u………………………

Don'tm worry he will never doubt me.i had shifted all the blame on a stupid girl working in our office

She is so stupid……………….and his past………..

I know that is a why this emotional plan…………………………..

Ok listen…….don't act oversmart

And the photos u exchanged urs with that girl.

And the letter…………

Ur genius.

I know

Ok…………………..

With that the phone hanged……

That means geet is innocent.

And I bashed geet.

Oh no one more mistake

His heart won

But once again.

He felt bad.

On the other hand……………..

Geet ison phone………..

Sir……………..please I need this job…

Please………………..

As soon as he saw maan…………………she cut the phone.

Next day…

Vickys and anees birthday….

NT came down to find rajji and anee are helping…………………………for nthe preparations……………………………………………

Geet came.

NT looked a t her.

And she said

Anee u should not trust stranger s……….why are u treating them as part of family………………….

They are working for us.

So better they should know their limits.

Geet looked down

Where rajji is about to speak.geet looked………………….her.

She knows there is something inher eyes……………………….

She remembered dadimaa words

Beta…please…………for my sake please stay for some more time………….

U can go after Vicky 's and anee birthday………………………….

Dadimaa.mein apke liye kuch bhi karsakthe hoo.lekin dadimaa.mein yeh kabi bardaasth nahii karsakthi ke koi mere charcter par ungli iutayee…………………………………….

Is liye………………………………………

Mein nahii chahtee hoo.rajii ko mere wajah se koi dukh hoo…………………

Isliyee……………………………….

Teek hay beta………..

She also told rajji also……………………………..

She knows her didi had hurt…………………………..and pain in her eyes………………

But she did not want to ask questions.

Just then pinky came……………..

Ok…………………geet.howis ur new flat………..

It is nice………and residential place.

I hope we didn't have any problem……………

And geet what about ur new job………..

Im searching.in few days Im going to get………………………….new one…………………………………

Geet………………..

Why are u leaving……………………….

She cannot answer the questions

Why babaji everytime u always test me pinky

First my parent s leave me and rajji in this world…………………………………….there after brij bhai aur malini…………………………bhabi…..ke torture………..aur uske baad who rudraksh.badi mushkil ne kudh ko samala me ne.aur ab.

She cried a lot…………………………

But later on she consoled……………………………

On the other hand maan is feeling………….so bad…………………………………

He again broke the trust………………………………..

At the evening…………………………………………………

He came home it is vickyu and anees birthday………………………………………………

Rajji also maintained a distance between……..vicky anda nee

Which is irking vikcy…………………………………

On the other hand dadima is sad…………………………………

She knows geet was hurt badly…………………….

Once again maan hurted her………………………………………………

Maan reached the mansion to find the party in thehouse…………………………………………

The party is full on.

But geet is in her room

She is wearing some dress.

She knows she need to leave this house tommorrow………………….

Yeh Hosla Kaise Juke,

Yeh Aarzoo Kaise Ruke - 2

Manzil Muskil to kya,

Bundla Sahil to kya,

Tanha Ye Dil to Kya

Ho Hooo

Raah Pe Kante Bikhre agar,

Uspe to phir bhi chalna hi hai,

Saam Chhupale Suraj magar,

Raat ko ek din Dhalana hi hai,

Rut ye tal jayegi,

Himmat rang layegi,

Subha phir aayegi

Hooo

Yeh Hosla Kaise Juke,

Yeh Aarzoo Kaise Ruke - 2

Hogi hame to rehmat ada,

Dhup kategi saaye tale,

Apni khuda se hai ye Dua,

Manzil lagale humko gale

Zurrat so baar rahe,

Uncha Ikraar rahe,

Zinda har pyar rahe

Hooo

Yeh Hosla Kaise Juke,

Yeh Aarzoo Kaise Ruke - 2

She held her breath

As it is new beginning………………………………………………………..

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
great part...
will maan let geet leave?...i don't think so
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part dear
and really sorry for late comment
I hope Maan will stop Geet from leaving the house and job both

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