~Beautiful Sin~SidShi FF: Chapter 30//Pg 108

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-Harshu-

@-Harshu-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#171

Sidra

Awesome update !!!

how can dat Hormaan do dis wid Shilpa ??
I hate him soooooooo much 😡😡😡

Really felt bad 4 Shilpa
Bcoz of dat Hormaan she lost all her faith in Love😡😡

Loved d way ur showing Sid & Shilpa's relationship..

Plzz continue soon....

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Sudha

@ssdtvgojan

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#172

WOW Sidra,👏👏👏 U r awesome with expressing the feelings of Shilpa & Sid.

This update makes me to hate Armaan more and that lusty couple more...................What they have done to Sid & Shilpa😭😭😭...........They can't even move ahead in their lives & believe in life/Love again😡😡😡😡.

Vivek.............Without knowing him, i started to feel for him..........Pls one sid is enough and not one more.

These lines........................I can feel the feelings............Awesome Sidra⭐️

, "Happiness scares me Shilpa. I try to stay far away from it as much as I can."
"And that is why I want you to be far away from anything that upsets you. I need you to be smiling always....so that I can live my happiness through you."

Keep going👍🏼

Edited by ssdtvgojan - 14 years ago

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jacobharry10011

@jacobharry10011

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#173

Awesome Update.........I cant u how much i hate Armaan😡

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nm21

@nm21

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#174

*Applause*.

You write beautifully....that you knew already, but I want to tell you-your writing actually moves me. Its weird, I completely understand Shilpa...and that's only cause of the way you write.

Her insecurities and hestitation with regards to her relationship with Vivek are relateable...because of what happened to her. When you love someone with your whole heart and they disappoint, rather betray your trust and confidence in them, it has a huge detrimental effect on your personality and maybe even your looks as you feel indifferent to caring for yourself (which is wrong!!) but very human and that came across in your writing...

I feel so bad for her! Bless Shilpa but well done to you, this is an awesome chapter my dear, short but sweet-again, it takes alot to write something which can touch so many hearts so will read it again and again :) as per usual...but definitely eagerly!! awaiting your next piece....

You just keep raising the bar for yourself as well as everyone else! :P lots of love and a big jhappi! You star! Hats off :) xxxx

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malvika

@monty22

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#175

Sidra 🤗

awesome update.

i can feel shilpa & sid's pain........😭

i hate them a lot😡....they never deserve my angels sid shi..........

what they have done to my angels.......Sid shi both r scared of happiness to believe some one again.........😭

for vivek i hope he will be nice guy ....no more heart breaks for any one....😳

update soon.

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Vidya

@vidyashree

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#176

Awesome update i loved it 👏 i fel pity 4 shilpa she hs so much pain inside her 4 wat armaan hs done to her 😡 loved wat sid hd told her abt happiness tat if she is smiling at givers him happiness awww tat ws cute 😳 plz continue soon

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Veena

@-veena.shona-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#177

heyyyyyyy
tht was really a short update 😡
nxt tym longer update, ok
i jst hope u dnt end up making Shilpa marry Vivek 😈
hope she finds her soulmate in Siddy Boy ☺️
plss cont soon
Veena

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Ameres

@Ameres

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#178

Sidra FAB updates! 👏

Just catched up on all the previous ones. And i love the way story is unfolding. Six years and still so much pain and anger in Sid. And Shilpa too is still dealing with all the hurt. And she is engaged! wow. Poor girl about to open a new chapter in life but still stuck in past. That really hurts. Really wanna know how it will proceed from here! Continue sooon! And thanks for the pms. :)

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Lennie

@Lennie

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#179

Another great chapter, telling us about Shilpa's hurt and how it has sacred her, is she not capable of loving or being worthy, you never forget when someone sees you as worthless it leaves a scar

In chapter told me, that SidShi need each other, they are each other's destination, only together i can see them being happy and living through each other etc

I wish one day Shilpa opens up to Sid about her pain and why

I totally get what Sid means when he says he is scared of happiness - happiness is not for him in a way, but he will live through others happiness, for him other people's happiness is important and attaining that etc