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Posted: 14 years ago
sorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry .....i my toooooooooo late
but ths mayank is very cool...im liking it
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Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

sorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry .....i my toooooooooo late

but ths mayank is very cool...im liking it
update soon



it's okay fiza.........thnx dear😛
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thnx for ur appreciation guys.......🤗........actually today I have no assignment to do( i think my teacher forgot to give that.......thanx to God....God plz make it frequently😆😆) so I decide to update my next part. Last time all of u complained that I was quite late. So this time I do it early. Here is Chapter Three. I hope u'll like it like previous chapters nd plz forgive me for my mistakes





Chapter Three

It was the result day in Nupur's College. Everyone was quite nervous but Nupur was so relaxed as usual. Finally the result came. Nupur got good marks. Rahul was also got quite good marks. So those two friends decided to celebrate and for them celebration means'' ICE CREAM. They went their favorite ice cream parlor. Nupur ordered chocolate ice cream and Rahul ordered strawberry.

Nupur: mein ne kaha than a tu pass ho jayega. Tu yu hi tension leta hey.

Rahul: hm'..he couldn't talk properly because his mouth was full with ice cream.

Nupur: agle bar tension nehi karega.

Rahul: hm'..

Nupur: kya hm hm kar raha hey'..kuch kehta kyun nehi?

Rahul: tu yaha baat karne ayi hey ya ice cream khane?

Nupur: of course ice cream khane'..par kisne kaha ki jab ice cream khate hey to baat nehi kar sakte'

Rahul: ek mahan insan ne kaha''

Nupur: aur who mahan insane kaun ney?

Rahul: uska nam hey'.Rahul'.

Nupur: tu aur mahan''..assa joke tha'.ab bate kam kar aur ice cream kha

Rahul: mein toh kha hi raha tha'o tu hey jo baat kar rahi thi''

After that they became busy with their ice cream. They finished their ice cream with lots of fan. Now this was the time to pay the bill.

Nupur: Rahul'..this is your time to pay the bill

Rahul: no'it's your turn

Nupur: no'last time I paid when we went for pani puri

Rahul: no'..I paid for that'.(at this time Rahul brought out a diary from his bag) look last time I paid coz you spent your all pocket money for buying CDs'.look there is your signature

Nupur: oh'..so this is my turn'

Rahul: yup'

This became a regular argument when they went for some refreshment that who paid the bill and both of them tried not to pay that. So Rahul decided to maintain a diary so that they could avoid this argument.

After that celebration Rahul dropped Nupur at her home. He didn't go to her home today because he had some important task to do. Nupur entered her home. But today something was missing. Her mom didn't welcome her with her usual warm smile. Even she didn't ask her about her result. Nupur thought that may be something disturbed. So she decided to keep quite. She never asked her parents about the disturbance herself. This didn't mean that she didn't care about that. She cared but she believed that her parents were strong enough to face any problem. If they didn't want it to share with her then she never forced them until they told it willingly. This time she did the same.

Nupur went her room and started to read a book. Nupur loved to read books. At the evening her father came and as usual Nupur welcomed him with a warm hug but there was also something wrong on her father's face. At dinner time they finished their dinner quietly. After dinner Nupur went her father for her chocolate. As usual she stretched her hand but her father lost in thought. She called him and this time Pratap looked at Nupur with a questioning face''..

Pratap: kya hua Nups?

Nupur: Are you alright papa?

Pratap: yes bete'kyun kya hua?

Nupur: Are you sure?

Pratap: Yes.

Nupur didn't ask for her chocolate again. Because she could sense something was really wrong. Her father never forgot her chocolate from her childhood in any situation. But today he forgot that. Something was really very wrong. She started to go back her room. Suddenly Pratap called her back. Nupur thought may be her father wanted to make a fun. May be everything was right. She turned back towards her father with a hope that everything was all right.

Nupur: Yes papa''.

Pratap: Today your result was given, wasn't it?

Nupur: Yes papa'.

Pratap: How was that?

Nupur: I scored good marks.

Pratap: That's great. Now raat bahut ho chuki hey. Good Night.

Nupur: Good night Papa.

Nupur was sure that something was really wrong. After this conversation her every hope lost. She went back to her room and dialed Rahul.

Nupur: hello Rahul''.

Rahul: ha Nups bol'..

Nupur: Papa forgot to bring my chocolate'.can you believe that?

Rahul: kya! Tu yeh keh ne k liye mujhe phone kiya!

Nupur: Rahul papa ne kabhi bhi mere liye chocolate lana nehi bhule'chahe kuch bhi ho jaye.

Rahul: aj bhul gaye honge'.what's the big deal Nups.

Nupur: Rahul tu samja nehi.

Rahul: Toh samja na'

Nupur described him all the matter. After listening Nupur words''

Rahul: tune uncle aunty se baat ki'.

Nupur: nehi'.tu janta hey na ki mein khud kabhi maa papa se nehi puchti jab tak unhone kudh nehi batati''

Rahul: toh tune kya socha hey?

Nupur: dekte hey kya hota hey''..agar kuch din mein sab kuch thik nehi hota toh mein maa paa se khud puchungi.

Rahul: thik hey'tu chinta maat kar sab thik ho jayenge

Nupur: Thanks yaar'..okay bye'good night

Rahul: okay bye''if you need some help toh call me.

Nupur: tujhe kehne ki jarurat nehi hey. I'll definitely call you. Tu sara aur hey kaun mere.

Rahul: assa ab rakte hey'.bye

Then they hanged up the phone. Nupur went the bed to sleep. Completely unknown about what would happen to her''how much danger was over her head''.

Next day Nupur got up and went college. At the college she met Rahul. They discussed about last night incident'.they attended classes'..after the classes when they passed the corridor a notice caught Nupur eyes''.it was about a scholarship'..a full free scholarship in UK''if she could get that scholarship she could get her destination easily. She decided to apply for the scholarship. She collected all information about the scholarship. After collecting that information she was totally engrossed to prepare herself for the scholarship. She totally forgot about the problem. Days passed away''..


Love

Ridi


Chapter four- page 25


Edited by ridi_onasis - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

very nice ridi..

so nupur applied for the scholarship..
hope so everything will be fine..
update soon
Edited by -moona- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -moona-

very nice ridi..

so nupur applied for the scholarship..
hope so everything will be fine..
update soon



aur kitna soon karu....😳........thnx
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update....😊
thnx for de pm
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Originally posted by: jiya_angel

nice update....😊

thnx for de pm



thnx dear.......😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
really nice waiting to know what will happen?

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