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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 47

Both Maan and Geet had come downstairs hand in hand!!! Meera and Annie ran to Geet and gave her a big hug!!!!…

Meera: Haila Bhabhi!!! Congrats!!!!


Geet: Thank you!!!!!!….


Annie: What a way to tell us!!!! and you did it by using the kids!!!!!


Geet was smiling!! Everyone was happy for them!!!!!!


Sahil: arre why is everyone hugging chachi???


Meera: becuz… ur going to get another brother or sister!!!


Sahil: What really??


Meera: Yes!!


Sahil: give me a brother chachi!


Meera: What about Anu????


Sahil: Momma… wen she gets bigger…. She will want to play with dolls!!!!


Meera: So???


Sahil: So?? We are boys we don't play with dolls!!!! Unless she plays with us with our cars!!!


Meera: Do u think she will do that???


Sahil: I hope so!!!!


Geet was smiling non stop!!!!… He was something!!! Already asking for a brother!!!!!


Geet: Well if you guys are good little boys then God will give you a brother!!!


Sahil: Yes! I will be a good boy!


Ranveer: me too!!!!…


After dinner….. Geet was in the garden and she was looking at the stars in the sky!!! She was sitting on the swing and just going back and fourth and looking up!!!!!!….. Maan had come inside the room from the study!!! And he thought he had might find Geet in there…. but she wasn't!


He had checked in the bathroom but she wasn't there!!! he was thinking where could she be!!! he had come out on the balcony and saw her there and he was smiling at the sight that he was seeing!!!! He had come down and went in the garden and he sat next to her….


She had looked over to him and she smiled!! She had placed her head on his shoulder and he had put his arm around her!..


Maan: What are you thinking about??


Geet: Nothing! just over whelmed with whats happening!!!!


Maan: Well its happening for the better isnt it?


Geet: Yes very much!!! I have you in my life….. the days just keep getting better and better!!!


Maan: they will keep getting better and better!!!!!


They spent a good chunk of time in the garden before they were gonna call it a night!!……


A month had passed by….. Bani was having her morning sickness.. and it was freaking Maan out! He didn't know wat was going on so he would freak out more than anyone!! Everyone had to calm him down!!!! Once that session was over… then it was her tantrums!!! Wow!!!! Everyone had to keep up with her!!! she would have the weirdest hormones!!!……. man if he ever made her mad or sad… that was the end of the world and no one would help him get out of it!!!!……… and she was barely on her 2
nd month…… wat the other 7 months had to hold… who knew!!!

One morning….


Maan wakes up and doesnt find Geet there


Maan: Geet where are you at?????


He had comes outside……


Maan: Meera have you seen Geet? she wasnt there when i woke up!


Meera: i dont know where could she have gone? BHABHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Dev comes……


Maan: Dev have you seen Geet??


Dev: (points) she's right over there...


Meera and Maan look….. Geet is praying…Maan is like man!! He tells her to rest and she wakes up early……..


Meera: now thats my Bhabhi!!!!…. as always!!


Maan: Yeah but so early?


Meera: Nothing wrong in morning pooja!!!!


Geet finishes praying, opens her eyes and turns around and see's everyone standing behind her


Geet: (smiles) good morning! you guys woke up so soon?


Maan: i was worried about you wen i didn't see u in the morning……


Geet: Nothings going to happen to me!! i am in perfect fit!!! See!! Look!!!


Meera: Remember Bhabhi, you have to take care of two now! its important that you dont work so hard! just relax!


Geet: Yes Meera!!! But im only on my 2
nd month!!!! Relax!!!

Maan goes back to his room and takes his shower and Geet takes out his clothes


Maan: Geet didnt Meera tell you to take rest i can take out my own clothes now dont worry go relax!


Geet: (sad) oh so you dont need me anymore?


She turns around!!!! Maan was thinking oh god!! Those hormones again!!!!! she was getting all sad!!!…..


Maan: are baba!!! its not like that u have two to worry about now i am just watching out for the most importnant person in my life!!! i love you a lot!!!


Geet: But i dont love you!!!


Maan: I know you do!!


Geet: no i dont!


Maan: Geet???


Geet: no i dont love you!!


Maan: fine then i wont talk to you!!


starts walking but Geet grabs his arm….


Geet: you took me to seriously that u dont even want to talk to me! you mean the world to me!!


She starts to get all emotional and has tears in her eyes…. Maan was looking at her!! from being all mad…. being all sad!!! Women!!! Cant live with them cant live without them!!!


Geet: I wont say it once, or twice I will say it 100x that I love you Maan!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Maan: I love you too Geet! I love you too!!!!!……. don't worry I will never leave you!!!!!!!!……


In the late afternoon….. Sahil and some of his friends…were playing outside with their friends….. and they had come back inside….


Sahil: Momma!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


He was calling Meera!!


Sahil: Momma… how much do u love me?


Meera: Arre.. what kind of question is that??? I love you a lot!!


Sahil: Do you love me enough to let me go to camp???


Meera: Camp??


Ranveer: Yes! Momma…. Plz!!! Say yes!


Annie: Whoa!! Whats this camp??


Sahil: Rohit is going to this summer camp!!! And it will be so much fun!! I wanna go!! Plz momma!!


Meera: But ur too young Sahil….


Sahil: Momma no I am not I am a big boy!!!! Plz!!


Meera: I don't know I will have to ask ur papa!!!! You will have to wait til he comes home!!!


Sahil was waiting for Dev to come home….as soon as he heard the cars coming he ran to Dev and had started begging him


Dev: can I plz come inside???


Sahil: Sure papa! Come on!


Sahil pulled Dev's hand and he came and sat on the couch!!!…. and then Sahil sat on top of his lap and he was asking!!


Dev: Ask ur momma!!


Sahil: Uff!!! She said she will ask you!! plz papa!! Say yes!!!!


Meera was looking at Dev! They were both looking at one another!! Dev had said that after him and Meera talk about then they will let him know!!!…. Sahil really wanted to go!!! but Sahil being only 5….. Meera was a bit concerned!!!…


During dinner time… Sahil wasn't even eating his food properly!!! He was waiting for a reply from them!!


Maan: Hey buddy!! Whats the matter?? U arent eating?


Sahil was quiet!!!!……. he was moping around!!!! Maan had told him to come and sit on his lap….. and Sahil walked over to him and Maan picked him up!!!….. and asked him whats the matter??


Sahil told Maan about the summer camp that he wanted to go to!!


Maan had looked over to both of them and he told Dev and Meera to let him go!!!!…. that way he goes out of the house and he gets to be with kids his own age and he will have fun!!!….. Maan had told Sahil that he could go!!…….. and that he had Maan's permission!! Sahil was jumping up and down and he hugged Maan very tightly and told him that he loved him very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Plz comment!😳


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Posted: 14 years ago
me me me! and omg...you're gonna need a new thread soon! eeks!

3/5...am i on a roll or what? 😛

i loved Sahil's analysis for why he wants a brother and not a sister...lmao...girls can play with cars too...fyi mr. sahil! 😛😛...blopper babeji! you left Ranveer in there somewhere...ha ha...im like...where did he come from? 😆😆😆...and you left a Bani in there 😆😆😆...what is this..>KS reunion time? 😉😉...maan letting little sahil go off to camp...haye haye...the baby is all grown up!
JAZ

Edited by jnawaz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awsome one uaar ..i loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update.................oh god geet throwing tantrums now it self..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update...
ye camp ka kya chakka hai..kuch gadbad to nahi hone waali..??
bechara maan...has to put up with the tantrums n emotions of his lovely wife...😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful part. loved it.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update....
do pregnant women actually throw so much of tantrums???
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMGG
Just read ur FF in a go
And am speechless
just amazing ff
am in love with it
please continue soon
yayy geet preggy
cant wait
update soon
thank you

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 48

Meera: wait… why did you say yes???

Maan: arre Meera… let him go!! He will be out of the house!!!!…


Meera: One month??


Maan: And?? He will be with kids his age!!!!


Sahil: Yeah momma!!!!…..i will have fun!!!……. chachu said yes!! so I am going!!


Natu: Well its not a bad idea!!!..


Meera: He's never gone away from me!!


Natu: Well you have to let go sometime!!!


Sahil was going to go!! So the packing for him had begun!!!!!… he was soo excited!! He was jumping for joy!! Meera was giving him lecture on make sure he behaves and no masti!!!… and Sahil kept on saying okay!!!…..


Maan: But she is right…… if you don't behave and I hear that…. You were bad…. Remember… this chachu… will get in trouble by ur momma… and if that happens…. U wont get chocolate from me…. And that means..


Sahil: Haila no more chocolate? No I will be a good boy!!!!!!!!!!… I promise!


Maan: remember!!!…. u cant misbehave!!!…


Sahil: What does that mean?


Maan: don't be bad!!!!


Sahil: Okay! I wont!!!!


He was just listening to her on and on and on after Maan had left from there!!!!!……. Geet was in her room and Maan had asked her whether she wanted anything and she had just said no!!!….he had sat down next to her… and he made sure that she was okay and she was doing okay!!!……. Geet was just thinking since that now she was pregnant she was thinking of an image of the nursery!!!!


Maan had told her to pick out whatever she wanted… and he would get it!! But then she would argue with him as this was his child to!!… he had opinions……. So he should pick as well!!

Maan: But Geet… u know best!!! You can get whatever you want!!


Geet: So this is my child now?? Only mine? Not urs!


Maan: I Didn't say that!


Geet: then how come I have to pick out everything?


Maan: Becuz!! U pick it out and I pay for it!


Geet: Yeah all u have to do is take out that CC from the back of ur pockets and give it to them!!!!….. but don't u wanna choose… between the bunnies or the bears??


Maan: Bunnies?? Bears??


Geet: Yeah! The wall paper for the nursery!!


Maan: I will leave that too you!!


Geet: oh so… now I have to give birth to ur child but I also have to do the nursery as well!!….


Maan: Well the giving birth part… I cant really…


Geet: Oh suck it up!!!!!!!!


Maan knew he shouldn't have opened his mouth!!! It was getting him in trouble!!!… and she was going through her crazy self again!!!!!!!!!!… so then he had agreed!!!… he had agreed to help her!!


Maan: Okay so I would go with the bears!!


Geet: No but I want the bunnies! They look much cuter!!


Maan: see.. then if that's what u want… why are you asking me??


Geet was giving him that look… are you really asking me this?? He looked at her and just kept his mouth shut!!! He thought to himself that no matter whatever he says.. he will never win!!!!!…..


Few days later…. Sahil was all packed to go!!!… he was gonna go in this big bus with all the other kids!! Meera was still gonna like the idea… cuz he was going by himself….. but everyone explained to her that….. it will be okay!! The kids had hugged everyone!!! and they all told them to take care and they got a whole bunch of kisses!!!!….. Sahil had both wiped his cheeks and said yuck!!

The kids were dropped off by the place where they to leave from!!!! Once the bus had left….. the boys were gonna be there for a whole month!!!… what a long time that was for their camp!!!…….

Back in KM.. now the house was quiet…. With Sahil gone…. There was no more noise!!.. Anu was there… but she was a good baby!!… she wouldn't cry or anything!!!!!…. she was a very loveable child!!!……


It was another normal day!!.. nothing exciting was happening!!!…. the guys had come home for lunch!!…..it was 12!!…. they had a nice lunch with the gals!!……..


After lunch….Maan had gone to his study to pick up a few files……. He was looking in the drawers.. and got what he wanted and he came back downstairs!!! Wen he had come back down…. Geet was waiting for him by the stairs..


Maan: What happened?


Geet: Maan I am going to go… and buy things for the nursery today!!!…

Maan: Today?? But isn't it early!!

Geet: Yeah but I saw some things… and I want to start… I still have 7 more months to go… but then if I don't find it later on....

Maan: okay!!

Maan didn't say anything! Whatever said went!!

Maan: I thought u wanted me to go with you….


Geet: Yeah but ur always working!!…… so I will go today!!!!


Maan: I will go!! And u cant go in this state anyways!!!


Geet: whats wrong with my state?


Maan: Geet….. I will go with you!! don't worry!!..


Geet: U always say that!! But not once have you done anything!


Maan: U still have 7months!…….


Geet: So??… ur gonna buy everything wen the baby is born!!! And then u will try to do everything!!!…..


Maan: I promise!!.. I wont!!.. we will go together and by everything!!!…


Geet was getting all mad!


Maan: Arre my dear wife…. Don't get mad!!!…..


Geet: Hmm… I will see wen you take me!!


Maan: don't worry!! I will!!…. man u women make such a big deal over nothing!!


Geet: what?? No we don't!


Maan: yes you do!!


Geet: No its becuz of guys like you…. who don't like to finish things fast and wait until the last min!!


Maan: But then don't u understand that I work!!!….. I have an empire I have to take care of!!!… and I keep telling you that I will do everything!! But you don't seem to understand!


Geet: So now I am not understanding???


Maan: I know this is my child as well!! Not just urs!!!…….


Geet: Uff! All you men are all the same!!


Maan: all u women are all the same!!


Geet: Mr. Maan Singh Khurana… you take that back!!!!!….


Maan: Why?? Why should I take that back??….


Things were getting out of hand!!! And this wasn't even Geet's hormones talking….. this was her talking!!!!!…… and before…. Things got out of hand!! Maan was gonna control this!! But Geet got mad….and told him that she didn't want to see him anymore!! And to go back to work!!


He was trying to talk but she didn't let him….


Geet: no you go!!… I don't want to see you!!… go to work! work is more important! I don't care if you stay there and never come back!!1


Maan: Okay fine!! If that's how you feel!!….


Geet: Yes that's how I feel!!!…… I have to put up with you!


Maan: Me??? Ur the one with the different mood swings!


Geet: ur saying I have mood swings???


Maan: Yes!! ur damn hormones!!!!!..


Geet: Fine then!!!!…. go then!! Then u don't have to deal with my so called hormones!!!….


She had walked off from there…. and he had left from there too!!!……. he had driven off in his car… and he was gone!!!…. Geet went into her room….and she had laid down!!!… she was crying a little bit…… but then…. She had slightly fell asleep for 2 hours!!!!!!!!!!!!

After 2 hours…. She had seen the time…. and it was 3!!!!…….. she had woke up…..and checked her phone!!…. she had gone into the bathroom and she washed her face!!!….. she had come downstairs…… Annie and Meera were downstairs talking…. And they told her to come and join her!!!!…..


Annie: Had ur good sleep?


Geet: Yeah! I did!!!….


They were sitting around… and thinking what to make for dinner 2nite!!!…. without the little ones there…. it was so quiet and peaceful!!!!….. and no one had to worry about it!!…..


Sahil
had arrived at his camp!! They were both put together with 2 of the other boys….. they were all excited!!!… Sahil was beginning to miss his mom!!! Knowing that she wasn't going to be there….. Ranveer was looking at him and asked him what was wrong!! He had made sure that Sahil would be okay!!!!……. being his big brother!!!

It was dinner time at KM……. The guys had come back!! But Maan hadn't come back!!! Arjun said that he was still in the office!!!….. Geet was looking at him wen he had said that!!… she didn't say anything!!…..did he really take her words seriously???


After dinner was over… Geet was on the couch!!! She was waiting for him to come!!! The guys were gonna call it a night it had been a long day and they couldn't stay awake anymore!……..


Geet was all by herself looking at the front door!!!!…. it was almost 10!!….. still no sign!!!……. wen 10 became 11… 11 became 12….. Geet started to worry!!!…… she was already a nervous wreck!! But the fact that….. he shouldve been home!!!…..


She had started crying!……. she didn't know who to tell… she had gone to Meera's rooms… and knocked on the door!!! Meera had heard this.. and she opened the door!


Meera: Geet bhabhi??? Whats the matter? Ur knocking at this time! everything okay?


Geet: Meera…. Maan hasn't come home yet!!……. and I am getting worried!!! Why hasn't he come home yet??


Meera: What??



Plz comment!!😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally!!! me me me!

and the rolling continues...4/5 ⭐️

lmfao!! babeji!! where is your head!! you've got Natu in this part!! 🤣 but wait...what was his name again...i wasnt natu...that was short for something...but what was it short for...i dont remember...ha ah😆😆😆...for some reason teh only name i can think of is natwar...and i know thats wrong 😆😆😆 omg...if maan is simply not home to harass his wife..im gonna kick is butt!!!

JAZ

Edited by jnawaz - 14 years ago

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