Reminiscence of Love: A Maaneet Tale :)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello guys! i have been a silent, and sometimes, an active member here. I really love all the writers here, and it has inspired me to start my own FF. 😊

I'm still an amateur, and would need loads of support by u all. This is my first time, and i would PM u all as i update. Also, i wont be updating frequently and regularly, as am busy and stuck up with college and my job. So please cooperate with me. 😳

And and and. I haven't yet thought of a title. So please help me by dropping in ur valuable suggestions after reading. 😉
And dont hesitate to criticise, and like, and appreciate. 😆

Thanks all. Love u. And here i Go...

I have also written an OS very recently. Here is the link if you want to have a look.



red hearts


PS: The credit of the above Design and the pic goes to the one and only Ratna a.k.a PerfectYarav.👏
I really thank her from my heart for this amazing idea. Thanks Ratna. 😊
Keep coming with more ideas to help me making all this more attractive. 😆
And *applause applause*😃
Thank you so much once again.😳

Intro:

Her POV:

Cupping a mug of hot chocolate in her hands, she sat by the window sill. She had been doing this for a while now. The place had become her solace. She could gaze the night sky from there. She could count the stars. She could smile, and she could cry. 🥺 She could think and talk with herself. There would be no one to ask her any questions about her doings, her mood and her feelings. 😍

It were days like these, that would transport her back into those times, that world, those memories. The memories of HIM. And then she realised, Something was amiss. Yes! She placed the mug in a corner, and walked towards the side of her bed. She opened the drawer and lay her hands on IT. After taking the feeling of the smooth texture for a few seconds, she held it up-close to her chest. She took in the scent, the familiar musk. A lone tear escaped her eye and slid down her cheek. She walked back to the sill, collected herself and sat there, the wall supporting her back.

She closed her eyes, let a sigh and then opened the first page of IT. As she opened her eyes, she was there, walking down the memory lane, with HIM. It was an entirely different world than the one that she had been living in now for a while. It was HIS world. HER world, but most above all, it was THEIR world.


Love,
~Geet~ 😊

Link to the Next Part: Introduction II


Here is the index for the easy access to all the updates. 😊





















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Tishuu thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow i loved each word of that! That was soo go whre u been hiding? Wow erm well cnt say much 4 the title because im unsure of ur plot but one thing that came to my mind was, 'Counting Memories' or 'Rejoicing/Reliving your love/memories' :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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another title and its ur own words, a walk down memory lane. Lol its rigit there under ur nose
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tishuu

wow i loved each word of that! That was soo go whre u been hiding? Wow erm well cnt say much 4 the title because im unsure of ur plot but one thing that came to my mind was, 'Counting Memories' or 'Rejoicing/Reliving your love/memories' :D


aaww.. thanks a ton! :)
i had been apprehensive to write, cuz i was unsure of myself, but thanks fr ur support. :)
and the title, yes that too. i'll consider, but i still need some more time, as i myself haven't continued the story as yet.😛
till then, whats the harm in reading a title-less ff. 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: farheen9


Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Very nice dear
Love it


thanks farheen 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow
for a first timer, u r too good, just amazing,
as for the title, i'll let u know if i get something,
for now, thanks for the pm,
n do update soon

love
pooja
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it's beautiful. But I hope there is more.
But loks like its goin 2 b a sad story.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

wow
for a first timer, u r too good, just amazing,
as for the title, i'll let u know if i get something,
for now, thanks for the pm,
n do update soon

love
pooja


thanks. and i'm going to update soon-ish. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: WhiteFantasy

it's beautiful. But I hope there is more.
But loks like its goin 2 b a sad story.


well, not a sad story. it is situational. so lets see, where does the story takes the characters!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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well, here i am. back again. quicker than i thought.😛
anyway, this is the continuation of the intro. i did think of putting it up as chapter 1. but then i took the idea back. cuz it apparently is more of an intro again. but this time from his POV.

Oh! and before u start reading, this is a Maan Geet FF. if u guys want me to change the characters of the protagonists, do let me know after this post only. and if u dont want me to change the leads, do let me know can i relocate this topic to the Maan Geet forum. thanks and love all!

Happy Reading.😊


Intro (continued)

His POV

The clear water gushed down the fall. And he stood at the edge of the pool, that had been created when water fell down from the waterfall and accumulated in the likes of a pond. His feet half dipping in the crystal water. He was lost in the rustling of winds, and the chirping of birds, but he could feel HER presence there.

And then was it, that he heard the musical sound, that always made his heart jump and skip a beat- her laughter. He whipped around, but saw none. Dejected, he was about to turn around when a flying white dupatta caught his attention. Instantly, a smile played on his lips. He knew it was her. The trinkling sound made by the ornaments on her feet and her wrists- it was melodious, and it belonged to her. It was magical- the feeling- how this sound always pulled the strings of his heart in symphony. He followed the trinkles, his heart beat in accordance with the sound. He ran past the trees, searching for her but did not find her- he gave up. He was disappointed- why would he not be- he had lost her! He came backed near the fall. What he saw there truly amazed his senses and shot up the dormant desire in him.

She stood there, under the fall, her white saree clung to her soft feminine form, hugging her curves, at all the right places. Her every curve, laden with water. What more could he ask for, than the sight in front of him. At the behest of his desire, he walked to her, and stood by her back. His gaze lingering on her- drinking in her terrific beauty, taking in every possible detail he could. And then he trailed his fingers on her back, as if trying to make sure if she was real, making her shudder with pleasure. His hands moved with a mind of there own. He bent his head down. She moaned. She sniffed. She turned around and hugged him, ever so tightly.

She held him, as if holding on for her dear life. And she sobbed in his arms. He enveloped her in his embrace, confused. Yes! he knew this touch. But why could he not remember. Her cries pained him. Each sob piercing his heart with a thousand needles. Each muffle was like a stab with a knife. He so wanted to see her face. Gently, he pulled her apart and she shook her head, as if in shame. Cupping her face with his hands, he ever so slowly made her look up.

Those eyes, he knew them. That face- the beautiful features- all belonged to HER.!

"Geet!?!", he exclaimed.

"Maan!", she whispered, her eyes and her voice, full of immense love and passion.

***********************

His eyes flew open. He jolted upright on his bed. Beads of sweat covered his forehead. His hand went to the glass of water on his bedside table, and he gulped it down his throat, trying to calm his senses.

"Geet!", he thought and sighed.

He has had this dream the nth number of time now. It was almost a habit. It recurred each night and disturbed his mind, his heart. He never felt at ease.

He knew the dream, yet he did not know it. The place- he had been there, but he could not remember. The sounds, voices- he recognised each too well, but he could not recall anything. And the girl.
"Geet!", was all he could say again and remember. That was here name, supposedly. Who was she.?! She had appeared familiar, too familiar for his comfort, even in dreams. Did she exist? And if she did, how did she know him!? He had never met such a girl. None looked like her, or sounded like her, for that matter. Then how?! and Who?!

Questions like these, and a million others, invaded his mind, each time after he had this dream.
Keeping aside all these questions once again, he remembered his work, he had to leave for Delhi the next day. He better catch some sleep. He gulped some water down again and pulled the duvet over him and lay on his bed. He glanced at his phone- 2 AM. He then shut his eyes tight, making an effort to go back in the world of pleasant dreams, hoping for a better tomorrow, as he did every day.

What he did not know was, that tomorrow held answers.! From tomorrow, a journey would begin- an enthralling journey- that would change his life for ever.!

Link to the next part: Chapter 1- And the Journey Begins

Hit the like button, and dont forget to comment. 😳
Edited by geet105 - 14 years ago

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