ok so here's the first chapter-
"Goodbye"'..not yet'.
"Samrat'.!!Tum beach pe akele khade hoke kya kar rahe ho????Mujhe dekhna bandh karo and Come here fast before I splash water on your face.." and then she bursted into a fit of giggles'I sometimes wonder that will it ever stop amazing me that how through some convulated plan of fate I have ended up in this wonderful relationship with Gunjan'the shy girl who I made fun of on the first day of college has somehow manged to play the chords of my heart and ended up not only being my best friend but also the sole reason for living,my love..my fiance..
"Enough!!!! Are you coming with me or not?" she called from where she was standing knee length into the sea water'.she loves swimming and so she has dragged me here today just two days before our dream wedding so that we can enjoy one full day out here in the beach without all our relatives eating our heads about weeding preparations and flowers & guests & etc'.etc'.i sometimes wish that we could have had a court marriagee'but then again the weeding was our dream & we wanted everyone to be happy about it'
"Wait a second'!!Mein change karke ata hu" I said smiling as she pouted over the fact that I have not changed yet & was standing there just gazing at her'!! I can't help myself I just love to gaze at her all the time she is my angel & I Love her too much'
I was smiling to myself as I came out from the changing room in order to join her.I can't help it just the thought of doing something,anything with her makes me elated. "Oh no!!" I realised that in my hurry to be with her I have forgotten to unfasten my shoe..i bent down to do that.."Ok!! I am ready lets swim"..i said while unfastening my shoe and looked up in order to see her beautiful angelic face smiling down at me'However I couldn't see her'!! She was not there'!! I panicked'where was she?? She was just there smiling at me from where she stood in the knee length water before I left but she just wasn't there any more'There was also something strangely wrong about the beach'I mean no one was in the water anymore instead there were small and large groups of people standing together with serious faces and discussing something'in my panic I could only make out a few words like "bechari"'" "hope wo bach jaye" from the collective hum
That made me more tensed'I half ran towards the first group of people who were standing nearest to me..
"Kya Aap ne Gunjan ko dekha?mera matlab apne ek ladki ko dekha?wo abhi dus minuite pehle wahan thi"'I said fanatically to them while ponting my finger to indicate where in the sea I have left her'.
"Yahn kuch hua hai kya??Kya apne use dekha??"why are these people not replying'
"Kya usne ek white sleeveless top aur shorts pehne the?"
"ha'ha wahi'wo meri fiance hai'kya apne use dekha?Agar ha to please mujhe batayi ye ke who kaha hai??"..
"Dakhiye hum yakeen ke saath nahi kahe sakte ke hum jiski bat kar rahe hai wo apki fiance hai ke nahi' par abhi panch minuite pehle wahan ek accident hua hai ek baccha samundar mein dub raha tha aur ek ladki use bachane gayi aur use life guard ke hatho de diya par wo khud jab tayerke wapas aa rahi thi to wo ek badi di leher me fas gayi'"
What are these people trying to imply????Gunjan'meri gunjan???? No ways!!! Aisa nahi ho sakta'.Gunjan kiko kuch nhai ho sakta'!!
"'........aur jab tak life guards use bach ke le aye tab tak wo bahos ho gayi thi..use City Hospital le gaye hai hume lagta hai ke aap ko ek bar City Hospital jana chahiye"'.!!!!
p.s-ok guys that's the first chapter...tell me how it is...feel free to critisise..
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