First of all, sorry for being late with the comments. Uni has started again and I've been sick for the last two weeks...
Part 3 - Awesome!
Mayank saying sorry at the beginning was touching'but what happened b/w them? I'm so eager to find out.
Father-Daughter meeting was beautifully written!!! Mayank being scared of how she would react and feeling bad for abandoning them'and Khushi was just adorable! It's so sad when she said she wanted to be a doctor when she grew up'she is little that she doesn't understand the severity of her disease and is hopeful about the future. It was very realistic.
Yay, Nupur is Pregnant'but again there is a twist. Her decision, to go ahead with this pregnancy eve when she knows it's dangerous for her, shows the mother in her'who is ready to fight even death for her little baby.
"do you know how dirty I feel Mayank, no matter how many showers or baths I take, I feel like some filth off the roads and its all because of you" 'Again' I want to know what happened in the past'
Part 4
Another great part! Mayank thought of society and not his wife? Not her fault? I'm really curious as to what the specific reason behind their separation'It seems Mayank does regret what he had done and I hope Nupur forgives him.
Nice song! So apt for their situation.
Aww'Mayank made pancakes for Nupur. So sweet and how she related the summersault in her stomach to baby throwing tantrums..that was so cute! Nupur is a tough cookie! She opted for the apple even though she craved for the pancake. Glad she did eat it at the end! Otherwise, Mayank's efforts would've gone to waste.
Omg, Nupur collapsed..
Mayank may not have been a good husband in the past but he is a great father now! Loved how he brought in the laptop for Khushi so she can see her Mama and loved how he watched the two talk'so sweet!! I really hope this family gets their happy ending!
Will try to comment on the rest of the parts soon.
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