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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 27

After an hour sujal enters her vanity van.

s-hey ! how are you?

k-never better [answers with a big happy grin]

s-good. Shoot over?

k-nahi, bass thoda bacha hai. Waise ek cheez dikhaun?

she shows him the kangan in her hand.

s-ye kya hai? Kahan se mila tumhe.

k-road pe pada hua tha maine utha liya. Arre, dia hai mujhe.

s-kisne?

k-pata hai kaun aaya tha. Mujhe ye kangan aur ye bhi diya.

She gives him the file.

s-file?

k-property ke papers hain, mere naam pe. Tumhare papa aaye the, mujhse milne

s-kya??? [he gives a hard frown]

k-haan, bohot achche hain wo. Unhone hi to mujhe ye khandaani kangan aur ye property di. Nice naa.

s-utaaro ye kangan ! [he orders]

k-kya? Par kyun?

s-ek baar kaha, samajh mein nahi aaya !

he forcefully removes the kangan from her hand throws them out

k-arreeeeeee ! ye kya kiya !

she starts to go towards them.

s-DON'T YOU DARE STEP OUT KASHISH !

k-par..wo kangan...

s- LEAVE THE DAMN KANGAN !!!!!!!!!

gusse ke mare side mein job hi saaman tha phek deta hai uthake.

K jumps with surprise.

s-KANGAN CHAHIE TO, HAZAARO LAAKE DUNGA. TUM WO NAHI PEHNOGI. AUR YE PROPERTY....

he takes the file and burns them with his lighter.

k-sujal, tum ye..papa..ye....

s-DON'T CALL HIM THAT ! DON'T !!!!!!!!

sujal apna gussa kaabu nahi kar paa raha. He doesn't understand why his dad came to kashish. But he just knows he is just feeling insecure and protective, and his emotions were venting out in form of his dangerous anger.

Sujal gusse ke mare aas-paas ka saara sammaan tehas-nehas kar deta hai.

He wants to be alone. His dad had crossed his limit, he had invaded his space that was too personal.

Kashish to sujal ko aise dekh ke bilkul hairaan reh gai hai.

Usse samajh nahi aa raha sujal ko achanak kya hua.

Wo ghabra gai hai sujal ke gusse se, he was uncontrollable today.

Sujal goes out banging the door behind him and zooms off in his car.

Before she could speak to him or pacify him, he went.

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Kashish tries his phone several times but it was switched off.

She has to complete the shoot, so she thinks shoot complete karke she would directly speak to him when they would go for the movie premiere.

+++++++++++++++++++++++

She gets ready to go for the movie premiere.

She had called sujal several times but his phone was switched off.

She decides to go o his place and directly meet him, and they can go to the premiere directly from there.

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She reaches his place in a red dress, all ready to go to the premiere.

She rings the door bell of his house.

His servant opens the door.

k-saab, kahan hai?

Servant-emm...wo...wo..ghar pe...

k-ghar pe hain? To kya kar rahe hain? Phone kyun nahi utha rahe?

Servant-wo...madam..wo..emm..wo..kamre..mein...

k-kya? Achcha, kahan hai unka karma?

Servant-wo..wo..madam wo....

k-kya ye..wo....? kahan hai unka kamara, dikhao jaldi.

The servant shows her the room and she heads for sujal's room.

Edited by storywriter - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ohh.....Sujal absolutely lived up to my expectations....hehe. I didnt expect anything less than this....actually!! Waise first se shuru karu to....Kashish ka wo sarcastic tone when she says 'raaste me padha mila tha utha liya'....that was nice...hehe. And phir to Sujal ki gusse wali volcano phat gayi....and damn....kya lava nikla!!

But jokes apart.....he is actually very hurt....as he takes Kashish to be a part of him on which only he has got the right.....so this unwanted invasion of his father towards Kashish....was bound to make him really angry!!

Now I hope Kashish can pacify him at least.....though I wonder how's Sujal's condition in that room....as the servant seemed very unsure and hesitating!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
sujal's anger really is very scary....................only kashish can tame him....................hope she consoles him now....................cont soon dear..................
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update. well wondering wht makes the difference between sujal and his dad. the scene was very much expected now wants to know abt the room condition. continue soon............
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Posted: 14 years ago
now wasn't it something expected 😆 😆.......... seems kashish se zyada we understood sujal 😆😆😆😆.....but i guess sujal reaction was wrong somewhere ....he shud have made her understand......but woh yeh sab karle toh woh sujal nahi rahega 😆😆😆😆.... ab bechari kashish ko sach thodi pata hai...she doesn't know ...how his relation is with his Dad...... .........

good to see kashish go to his house 😊😊......... hope he is fine........ 😳😳😳........ & now he doesn't get more angry 😊😊😊.......... make everything well soon 😛😛😛

continue soon 😃😃






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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update neelu.sujal is very angry. cant wait to know what happened next !!
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi
the up is good
so sujal reacted in a very emotional and rude way
kashish was so happy to get the kangan and the file from sujal's dad but sujal when he get to know about this he reacted so angrily
it was ovious from him
as he doesnt his father
anyways hope that kashish comforts him nicely
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part kahsih should be with him he is angry .
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Posted: 14 years ago
well nice part
sujal ka gussa hona jayaz hai as he is such a personality that he cnt hide his emotions n anger in frnt of one hwom he considered him own n kashish is such 1 n only person in his llife so she has to face his this side sooner or later.ye sab scene dekh ke mujh do chij yaad aayi
pehle apna orginial sujal aur uska gussa dad ko lekar same yehi kaha tha usne "dont call him that,dont".
aur dusri well mujhe "dil movie"yaad aayi as aisa hi kuch scene usme tha but diff kafi hai they were couple t dat tim e+ma aati hai for giving kangan to her bahu par yaha na to ye dono couple hai...though officially na hi ma aayi as yaha dad aay wo bhi kangan +pproperty papers lekar well jo ho gusse main ye baat achi hui ki he said tumhe kangan chahiye to main lake dunga,jitne bhi kangan chahie...are gusse main hi dil ki honto par aa hi gayi
aur ye kashish ab iska kya kahe she jus so naive cnt she understand his anger at this very moment...but well not her fault agan as she is jus being like dis in whole fic till nw are usse nature main hi nai aise sab double meaning baatein samjhna she is jus kid frm heart uske lliye to sab jannat jaisa hai jaha koi bhi gussa jyyada dere tak ke liye nai...are ab wo kya kare agar use ye samaj nai aata ki sujal upset hai kafi ha mana ki uski galati nai as use kya pata kooi apne dad ki is tarah ke gifts dene ki harkat se aise aag babula ho jayega are bhai ye to normal nai hai na..ab usse to kuch pata nai ki y sujal is acting like dis..aur sujal bhi to kuch kehta nai ..aadhi adhoori baatein karta hai orders deta aise utt patang si harkatein karta aur uske baat aise hi chala jata aur bechare kashish use hamesh hi aise confusing si state main chod jata hai welll ab kashish kare bhi to kya wo to ab bhi apni kwabo ki duniya main hi hai jaha ye sapna hai ki aaj sujal uske saath premeire par jayega ab phir chahe kyun na earthquake hi aagaya ho ya baad par ye sapna to kashish ne dekha hai aur use to bas ab iske pura hone ka wait hai...well ab sujal ne phone nahi udaya usse baat nai ki to apna pura haq samajh ke uske ghar hi pachuch gayi bechara naukar bhi kya kare hmmm wo to pehle dra sa hi kabhi ye dharti fate gi aur wo usme chala jayega aur upar se kashish ki entry bechare khudko kaus raha hoga ki kis ghadi main main nilu ji ki fic main ek naukar bana..hehehehe
well ab ye dekhna hai ki aage hota hai kya..kashish n sujal encounter for the very first time in this fic in his roomm..............😈..uhahahaha..ab ye sweet hota hi ya bitter,spicy hoga ya soar ye to agal part hi batayeg a

so me waiting......😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
I am having a very bad feeling neelu...badd...the servant was so hesitant to point to sujal's room..jaise waha koi sher ho...ya kuch aur..i dnt wanna say....m waiting 4 u to prove me wrong neelu...plz dont live upto my thoughts....
the scene was very well written...his ghussa style was so real...nt jus trypical sujal style...bt considering the situation...very spontanious...kitna possesive aur insecure hogya...his personal life...hia kashish...hmmm...bt no priaisng u for this...😛 ..ur experienced enough to write it yr....itna ffs likhe hai tune...typical sujal char par...ki ab tujhe adhi raat ko utha kar bhi bole...ki ek scene likhde...to bhi wo oscars ke liye nominate hojae..😆 😆.
done wid my bak bak...poor kashish...mujhe fir wahi yaad arha hai...room scene..coming back to the vanity van..us bechari ki to halat kharab hogyi...sujal ko aise dekh kar...bt i liked tht u didnt make her freak out and run for her own life. .instead she wanted to comfort him...n was more concerned for him...ab cont soon...tc.. 😉

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