!!!Winds of Desire !!! (sk ff) (pg93 last part) - Page 24

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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful n nice part neelu. loved it.

thanx fr the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome , mind blowing cool good going
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awww....thats a sweet part.....so Sujal n Kashish go to the amusement park....and that love tunnel scenes were nicely described.....Kashish kitni excited thi....but then she got scared....and hugged Sujal....hmm....interesting tunnel...😉....and the line was gud as well....continue soon dear!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhhhhhh wowwwwwwwww howww romantic part it was it felt like its the same old kashish very innocent and very pure with an angelic heart i like her in this way and sujal when she is around him he can't ignore her and can't leave her alone when she needs him the most i hope kashish will always keep it in her mind and wil never break his heart b'coz ppl like sujal are very rare in this world
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART 21

The magical fragrances have again surrounded them.

And, there was a picture of both of them lost in each others arms in the tunnel.

Both of them look at the picture and a smile automatically comes over their face.

as the ride ends, they get off the boat.

There are passing the small stall where the pics that were taken during the rides were framed & sold to the visitors.

k-chalo naa dekhte hain

he has to stop as she had stopped and was checking the pic.

She smiles seeing the pic.

k-nice naa? Le lein?

She looks at sujal, for an opinion

s-wht nice? Kisi bhi pic mein hum dono mein se kisi ka bhi chehra to dekh nahi raha

k-to kya hua? Even then its nice. Le lete hain naa

s doesn't say anything.

K tells the shop person to give them two prints.

s-two?

k-aur kya, ek main rakhungi aur dusra tum rakhna.

As k finishes buying the pics both of them have a light snack.

Kashish again starts her photo session. She demands him to take pics of her & she also clicks his photographs. They also click a few together as she keeps on pushing him.

His phone had almost become her property from the time they had stepped there, as kashish was busy taking pics from it because his phone's camera had a better resolution.

Now, they head for the ride called 'future train'.

They had expected a lot & were excited to see how the future train would be.

Par nikla ye ki, there was a normal train that was running on a higher track from the ground level & the platform was not even stable.

Some stupid technology was making the platform move.

k-come on

k bhaagke balance karte hue, kund ke train pe chadh jaati hai.

S follows her aur thoda ladkhake aur thoda balance karke jumps into the train.

s-what a stupid thing, they just think of moving the moving the platform some how & call it 'the future train'.

He grumbles.

K looks at him & cant help a smile seeing him sulk, he looks cute when he sulks.

They go and take up a seat.

Sujal & kashish saath satah baithe hain.

k-lemme ee the pics.

She snatches the phone from his hand.

K is looking at their pics & again clicks a pic of their together.

s-phir se khinchli

k-to? Kitni achchi to aayi hai. See

she shows him the pic.

k-see we look so nice together. Don't you think so?

s-hmm [he cant help but agree that she was ight]

k-so, what do you think?

s-think about?

k-about us.

Tabhi his phone starts ringing.

Its some client of his, & he starts conversing with him.

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It had been half an hour, sujal was still on phone.

She was bored, she wanted to speak to him. The ride had ended, they were roaming aimlessly.

She wanted to discuss what they will do next, where would they go. She wanted to share whatever she saw, whatever she thought.

But he was busy with his clients.

At last to her relief, he disconnects the phone.

k-wo dekho [she points at a direction excitedly]

s-kya?

k-dekho naa, kya hai wahaan

s-kya hai? Kuch bachche hain aur wo gas wale balloon hain.

k-haan wohi to, mujhe balloons bohotttttttttttttt pasand hai

s-baloons??????? [he frowns in surprise]

k-haan, mujhe naa flowers aur gifts sab se zyada balloons pasand hai. Pata hai jab main chotti thi naa, to mumma papa mujhe bade bade toy shop mein le jaate ki kaunsa toy chahie, par mujhe sab mehenge toys se zyada balloons chahie hote the.

He raises an eyebrow.

k-chalo naa lete hain, ballons. Pata hai jaise filmon mein dekhate hai naa ki ek bunch pura, itneeeeeee saare balloons leke aate hain, waise mere liye bhi koi itneeeeeee saare ballons leke aaye

she looks at him.

k-leke aao naa

s-main?????? No ways.

k-why?????

s-unn bachchon ke beech main, balloon lene jaunga to kitna paplu lagunga.

k-pleaseeeeeee [she pleads with her puppy eyes]

s-kashish....

k-nahi jaana naa tuhe, thik hai to main hi le aati hoon

k goes and gets a bunch of gas filled balloons.

k-sujal, dekho ! [she says happily]

he looks over his shoulder to look at her & gives a nod, as he has again got busy with his phone.

K sulks in an irritated manner.

k-sujal, phone rakho naa

s-shhhh

he again gets busy on his phone.

She had enough.

She snatches the phone from him

s-kashish

k-bass ho gaya, bass ab

s-phone do mera

k-nahi dungi

s-kashish don't irritate me

k-i am not irritating you

s-kashish, give it to me or I will snatch it.

He pulls her with her hand, trying to get his phone & she is trying to resist

k-sujal, naaaa, chodo naa

s-give , kashish

in all this chaos his phone gets entagled in the strings of her balloons.

As in order to resist herself from sujal, her grip loosens and the balloons fly off in the sky with his mobile hanging to its strings.

Edited by storywriter - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing part
kashish is really like a child cant wait 2 c wat sujals reaction is going to be after seeing his phone fly away.
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Posted: 14 years ago
well really cute part
k is like a total bacha..ye prt padke mujhe aao wih karein ki story yaad aagayi jaha aamna ke char ko bache jaisa ladka pasand tha...oh....
aur yaha wo khud hi ekdum waise behave kr rhi hai..well
like their pics also obv..hi jab s-k saath honge to mujhe to pasand aane hi hai..well i also likeeeeeeee balloons....
oh so she actually want to think about us..i mn about dem..;)par ye sujal uff he is irritating me n himself...well so let c ki ab s kya karega well mujhe jo lagta hai wo ye ki sujal shahrukh se kam to nahi to ab wo kaise bhi phone le aayega ...hmm may be shayad nai la payega as..shahrukh to scarf le aaya tha..aur ye to baloons hai to..ummh..
well jo bhi njoy the cuteness of this part..well again i change my perspective to look at this fic so yes i njoyed this part...
well done!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part
Hope Sujal does not get too angry on Kashish for losing his phone..
please continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
🤣 ............. bechari kashish 😆😆......... ab woh toh gayi 😆😆😆😆................ sujal wont leave her 😆😆😆😆😆............ sujal ka phone flying 😆😆😆😆................ now what he will do 😆😆😆😆....hope he doesn't get angry 😆

continue soon 😃


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Posted: 14 years ago
oh my Sujal's mobile in the air....................now hes gonna lose his temper.........................Kashish is just like a child.....................but i too love balloons.................cont soon dear.......................

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