MAYUR FF ~ The Dark Magic ~ - Page 6

WOW.... WOW.... WOW....

hey meahk
u know i was waiting for this update from morning
i know u gonna to update it at night
but mera dil nehi maan rahi thi
main sirf ue chek kar rahi thi kahi mehak ne koi pm kya hai ya nehi
so finally u updated it.........


it was nice update dear
Yessssss i feel really very proud for my nups
she gave birth to this unwanted child- hats off to her

i loved mom-daughter bonding- thier realtion touched my heart.


and i m damn sure her family member didnt support her- thats why she is all alone with her daughter and are facing lots of difficulty.

i really hate maynk frm the core of my heart.
and i want to see him suffer for waht his deed

wonderful update mehak
waiting for ur next update

try to give us a long update(sorry- i think demand kuch jaida he hogaya.LOL )

Wao Mehak Its simply Great

it is awsom.........

i love ur all ffs n dis is briliant n superb......

school mai sach mai boys ayse hote hai? n red alert area is realy normal for rich classes!!!!!!!

yukkkkkkkkkkk

log kehte hai k jama age jarahe hai but actualy piche jarahe haui....

17-18 century mai it was common par later nahi tha ab phirse!!!!!!!! n dis is called modern life!!!!!!!

i hate such kind of modern life.

sory i don't have any sypathy for mayank.
agr mai nupur hoti to kavi use maf nahi karti............hats off to u for such awsom ff

Wow! too good kinza! u write so wel yar!
so mayank is ready to go back and ask fr frgvnes!
plzz continue soon kinzu! ur dangerous idea is too interestng yar!
priya is so cute and she also like the same thngs as her fathr! i hope thy gt togethr soon!

WOW! the way u connected them both although there is no real relation, a connection of one night only. And they both are in 2 different countries too. amazing!! 👏

mehak m simply speechless dumbfound as to say my poor nups kitne sare troublez se guzri hogi wo........again u made me cry mehak i jus hav to admit u hav da best writing skills i hav ever ever imagined......MASHALLAH u shud thnk ALLAH each n everyday for such a precious gift......GOD BLESS U N LUV U

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